OBT Forum

Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
Advanced search  

News:

AU Developers - Please PM Knightmare or MechRat if you need board or permission changes

Pages: 1 2 3 [4] 5   Go Down

Author Topic: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu  (Read 47065 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #45 on: February 10, 2021, 11:00:28 PM »

Sorry about the wait - I am working, but life.
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #46 on: February 10, 2021, 11:12:42 PM »

    “Captain?” asked Ciara.  “Technical training is easy to forget when you aren’t using it constantly.  Remember the problems with the ship’s transit drive?”

  “The ship’s transit drive is your responsibility, Commander.  If neither of you is able to handle your responsibilities, we all suffer for it.  As I told you before.”

  Ciara reacted as if slapped.  Jeremy, not expecting the comment or her reaction to it, looked back to respond to the captain.  “Captain, I assure you-“

  Ciara interrupted him, voice low but intense.  “Is there a problem with the performance of my duties, Captain Lavelle?”

  The unexpected tableau seemed to freeze the officers at the table.  Jeremy trailed to a stop, uncertain what was going on, but clearly this was some point of contention between the two officers.

  “No,” the Captain said shortly.

  “Then I think I’ll retire for the night, with your permission, Sir.”

  “Granted.”

  “Thank you, sir.”  Getting up, she turned and walked briskly out of the dining room of the mess, an attendant opening the hatch for her.

  No point staying and dealing with these people.  I’ll bet he spits when yells, too.

  “Captain, I think I’ll turn in as well.  Excuse me.”

  Getting up from the table and not quite running to the hatch, he didn’t relax when he found Ciara already at the far end of the companionway, her jerky motions clearly angry.  Pissed, actually.  I don’t know what that was about, but I could have lived without the accusation of being incompetent or anti-military.  I wonder what Bob will think about this?

  Seeing one of the guards, Jeff this time, in the companionway waiting for him he nodded and led the way to the head before heading back to their quarters where Greg was waiting outside the hatch.  Saying goodnight to the two men, he took care of the mundane chores of netting some of the items left lying around during the day, checking for messages and laying out clothes for the next day before getting ready to turn in for the night.  Tomorrow was soon enough to deal with all this.


^^^^^^^^^^^^

  “Sir?”

  Looking up to see Bob leading Ciara into the conference room, he smiled.  “Commander?  What can I do for you?”

  “I’ve come to apologize for my behavior last night, sir.”

  Jeremy frowned slightly. Whatever is going on here, it must be important.  “Actually, I’m just headed to the Lounge for my next coffee, Commander.  Would you like to stretch your legs a bit?”
   
  “Of course, sir.”

  Taking his time storing his seat and putting the pads he was consulting back in their places, meeting Bob’s eyes before turning to follow the Commander out the hatch.  “Greg, a little privacy, please?”

  Turning to amble back to the lounge, he looked over at Ciara.  Still pissed.  Not a good sign.  “All right, Commander.  I didn’t think you had anything to apologize for last night, but go ahead.”

  “Sir,” she began.  “I apologize for my behavior toward you and the Captain last night.  I intruded on a private discussion.  It won’t happen again.”

  Umm.

  “I’m afraid I’m rather ignorant of military courtesy, Commander.  Nothing seemed overly significant about last night, other than the Captain and his officers assuming the Scientist Caste was deliberately delaying the AR-15 project.  Which was why I left right after you did.”

  Hearing this, Ciara came to a stop and turned to face him, her tone anxious.  “Did the Captain dismiss you from the table, sir?”

  “No,” Jeremy admitted, turning to face her.  “I’d had enough browbeating and excused myself. Is that an issue?”

  Turning again to resume the slow amble towards the Lounge, he began to wonder just how clever this little inspection tour was. I may have shot myself in the foot.

  “It could be, sir,” Ciara said quietly.  “Sir, I understand you’re new to the Cluster.  Have you spent much time with the rest of the Clan?  Without your guards, outside the Scientist Compound?”

  “I’m afraid not.  I have a feeling this is becoming a personal conversation, Commander,” he said quietly.  “May I call you Ciara?  You can call me ‘Jim’, or ‘Jimmy’ if you prefer.”

  Taking a few more steps, he tried again.  “So.  How bad is it, Ciara?  And what’s going on between you and the Captain, if you don’t mind my asking.”

  Ciara was silent for few more steps of her own before answering.  “It’s bad, Jim.”  [  ;D  Sorry - couldn't resist. RP]

  Reaching the hatch to the Lounge, they got their bulbs of coffee – and a treat for himself – and Jeremy waved wordlessly at one of the empty tables.  Sitting down, it seemed Ciara had decided how to approach the answer.

  “This place is insane, Jim.  Military Autocrats rule over a civilian economy.  Jump- and DropShips manufactured by groups whose education system is so screwed they depend on immigration to help provide people to build and maintain them.  About the only thing the Cluster is independent in is crazies.”

  Jeremy could feel his heart sink as Ciara took a sip of her coffee.  Suddenly concerned, he took a sip of his own to cover his confusion.  Ah, shit.  What have I done now?

  “But one of the worst things is the way the Warrior Caste is kept on top.  You’re aware of how Kerensky’s Clans fight Trials?  Well, that wouldn’t work with the civilians and their control of the economy, so Trials have become more of a ‘Code Duello’ between Clans – and Castes.”

  Ciara took another sip, and Jeremy was left hanging on her every word.  Finally, she put her bulb down and continued.

  “When I arrived in the Cluster, my whole family was taken aside for ‘Cultural Familiarization,” she said, using air quotes around the term.  “I guess you didn’t get any of that?”

  “No,” Jeremy admitted.  “One morning I was going through the briefings for new arrivals and the next thing I know I’m hauled up for an interview with the Kraken Council for some kind of government post.  They wanted an answer immediately, so I said, ‘yes’.”

  “It sounds like they deliberately interrupted the process to snap you up before your qualifications attracted too much attention,” she said quietly.  “That’s illegal, by the way, or at least grounds for a Trial.”

  “Delightful,” Jeremy muttered.  “What now?”

  Ciara took another sip.  “Beg for forgiveness and plead ignorance, I imagine.  I can’t say anything on your behalf – my rank classes me as a Warrior, but I’m tolerated only because of my technical training.  I’m not a ‘real’ Warrior, you see.”

  “Beg?”  He put the bulb down, suddenly very worried.  “I can do that.”

  An officer came into the Lounge, clearly looking for someone, and Ciara waved.

  “If you want my opinion, don’t wait too long.”
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #47 on: February 11, 2021, 11:48:13 PM »

^^^^^^^^^^^^^

  Author’s note; this next bit is heavy on the politics of the New Clans.  Sorry about that.  I’m trying to write it as I type – a new experience for me, I’m afraid.  Since I’m not allowing myself repeated edits, you’re kinda stuck with it.  Yes, I considered a ‘quote from a textbook’ approach, but that isn’t how it worked out.  Enjoy.

^^^^^^^^^^^^

  He found himself waiting to see the Captain for several hours, but after explaining the situation and honestly apologizing for the slight it didn’t quite seem to convince the man of his good intentions.  His anxiety propelled him to continue long after the Captain assured him the mistake was minor and easily forgiven, going so far as to promising to move the AR-15 project to the top of the Caste’s priority list and light the fire the Captain had suggested under them to pressure the team to move quickly.

  Finally, the Captain had told him to go away in no uncertain terms, and rather than make the situation worse, he had gone back to his quarters to worry.  He considered leaving the ship before he made matters worse, but decided to simply lie low for the rest of the trip rather than risk insulting the Captain anew.  Speaking privately with Bob and Greg, they both agreed the Captain was probably willing to ignore it given the circumstances, and the three of them agreed finishing the immigration process as soon as possible was his best bet to learn how not to deepen the mess he was in.  Surprisingly, the complete series of immigration briefings were available in the Ship’s computer, and Jeremy made it a point to stay in his quarters for the next couple of days reading and watching the material, eventually strapping himself into his chair as Kraken’s acceleration began to taper off.

  The federally designed program provided a workbook to go along with the courses and as the Jump Warning sounded and announced a Jump was imminent, he found himself nearly finished.  Reviews and exams were almost the only things remaining of the course, and he found himself nearly sorry it was over.  Well, at least it will be soon.

  Leaning back and waiting for the Jump, he had to admit the material was fascinating.  No wonder they joke about Petri dishes and compost, he thought as he stretched arms and legs sore from staying at the desk for so long.  The whole Cluster is one big compromise.

  Segments like the Cluster’s Civilian Charter spelled out the rights of civilians under both the Civilian Government and how they related to relations with the New Clans, and the difference was enough to make him shiver.  The months leading up to the decision to leave Wake on a tour of Scientist-run facilities had been like dancing in a minefield he hadn’t known about, depending on others to interface with the rest of society.  Bob in particular had been squeezed into a corner, working with the KPA and Caste authorities to carry out policy handed down by his boss, who had no idea what he was asking for and had the ability to effectively banish Bob in a fit of pique if it wasn’t done to his satisfaction.

  Looking back on it, it explained Dr. Szech’s behavior as well.  When the Wolverines had ‘Spawned’ the First Clans in an effort to preserve the assets of the colony expedition they had accompanied to the Cluster, they had simultaneously rid themselves of most of the political pressure to preserve the Warrior Caste’s authority and provided an incentive for them to try and meet the remaining colonists half-way as they tried to absorb the most valuable civilians to enrich themselves.  He found himself thankful Sara McEvedy had apparently refused to use Kerensky’s methods of dealing with a similar situation in the Kerensky Cluster.

I imagine it must have been something similar to what it was like in the Inner Sphere during the Clan Invasion, none of the Castes or civilians having any idea how to work together. They must have been livid at the need to support immigration from the Inner Sphere, too, given how McEvedy’s successor had announced the Second Clans.

  Within fifty years, IlClan Wolverine was a flaming liberal compared to the more conservative First Clans, rapidly recovering in terms of population and industrial growth with the bulk of immigration benefiting them.  The call to Spawn a second line of Clans to oppose Kerensky’s forces should they be pursued and discovered had effectively set them back heavily in terms of population and industrial assets, and while they had kept the majority of modern military equipment concentrated in their hands they had been forced to turn to Primitive technology to provide the Second Clans with the means to protect themselves in a military society.

    The Sonoma Accord, proposed and rammed through the Legacy Grand Council by those Clans, declared their capital worlds off-limits to Trials leaving the First Clans struggling to provide the basics for themselves when the opportunity to declare Trials for supplies and equipment they no longer possessed was restricted to the original worlds of the Cluster and the so-called ‘Faction Worlds’ that had sprung up since.

Now that must have been a bitter pill for the Warrior Castes of the First Clans to accept.  I’d wager the Second Clans are just as flaming liberal, given the need to appeal to immigrants to grow their populations and economy.  Just my luck to be adopted into one of the few to guarantee the ‘inalienable right of the Warrior to lead and defend their society.’  The hardliners must know they’re going to be overwhelmed economically eventually.  I wonder if that’s the real reason the Krakens are constructing a fleet.

  As the thirty-second countdown began, he shook his head.  He had no control over the grand strategies of the New Clans, only a fraction over his own, and didn’t even control all of his own Caste.  Right now, his job was to finish the immigration briefs, read the book of Naval etiquette Bob had found for him and hopefully put another blunder behind him.  But as the countdown crept closer to zero, he found himself wishing he had chosen one of the more liberal groups of the Cluster.
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #48 on: February 11, 2021, 11:50:08 PM »

A quick question; how am I doing?  What am I doing wrong?  I see lots of views but can't tell if its just people realizing its terrible and ignoring it or like it.
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #49 on: February 12, 2021, 11:31:21 PM »

  The Hyperspace Jump was the normal non-event, leaving him slightly dizzy and nauseated for a few minutes, and he found himself falling asleep in the chair for the lock-down period as the crew confirmed it was safe to trigger the Capacitor for a second Jump.  An abbreviated countdown began again, and the Jump brought them to a colonized system this time, where according to the itinerary given to him a charging station would begin the task of charging the capacitor as the Jumpsail deployed to charge the battery.  Looking with distaste at the remainder of the briefs, he decided to get up and move around to dispel the aches and pains of sitting at a desk, walking aimlessly around the ship with Jeff in tow.

  Finally, he decided to turn in early again.  Zero-G was difficult for him to relax in and the information in the briefs had been a trifle depressing, as well as having been a restless sleeper the last few nights since the latest incident.  One more day to review and write the exams, and hopefully one of the Merchant Caste’s couriers would catch up with them to give them some new information to work on during the trip.


^^^^^^^^^^^^

  Having awoken early and finished the rest of his paperwork by mid-morning, he took a moment to pass on a  message to the Captain informing him of the fact before confirming with Bob the information they had been waiting for had arrived.

  Finally!  I don’t know how Greg and his team manage to deal with the boredom, he thought as he helped Bob reverse the encryption and turn the digital files into something they could work with.  I’ve been bored on long trips before, but altogether I think this trip is worse than the ‘Freedom Train’ voyage from the Inner Sphere.

  Still, there were some intriguing tidbits that made him decide to make the now-familiar trip to the lounge now rather than later.  Several of the original authors had continued their research or experiments out of personal curiosity and seemed willing to resubmit proposals.  Even the keyword search of K-F data from the PD had caught up to them, although the sheer number of pads required for the documents left them in their own little box under the table.
 
  Best to return some of these soon, he thought as he and Greg returned and began passing bulbs around to the security team.  Taking Bob’s inside with him he started reading the oldest and least updated pads first, and by the time Greg’s shift ended three proposals were added to the courier list to begin peer review by staff at the Wake Compound with a single proposal eliminated as unsuitable due to a cost/benefit analysis before leaving with Bob and Jeff for a late meal in the lounge, encouraged by a good finish to the day.

  His day improved further as Ciara came in with her skinsuit and customary brisk walk, clearly looking for someone and came over to the table, reaching into the sling for her helmet to pull a pad out of the stretchy material.

  “Commander,” he said, smiling upwards from the chair.  “What can I do for you?”

  Ciaras face was serious as she handed him the pad.  “Sir, I’d like to petition for transfer to the Scientist Caste.”

  Jeremy felt his eyebrows rise in surprise.  According to the briefings still reasonably fresh in his mind, transfers between Castes required the approval of both Castes, making them a reasonably rare occurrence.  Across the table, Bob seemed surprised.  Checking the pad, he was unsurprised to find she had approached him first.

  “Well,” he said, stalling for time.  “This will be my first time dealing with the issue, Commander.  Do you have a moment?”

  Seeing her hesitate, he held up a hand.  “I’m aboard for the next several weeks as you know.  Why not deal with this the next time we Jump?  You said you normally schedule yourself off-duty due to your TDS – that sounds like a good time to talk further.  In the meantime, I’m sure Bob’s dealt with this before, and the two of us will have time to deal with it as we wait for more data to go through our proposals.”

  Relief firmed Ciara’s face, and she nodded, clearly more comfortable with the idea.  “Thank you, sir.  I’d like that.”

  He nodded.  “I remember reading your file before talking with you the last time I was aboard.  I don’t think you’ll have any trouble, especially if you brought your technical library with you and you’re still keeping yourself up to date.”

  He hesitated a bit, but continued.  “…I presume you’ve been considering this for some time?  May I ask why?”

  Ciara grimaced, clearly unhappy, but nodded.  “It’s not like I imagined, basically.  I think I’d appreciate a change of scene,” she said evasively.

  Damn.  Well, I don’t want to know.

  Nodding back, he handed it to Jeff to deal with.  “We’ll have to run it through the federal administrative service if I remember the course correctly.  I’ll have it added to the documents for the next courier we find if everything checks out.”

  “Thank you, sir,” she said, looking relieved.  “Excuse me.”

Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #50 on: February 13, 2021, 11:11:53 PM »

Sorry, this next bit is turning out to be harder than I thought.  I'm trying to do it in a realistic way (in a fictional universe.  I know.) but it isn't working very well.
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #51 on: February 15, 2021, 02:09:33 AM »

^^^^^^^^^^^^

  A day and a half later, eight more proposals were set aside for further examination with six others denied for various reasons, although at least one author claimed to have continued researching his proposal and had agreed to re-submit it when he was ready, and the latest Merchant-Class courier had just Jumped into the system as Kraken was preparing to depart.

  Ciara had been reticent to discuss her decision, but eventually decided to make time for their discussion, if only to take advantage of the Forecast’s arrival to get it out of the way so she could forward the paperwork to the saKhan quickly.  The young woman had experienced a combination of factors that contributed to the decision, but the constant threat of a Trial declared over a situation or decision had finally pushed her over the edge.

  Finally, she had finished the interview and had gone onto the skin of the ship to enjoy the solitude and vista of the stars.  Curious, Jeremy had accompanied her, and the two of them were enjoying the opportunity to see the stars up close and get to know each other.

  “Has Forecast acknowledged receipt, Bob?”

  Strapped into his chair in the conference room until the Kraken Jumped out of the system, Bob’s voice came through Jeremy’s headset perfectly.  “Yep.  They’re headed for Wake, so they should be able to get there by the time we arrive at Motte and the Heartforge facility.  Are you inside yet?”

  “Ciara’s having trouble with the lock.”

  “Jim, times running out – we’re on lock down right now.”

  “Maybe you should go ahead and call the captain, ask for a delay to Jump.  Ciara and I are still out here on the hull.”

  Ciara turned from the lock, interrupting the conversation.  “Something’s wrong with the lock.  We need to contact the Captain and get them to cancel the Jump.”

  “I’ll get on it right away”, Bob said sharply, reaching toward the screen.

  “NO!,” snapped Ciara.  “I can’t reach anybody with suit comms.  Have one of the security team use theirs, get them to stop the Jump!”

  “Oh,” he said, jerking his hand back.  “Right.  Be right back.”

  With that done, Ciara moved to the inspection port to open it up and begin checking connections and diagnostics.

“Anything?”

  “Its turned off…  There’s no power to the lock!”

  “How did that happen?”

  “I don’t know!  Airlocks have a backup power system – it should be impossible.”

  Jeremy could feel his body tense, moving closer to the lock to try and look over Ciara’s shoulder.  “Can you fix it?”

  “There’s nothing to fix.  Give me a hand, here.  Brace and pull this handle!”

  Jeremy and Ciara braced their feet on opposite sides of the inspection port, pulling on the handle.  As it slowly came out, it finally locked, spilling out an invisible blast of air that caught Jeremy by surprise, magnetic boots loosing contact with the hull as the explosive decompression buffeted him.  Spiraling into the void, he started screaming over the radio, flailing for the security line connected to the hull until the line reached its end and swung him back towards the hull.

  Nooo!  Shit, shit, shit…  Striking the hull was bad enough and his left arm took the brunt of the impact, bouncing off the hull and drifting back into space as the line twisted crazily around and behind him was even worse.  Strike that – my arm hurts.  Shit!

  The ship and stars took turns filling his view as he tumbled, and the jerk as he reached the end again caused his shoulder to flare in pain.  He did manage to grip the line in his good hand, trying to remember the lessons months ago on how to handle the situation.  His arm hurt, but he was able to grip the line tightly in the hand and give a gentle pull with his good arm to pull himself towards the ship and the end of the line.

  “Ciara!  Ciara!  Bob!”

As the line tightened and the ship came into view – albeit turning crazily – he saw Ciara watching him, pointing at her chest. 

Shit!

  Trusting his right to hold the line, he gently pulled another short length of the line towards him, transferring it to his other hand and focused on the small mirror at the top of his visor, fumbling with a small handle on his chest before finally being able to pull it out to the stop.  A dim red LED light came to life on his chest, blinking in time to the independent emergency radio blasting out the millennia-old distress signal of Morse code.  Not daring to stop, he took another length of the safety line and kept up the slow, gentle motions that started to become easier as his momentum towards the ship grew.

  The ship continued to grow in his vision, and Ciara’s voice suddenly cut into the labored breathing and grunts of pain as the injured arm was pulled back and forth across his body.

  “Jim!  Come in!”

  “I’m here.  Sorry-”

  “Don’t worry about that – you need to get closer to the hull!  We’re about to Jump!”

  Shit, shit, shit…!

  “Brace!”, Bob’s voice came over the channel.  “Five-Four-Three-Two-Jump!”

  With the warning, he took the line in both hands and gave a yank that hurt his shoulder enough to numb the hand, but gave him enough slack to wrap the line around his left and clamp down on it as hard as he could.

  When it came, he felt the Jump like nothing he had experienced before.


*edit- Confused left and right.
« Last Edit: February 17, 2021, 01:35:29 AM by Red Pins »
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #52 on: February 17, 2021, 01:54:45 AM »

^^^^^^^^^^^^
DISCONTINUITY

___DARKNESS, THE SINGLE SOURCE OF LIGHT AHEAD, DESPERATE TO MOVE, RUN, ESCAPE FROM THE SHADOWY SHAPES ALL AROUND HIM ___

___SOMETHING NEARBY, FIGHTING HIM, REACHING FOR THE LIGHT___

___FEAR___

___REACH THE LIGHT___

DISCONTINUITY


  The shock of reality, reinforced by the bruising impact on his head and shoulders and the resulting flare of pain was accompanied by the sudden, all-consuming sense of vertigo and the jet of vomit spouting from his mouth, splashing his face, plugging his nostrils and getting in his eyes – the sudden roar in his ear as the air circulation snapped to full power, as he remembered where he was and fought stay calm, to aim the next jet at the narrow opening at the bottom of the helmet.

  He felt the burning in his eyes, where he hadn’t been fast enough to close them, the feel of the vomit being pulled off his skin into the air circulator to be trapped, and the sudden tug on the line as someone – Ciara? – pulled on it.  The next jet from his rapidly-emptying stomach was smaller, more easily managed by the air circulator, but the burning in his eyes was getting worse.

  “Jim!”

  “I’m,” said, interrupted by a series of dry heaves.  “Trying!”

  I’m not going to die here, he thought, slowly getting a grip on himself and trying to reason out a strategy to save himself.  Not unless I kill myself doing something stupid.  Break it down.  Reason it out.  What do I do first?  Clean my helmet.

  The suit was designed for amateurs, with extra features for the situations they might be expected to encounter.  Forcing himself to hold the reflexive urge to continue vomiting, he reached up with his good hand and settled the thumb of the bulky glove into a grove in the helmet before pushing down with the index finger, hearing a slight whine as a small electric motor turned a small pin inside the helmet.  Waiting for the sound to end before checking the viewport again, he saw a clean – Mostly clean – viewport before squeezing his eyes shut again.

  For God’s sake, don’t puke.  Can’t be much left, anyway. Now – get back to the hull before the line snaps.

  Forcing his eyes open, he found the line, floating in a tangle in front of him, and the hull of the ship slowly spinning into view beyond it.  Vertigo nearly overwhelmed him, and another, mercifully smaller stream of vomit missed most of the viewport.  Not going to be able to use it much, anyway.

  Grabbing the line with his good hand, he pulled the snarled line until it was taunt and grasped with both hands, closing his eyes against the pain in his arm and the burning sensation in his eyes while beginning the slow, smooth motions to pull himself closer to the end of the line.

  I don’t need to reach the end, just to get the boots close to the hull.  Make the spin work for me…

  Forcing himself to open his eyes again to calculate the slow spin, he forced his legs up at the hips and kicked forward while pulling strongly on the line, pulling more of the tangled line towards him but left his boots no closer to the hull.

  “Jim!  Hold still!”

  Hearing Ciara’s voice, he froze as his rotation slowly brought her into view, then felt the impact on one of his legs as she caught the line and fought his momentum for a second before releasing him.

  Blinking to relieve the burning in his eyes, he snapped, “Don’t break your grip!  Can you shorten the line?”

  Seeing her reach for the crazily twisting line, he gave up reeling in the line so as not to disturb its motion and cause her to miss it.

  “Got it!”

  Closing his eyes against the burning again, he continued the slow, gentle pull that would bring Ciara into reach.  With both of them using the slow, gentle motion it was only a minute or two before his spin brought him crashing into Ciara and with her help he planted his feet on the hull again.

  Problem solved.  What now?  -Where’s Bob?

  “Ciara – what happened to Bob?”

  “He’s not answering.  No one’s answering!  I need your help with the lever!”

  With the taunt line still in hand, he tried opening his eyes and orienting himself to the hatch only to almost lose the tenuous hold on his abused stomach muscles as the vertigo returned and forced him to close his eyes.  You aren’t going to die here, unless you do something stupid.  Think first.

  “I’m going to need help to walk there,” he said tightly, as a thought struck him.  “How are you doing?”

  “Thank god and chemistry for dralaxine.  Here,” she said as she began to turn him to face slightly to one side.  “Keep the line taunt, move one foot at a time.”

  Keeping the steady grip in his bad arm and reaching out with the good one, he carefully broke the contact with one boot as he pulled himself ahead and unsteadily slid it forward, pulling the other boot behind him.  What else can go wrong?  -shit.

  “Wait, weren’t we scheduled for a double Jump?”

  “I know.  Which is why we need to open the lock.”

  “How long-”

  “Minutes.  Can you move faster?”

  Move faster.  Think.  Shit.

  “No.  Can you?”

  “Yeah, but I can’t move the lever alone.”

  Forcing his eye open despite the pain and clamping down on his rising gorge, he grated, “I’m going to unclamp my boots.  Tell me when to stop, guide me to the lever.”

  Taking a strong grip on the line, he deliberately kicked off the deck before Ciara could stop him, giving the line a strong yank, depending on Ciara to support him as he kept reaching out and pulling the line as fast as he could.

  “Stop!” The sudden stop and jostling from the impact of his boots on the deck threatened his control again, and he kept his eyes squeezed shut to try and lessen the effect of the vertigo as he forced himself to control it.

  “Give me your hand.”

  As Ciara tried taking the injured arm, he hissed in pain.  “Not that one, use the other one.”

  Jeremy let her turn him slightly, risking a quick look at the deck to find the spot.  Ok.  Mostly done.  What now?  “What’s wrong with the lever?”

  “I-  Shit,” Ciara  “I didn’t look.  Just a sec.”

  Think ahead.  What’s the worst thing that could happen?  Got it.  Carefully looping and twisting the line, he pushed a loop through the – he thought of it as a carabiner, but couldn’t remember what it was called right now – carabiner to shorten the line enough to keep him nearer to the deck.  Steadying himself on Ciara’s shoulder, he carefully bent and reached out to grasp the handle and gently settle himself on the lip, parallel to the hull, feeling something give and the end of the lever pinch his fingers against the edge of the inspection port.

  “Ciara?  Something just gave.”

  “What-?  What the hell?”

  Risking opening his eyes again, he found the vertigo lessened, although the burning in his eyes was as painful as ever.  A small, jagged piece of wiring was slowly spiraling upwards from the bottom of the lever.  “Did I break something?”

  “No,” Ciara said grimly.  “You cleared it.  It should work now, try it.”

  Can I?  Kind of.  What else could kill me here?  “Brace my other side.”

  As Ciara moved to brace him, he looked for the small mirror at the top of the helmet to check the oxygen capacity remaining and comparing it to his best guess how long they had been out here.  Eight hour tank – half an hour or so of stargazing, another half an hour between trying to open the lock and stop the Jump, fifteen minutes working on the lock before we Jumped.  I must have burned a lot after being blown free of the lock, still most of the tank left.  Wait -

  “Ciara – what’s left in your tanks?”

  “Just short of three hours.  This should be over by then.  Get started.”

  With Ciara bracing him and the obstruction free of the lever, he started to pull it out- and down, clenching the handle firmly to close the jaws on the cable slowly opening the doors.

  I’m going to need her help to get in, he realized. If we jump, I might REALLY regret it.

  “Get in,” he grunted.  “As soon as you can.  Tether yourself in the lock, take some of mine and secure it.  You’re going to have to pull me in.  If we Jump…”

  “Right.  Brace on the door?”

  “I’ll try.”  With the door partially open, he gingerly reached out and gripped the edge, testing it before telling her, “Go!”

  Ciara’s slim skinsuit was still slightly too wide for the opening, and Jeremy found himself slowing as the effort of using the lever began to tell on him.  Moving his hand up the edge of the door towards his shoulder hurt more, but gave him more leverage.  Six of one, half a dozen of the other, he thought, as he tried to keep a steady pace.  A few more pumps, and Ciara was suddenly in the lock, his line tugging as she secured it.  Trying to turn and judge the opening, he gave himself a break long enough to carefully shuffle over and try the opening, bracing the back of the suit against the edge of the lock and trying to squeeze through.

  About four inches or so.  Shit.  Well, I wanted to lose weight anyway.  That would have been too easy.  Glancing into the lock as he shuffled back to the lever, he thought he saw Ciara looking into what must have been the identical inspection port inside.

  “Ciara?  What’s wrong?”

  “Nothing, this one’s clear.  I’m starting to check the wiring.  Almost done?”

  “Another couple inches.”

  Shuffling to the handle he put the hand of his suit up against the frame of the lock, fixing his eyes on the grain of the metal and began working the lever like a metronome, trying to open the lock just enough. Insurance?  Shrugging mentally, he gave the lever one – two – three pumps and turned to shuffle for the door.

“Ciara!  Give me a hand, here.”

  Pushing the injured arm in to help pull himself through the door, he saw Ciara reaching for the carabiner to pull the line out.  Waiting impatiently to give her the slack she needed, he tried forcing himself through the door as Ciara went back to the inspection port and braced herself on a convenient handle to work the lever herself.

  What now…?  Can we get power?

  With an obvious effort, she started slowly pumping the lever.  One.  Two.  Three.  The fourth pull was the one to let him slip into the lock.  “I’ve got this, check the wiring.  It’d be nice to press a button and get out of here.”

  Taking his place in front of the lever, he braced himself to push up and in, closing the door, but never got the chance as time finally ran out.

DISCONTINUITY
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #53 on: February 17, 2021, 01:58:01 AM »

Wow, that was tough.  I've been keeping notes in the bottom of the Word document, but made some errors I had to correct when I copy-pasted, like the injured arm.  Four and a half pages of text, took quite a while.  Might skip tomorrow, got some chores.
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #54 on: February 19, 2021, 01:12:29 AM »

DISCONTINUITY

___SHRIEKING, ATONAL WHALESONG___

___CIARA SMILING UP AT HIM SLIDING THE RING ONTO HIS FINGER___

___DISCORDANT, DISSONANT RAGE AND HUNGER___

___JENNY MCCLOCKLIN PUNCHING HIM IN THE TUMMY ON THE PLAYGROUND___

___RINGING, ECHOING SCREAMS OF FURY AND HATE___

___DJS-X-1 EJECTING JUMP PYLONS AS FIELD STRENGTH REACHES MAXIMUM___

___BIZARRE, DISORIENTING SHAPES AND REFLECTIONS___

___WATCHING THE SHOCKWAVES OF HIS INVENTION PROPAGATE ACROSS A DOOMED WORLD___

___ERRATIC, FITFUL BUT DELIBERATE MOVEMENT___

DISCONTINUITY


^^^^^^^^^^^^

  Drowsy but conscious, he came to, opening his eyes and struggling briefly with the familiar restraints of a ship adrift in space before realizing he was out of the suit and in some kind of medical facility.

  Infirmary, I think they called it.  Ciara must have gotten us in.

  Closing his eyes and going limp with relief in the restraints, he winced at the burning in his eyes and the faint pounding in his head, carefully opening his eyes and turning his head to look around.  Needles and tubes at his wrist and some kind of brace at his shoulder, dim lighting and an empty bunk across a narrow compartment were the only things in sight – with nothing better to do, he tried to relax and go back to sleep.  Better to pass the time asleep than suffer, after all.


^^^^^^^^^^^^

  “Sir?  Can you hear me?”

  Blinking his eyes as he came awake to the gentle hand on his chest the pain was a faint ache in his neck and shoulder as he opened his eyes to look up at the corpsman, and although his eyes felt itchy and a bit blurry it wasn’t enough to force him to close them.

  “...Yeah.  What happened?  How long was I out?”

  “Any symptoms of TDS or jump sickness?”  The corpsman began a businesslike examination, checking eyes and taking the stethoscope from around his neck to put against his chest.  “Any allergies?  Deep breaths, please.”

  He hesitated, not sure how he wanted to handle this.  “No,” he temporized.  “And no allergies I know of.” 

  “It looks like you managed to get off with a light sprain and some eye irritation, sir.  No signs of heart arrhythmia or psychosis.  You had some bleeding from your nose, and once we were able to take off your helmet you were sedated to keep you under for about eight hours to help you recover.  Are you suffering any nausea or disorientation?”

  At his cautious shake of his head, the corpsman continued.  “The Chief managed to set off an alarm in the lock, sir.  DC parties found you drifting unconscious and the Chief suffering from TDS irritated from riding the hull during the Jump, but her medication helped protect her from suffering the symptoms until the two of you were in the lock.  She was only semi-conscious when they got you out.”

  “Where is she?”

  “Resting in her quarters, sir.  She and your aide left a request to talk to them when you woke up.  Can you sit up?”

  He nodded, waiting for the man to release the chest and arm straps keeping him immobilized while he was asleep.  Removing the straps and tucking them off to one side he had Jeremy sit up before lifting the bed to allow him to sit up before re-attaching the chest strap.  Taking a small, corded handset and pressing a combination into the keypad, he started to leave the compartment.

  “I’ll be just a moment getting you some medication, sir.  Headache?  Shoulder hurt?”

  At Jeremy’s nod, he left the compartment, presumably for medication, ostensibly for privacy.

Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #55 on: February 19, 2021, 01:15:49 AM »

For a page and a half, that was rough.  Took forever, too.  I'm not very good at the hesaid-hesaid kind of thing, but I had to break the rule on editing a couple times, tweaking until I found something I could accept.  Best I could do, anyway.
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #56 on: February 19, 2021, 08:43:42 PM »

  “Murphy.”

  “Commander, its Jimmy.  How are you doing?”

  Ciara’s pause was worrying; clearly, she felt a simple, ‘fine’ inadequate.

  “I’ll live.  But I’m on sick call for the next couple days.  My naval career is over,” she finally said.  “I was already on the edge of being declared ineligible based on the existing trauma, but this will push me over the edge.”

  “I’m…  Sorry, Commander.”

  “Its all right.  How are you?”

  “Sore.  Headache and sprained shoulder.  I seem to have been sedated long enough to avoid the worst of it.”

  Another awkward pause.

  “What did you experience during the Jump?  Did you see anything?  Hear anything?”

  Jeremy was taken aback slightly.  “That’s oddly specific, Commander,” he said evenly.  “Why do you need to know?”

  “I heard the Choir when I was sixteen, sir.  Don’t tell anyone if you have.  Did you?”

  A careful glance and a second to listen carefully was enough to convince him he was alone, at least for now.  “Yes,” he admitted quietly.  “I haven’t said anything yet.  It was rather…  Overwhelming.”

  Ciara gave a soft sigh.  “I thought so.  Visions?  What of?”

  “Yes.  I’m…  Not sure.  You say you heard something when you were younger?”

  This time, he distinctly heard the sound of vomiting. My God, how bad is it?   

  “Ciara?  Ciara,” he said quickly.  “Why don’t you contact me later, when you’re feeling better?”

  “No, wait,” Ciara snapped between heaves.

  It took a few minutes to end, Jeremy beginning to feel uncomfortable listening to the obvious misery on the other end of the line.

  “Have you spoken to the Master-at-arms?”

  “No,” he said.  “Should I?”

  “I don’t know, do you want to find out why we were left on the hull to die?  I do.  You’re the Chief Scientist, throw your weight around a bit and find out.”

  “All right,” he said quickly.  “I’ll see what I can do.  Call me when you feel better, alright?”

  He was speaking to clicks and dead air as Ciara cut the line. I really don’t envy her.  I hope I’m not affected that badly, but I think this trip is over.

  The corpsman seemed to take that as his cue, knocking on the hatch to the compartment and opening it.

  “Sir, if you feel up to it you have a visitor,” he said as he offered a small paper cup of medications and a bulb of water.  “Take these,” he said handing the cup and bulb to Jeremy before offering a pair of pill cases.

  “And take these if you need them.  You can come back for more if you run out before you disembark.  Finish that,” he added, nodding to the bulb as he moved around the compartment.  “Drink plenty of fluids and rest your shoulder.  Look into physiotherapy at some point, or you might have some complications down the road.”

  The corpsman took a few minutes taking out the IV, brought out a pair of deck boots and jump suit, and then exited the compartment.

  “Good morning, sir.  Master-at-arms Crawford, sir.  I’d like to speak to you about the accident.”

Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #57 on: February 22, 2021, 12:33:06 AM »

  Jeremy could feel a scowl forming on his face as his next visitor walked through the hatch and began strapping into a chair.  “‘Accident’?”



<Chapter 4>

  Quarters aboard the CKS Merger were a step down, but the Jumpship was two Jumps away from home and, well, sacrifices had to be made for a full 30 LY Jump.  Besides, Captain Hagman had been remarkably petty when it turned out none of the native-born officers aboard had the qualifications to replace Star Commander Murphy.  Something she had been rather smug about.

  Waiting for the Merchant and its pair of Dropships, Good Deal and Gone Bust, had been boring and hectic by turns as data was transmitted to the new ship and personal belongings packed, but Ciara had also been forced to pack up a small laboratory she had been working with in her off hours.  Navigating the maze of bureaucracy with Bob and Ciara to get her transferred from her Caste was…

  Well.  The Captain was unhappy to have lost a qualified officer and only the fact he was able to intercede for ‘humanitarian reasons’ to keep her experiencing as few Jumps as possible allowed her to avoid serving for the remainder of the mission until the Kraken returned to Wake.  It had been a case of finding paperwork, convincing the Captain and his officers to cooperate, and he had refused to delay the next Jump beyond the bare minimum.

  Ciara had been oddly non-committal during the arguments on her behalf, and he found himself looking at her expectantly, given her response to the insinuation at the Captain’s dinner.  When more of the data he and Bob had been waiting for arrived just before leaving, they had played ‘hot potato’ with the data as the Merger had to get the data transferred from the Kraken before Jumping.

  Eventually things had died down, and the two found themselves discussing their experiences aboard the Kraken.  They had stayed up late indulging in a bit of bootleg Screech she had brought with her – diluted to something that wasn’t going to smash them flat immediately - and she had confided a few things that made his own experiences during the ‘accident’ seem fairly ordinary.  She had also been moving through a completely different society, where circumstances were different and experiences were shared among others with the condition.

  For example, Ciara had confirmed that most of the people who experienced exposed Jumps suffered from TDS afterward.  She had also revealed that the best Jump navigators had developed what they termed “an affinity’ for calculating and forecasting them, to the point people would deliberately expose themselves repeatedly seeking to enhance their reputation.  Personally, he found the concept absurd, but Ciara insisted.

  The ‘visions’ haed been more problematic.  The experience was something he would not, no, could  not forget, but he had shied away from discussing them until he was drunk enough to either lower his inhibitions against involving himself with a subordinate or discuss the astounding potential outcomes of a career he had considered ruined after the events on New Avalon that had prompted him to flee to the Outback and then volunteer for the one-way trip to an unknown destination deeper into the Periphery in the hope of escaping his pursuers.

  He had been relieved when Ciara had dismissed it with a wave of giggles, spilling her drink and rolling on the floor of the cargo deck where they had hidden to talk privately, although the experience had dented his male ego.  Conversely, he had eventually convinced her to stop giggling long enough to change the topic, and ruthlessly dragged the subject of her proposal out of her.  She had proposed experiments that took advantage of the New Clan ‘black box’ technology to try and identify possible lines of research which might lead to improved K-F drives, but the expense had seemed insurmountable.  Since their discussion aboard the Kraken, however, she had become obsessed with new methods of ship construction, producing poured, shaped, or encased components with a variety of substances.

  Several of her experiments had shown unexpected outcomes, and his description of the drone he had witnessed in his vision had excited her before the two of them had eventually collapsed in a drunken stupor to be found ‘spooning’ by the crew hours later as the ship prepared to Jump.   The experience had certainly driven home the idea of avoiding Jumps as much as possible, as they had made the Jump sedated in the Merger’s infirmary with massive doses of Dralaxine and precautions to prevent drowning in their own vomit and feces.

  Waking eight hours later the pain had been significant, but chemistry had eventually allowed him to walk out of the compartment and fervently wish for a real shower to cleanse himself after the experience.  He had experienced none of the discomfort or psychosis he associated with the last series of Jumps, but Ciara had insisted on remaining conscious for the experience to confirm her own belief that the event had effectively ended her naval career.  Apparently the diagnosis adequately confirmed her suspicions sufficiently that even the corpsman had appeared slightly nauseous.

  Beyond documenting the results in reports for the saKhan and the rest of the bureaucrats involved, he had no desire to involve himself in the details.  Waiting for her to be released while the crew prepared for the next Jump, he and Bob had continued with the business of running the Caste, but he found it difficult to concentrate on the work.  Hopefully, the next Jump would end with his fervent oath to never board another Jumpship.

^^^^^^^^^^^^

  Crap.  Never. Again.

  He and Ciara had transferred to the Good Deal before the Jump to hook themselves up the limited medical facilities on the Dropship, for all the good it had done.  His own experience had been…  Difficult.  Remaining conscious for the experience had been a mistake, even pumped full of Dralaxine and analgesics.  The vertigo, vomiting and nausea had been bad enough but the auditory and visual psychosis had returned, and the ‘Choir’ had been the least of it.  The visual stimuli had run gamut of somehow linking him to a failed coup attempt, another glint of a relationship with Ciara, experiencing some kind of animal attack, and another piece of some kind of scientific advancement in the process of going wrong.

  Ciara had agreed to sedation and was still in the Dropship’s Infirmary, having found or rigged some kind of half-mask that with the catheter from her skinsuit allowed her a trace of modesty, although the suit’s containment had been bypassed to allow for the volume recorded from her last Jump.  His symptoms had lasted long enough to complicate the trip from L2 to final approach necessitating airsick bags and anti-nausea medication but he had been firm when requesting she be kept sedated for two of Wake’s 25.3 hours days before allowing her to waken. 

  Well, she had been cashiered for TDS, may as well play it up and spare her some of the misery.

  As the Dropship was grounded for the next couple weeks at least as crew took ‘grav leave’ to help fend off bone and muscle loss , he had requested permission for the two of them to remain on board to help reduce the effect of their TDS.  He had considered leaving Ciara here to convalesce alone, but couldn’t bring himself to try moving into new quarters in Wake’s Scientist Compound while he was still feeling slightly disoriented and dealing with more bouts of nausea and vertigo.

  Still, he couldn’t put off the eventual welcome to Wake’s Scientist Compound any longer, and if he felt much better he couldn’t help feeling that he was abandoning Ciara while she still had a day and a half to recover alone before reporting to the Compound for orientation and reassignment.

  “I’ll have Bob arrange something temporary for the rest of the week.  Where you go after that is out of my hands after that, but you can contact me if you need something,” he said quietly into the comm.

  “Thanks,” came back Ciara’s low whisper.

  “Think nothing of it Miss Murphy.  Good bye, and good luck.”

  Ending the call, he took a few seconds to assemble his small bag of clothes and medications, then made his way through the ship to formally debark and arrange for a ride to the Compound and his new quarters. 
Logged

Red Pins

  • KU Player
  • Generalmajor
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 825
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #58 on: February 22, 2021, 12:34:06 AM »

Hey guys, the story continues on the OF.  For how long, I have no idea.
Logged

Takiro

  • General
  • *
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 10,175
  • For the Last Cameron!
Re: The (theoretical) War Crimes of Jimmy Chu
« Reply #59 on: February 22, 2021, 08:13:35 AM »

Good luck RP! Update us from time to time. ;)
Logged
Pages: 1 2 3 [4] 5   Go Up