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Updated Hooded Eagle Fluff
« on: March 12, 2018, 10:39:58 PM »

OVERVIEW AND CAPABILITIES

While the origins of the Hooded Eagle predate the so-called "Hellion Surge" by several decades, the design remained only a computer simulation.  It took the Hellion introduction of new OmniMechs in the aftermath of the Dragoon Compromise to spur Clan Goliath Scorpion to turn the Hooded Eagle (and other OmniMechs) from computer simulation possibilities into reality.

Introduced in 2948, the Ice Ferret (itself based upon the Clan Ice Hellion Wolf Hunter design) would quickly become the medium-weight OmniMech of choice of Clan Wolf.  As a close ally, Clan Goliath Scorpion acquired many examples of this design . . . but the Scorpion Warrior caste found several flaws with the Wolf design.

The two fixed double-strength heat sinks banked within the engine core were often superfluous . . . which only exacerbated the meager pod-space of 9.5 tons available for weapons!  Although the armor protection was considered quite good, it could be better; on the other hand, mobility and ground speed were superb.

In 2984, a group of Scorpion Warriors and Scientists began to work on a project to improve the Ice Ferret.  The extraneous cooling units were removed and armor protection was increased to eight full tons of ferro-fibrous plating (for 100% of the maximum possible protection on a 45-ton chassis).  This increased available pod-space to 11.0 tons.

But the project (CGS-45/O-8/2) was shelved despite the theoretical suppority to the existing Ice Ferret.  The leadership of the Clan had no desire to cause a rift between the Scorpions and the Wolves by introducing a design so similar to the Ice Ferret without a Trial of Possession.  Further, they (quite correctly) informed the Scientists and Warriors involved in the quiet little project that the Clan's lack of any production facilities for the 360XL engines required would quickly doom the project to failure, even if it were green-lighted for production.

And so the design sat untouched in Scorpion archives until the first units of the Hellion Surge were unveiled in mid-3004 following the departure of Wolf's Dragoons from Clan space.

As the Hellions introduced one OmniMech after the next, it quickly forced the other Clans to respond.  In 3007, Khan Marcus Solheim ordered the design schematics for Project CGS-45/O-8/2 retreived from the archives and for five prototypes to be constructed. Solheim knew of the project because he had worked on that design group some 23 years earlier in one of his first assignments as a Blood-named Warrior.

The design was christened as the Hooded Eagle in honor of a genetically engineered bird-of-prey introduced to the deserts of Babylon by the SLDF exiles following the Exodus.  The Hooded Eagle is a massive raptor with an average wingspan of some two-and-a-half meters (larger even than the famed Jade Falcon!).  Soaring high on the thermals above the wastes of Babylon, this raptor relies on its keen vision to spot even the smallest of prey on the broken ground far below and then dives to impale its prey on fearsome talons before tearing apart the flesh with a mighty hooked beak.  Blue-white and grey feathers cover the underside of the body, wings, and tail, while the dorsal surfaces are patterned in splashes of red, yellow, and orange . . . which allows the Hooded Eagle to blend into the sky overhead or the wastes below and renders them difficult to spot.  Only the head of this bird breaks the camo-pattern, with jet-black feathers covering the head and neck, resembling nothing so much as an executioner's hood.

Still lacking a production line for the 360XL engine, Scientists, Technicians, and Laborers disassembled and then rebuilt five Hooded Eagles from existing Ice Ferrets.  However, this was accomplished by the fall of 3007.

Just prior to Christmas of that year, Solheim traveled to Strana Mechty (with all five prototypes and full design schematics) to meet with Khan Kerlin Ward of Clan Wolf.  Although Ward was (justifiably) furious at the Scorpions for having "borrowed" the Ice Ferret design, he was also quite impressed with the (theoretical) superiority of the new machine.

Solheim proposed that the Scorpions and Wolves share the design.  Both Clans having rights to produce the chassis for their own Toumans.  In exchange, the Scorpions asked for the right to produce the 360XL engine from the Ice Ferret in their own QuadPlex Alpha complex on Roche.  Ward agreed . . . provided that the Hooded Eagle passed a series of one-on-one combat Trials against Clan Wolf Ice Ferrets.

Twenty Trials would be fought between Christmas Day and the New Year of 3008 . . . and the Hooded Eagle, with its heavier armor protection and greater weapons capacity, emerged victorious in fifteen of the twenty engagements.  Impressed, Khan Ward agreed to the terms--but insisted that while the Scorpions would retain the rights to produce the design for themselves, they could not trade or sell examples of the new design to other Clans. 

To which Marcus Solheim is said to have replied, "Do you think us Scorpions to be Diamond Sharks in disguise?"  And the deal was struck.

Full scale production began on both Roche and Strana Mechty in late 3008, with the new Hooded Eagle engaging the recently introduced Ice Hellion Boreal Wildcat in a Trial on Hector.  A Trial which the mixed force of Scorpion and Wolf Warriors handily won . . . much to the chagrin of the Hellions, who had designed the Boreal Wildcat to outmatch the Ice Ferret . . . and now found themselves facing an OmniMech with even more armor than the older Wolf OmniMech and virtually the same amount of pod-space as their new light design!

DEPLOYMENT

By the early 3030s, the Hooded Eagle design had spread to several Clans that made heavy use of the older Ice Ferret, although production rights remained in the hands of Clans Goliath Scorpion and Wolf.  Until, that is, Clan Cloud Cobra won the right to produce the design for themselves in 3032, acheiving a narrow victory over Clan Wolf on Strana Mechty.

However, the new Khan of Clan Goliath Scorpion (Mikhail Kirov) angered the Wolves in 3027 when he offered to rebuild and retrofit any existing Ice Ferret to the Hooded Eagle standard . . . for a price.  Khan Ward accused Kirov of violating the agreement that Solheim had entered into; Kirov responded by citing that agreement and noting that the Scorpions were not selling or trading any new production Hooded Eagles.  Ward demanded a Trial of Refusal in 3028 over the matter, which was fought on Roche.  The two Clusters (1st Scorpion Dragoons and 4th Wolf Guards) fought each other to a draw.  With both sides exhausted, Khans Ward and Kirov squared off on the battlefield to settle the matter once and for all.

Timber Wolf versus Goliath Scorpion, the two Khans fought for what seemed an eternity, and both Khans managed to cripple their opponent's OmniMech in a final exchange of furious fire.  Undaunted, both Kirov and Ward left their cockpits to continue the battle in hand-to-hand combat, throwing away their sidearms and combat blades, the pair slugged it out, until they both collapsed, exhausted, and began to laugh as their Clans watched and held their collective breaths!

At the last, both Khans stood, offered (and accepted) hegira and agreed to sit down and discuss the matter.  At a later date.  After their wounds had healed!  Two months after this, the two Khans came to an agreement where any proceeds from such upgrades would be split between the two Clans, with the Clan actually performing the rebuild receiving 2/3rds of the sum total.

Because of this program, by 3048 well over 90% of all existing Ice Ferrets in the Clan Touman had been replaced by newly built or rebuilt Hooded Eagles.
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Re: Updated Hooded Eagle Fluff
« Reply #1 on: March 12, 2018, 11:27:07 PM »

And the design and configurations.  Prime, A, B, C, and D are all based on the canon Ice Ferret and are those primarily in use by Clan Wolf and other users of the Ice Ferret.  Configurations E, F, G, H, and I are Clan Goliath Scorpion and all feature a Targeting Computer.

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Hooded Eagle

Mass: 45 tons
Tech Base: Clan
Chassis Config: Biped Omnimech
Rules Level: Tournament Legal
Era: Clan Invasion
Tech Rating/Era Availability: E/X-X-E
Production Year: 3008
Cost: 11,387,031 C-Bills
Battle Value: 770

Chassis: Unknown Endo-Steel
Power Plant: Unknown 360 Fusion XL Engine
Walking Speed: 86.4 km/h
Maximum Speed: 129.6 km/h
Jump Jets: Unknown
    Jump Capacity: 0 meters
Armor: Unknown Ferro-Fibrous
Armament:
    11.0 tons of pod space.
Manufacturer: Unknown
    Primary Factory: Unknown
Communications System: Unknown
Targeting and Tracking System: Unknown

================================================================================
Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Internal Structure: Endo-Steel                    75 points                2.50
    Internal Locations: 1 CT, 1 LT, 1 RT, 1 LA, 1 RA, 1 LL, 1 RL
Engine:             XL Fusion Engine             360                      16.50
    Walking MP: 8
    Running MP: 12
    Jumping MP: 0
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             10(20)                    0.00
Gyro:               Standard                                               4.00
Cockpit:            Standard                                               3.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA    R: SH+UA
Armor:              Ferro-Fibrous                AV - 153                  8.00
    Armor Locations: 1 CT, 1 LT, 1 RT, 1 LA, 1 RA, 1 LL, 1 RL

                                                      Internal       Armor     
                                                      Structure      Factor     
                                                Head     3            9         
                                        Center Torso     14           22       
                                 Center Torso (rear)                  6         
                                           L/R Torso     11           17       
                                    L/R Torso (rear)                  5         
                                             L/R Arm     7            14       
                                             L/R Leg     11           22       



================================================================================
Loadout Name: Prime                                          Cost: 12,702,634
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,938

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    CASE Locations: LT                                                     0.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ER PPC                                       RA        15        2         6.00
ER Medium Laser                              LA        5         1         1.00
Streak SRM-4                                 LT        3         1         2.00
Active Probe                                 HD        0         1         1.00
@Streak SRM-4 (25)                           LT        -         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 25

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 19
8          3       3       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, PRB, RCN, CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


================================================================================
Loadout Name: A-1                                            Cost: 12,231,384
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,400

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    CASE Locations: RA                                                     0.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
LB 5-X AC                                    RA        1         4         7.00
2 ER Medium Lasers                           LA        10        2         2.00
@LB 5-X (Cluster) (20)                       RA        -         1         1.00
@LB 5-X (Slug) (20)                          RA        -         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 23

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 14
8          2       2       1       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


================================================================================
Loadout Name: A-2                                            Cost: 12,140,759
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,466

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    CASE Locations: RA                                                     0.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ultra AC/5                                   RA        1         3         7.00
2 ER Medium Lasers                           LA        10        2         2.00
@Ultra AC/5 (40)                             RA        -         2         2.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 24

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 15
8          3       3       1       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


================================================================================
Loadout Name: B                                              Cost: 12,186,072
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,521

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    CASE Locations: LT, LA                                                 0.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Large Pulse Laser                            RA        10        2         6.00
SRM-6                                        LA        4         1         1.50
SRM-6                                        LT        4         1         1.50
@SRM-6 (15)                                  LA        -         1         1.00
@SRM-6 (15)                                  LT        -         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 25

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 15
8          2       2       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA, SRM 2/2/0


================================================================================
Loadout Name: C                                              Cost: 12,548,572
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,745

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    CASE Locations: LT, RA                                                 0.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
LRM-15                                       RA        5         2         3.50
    Artemis IV FCS                           RA        -         1         1.00
2 ER Medium Lasers                           LA        10        2         2.00
Anti-Missile System                          LT        1         1         0.50
@LRM-15 (Artemis) (24)                       RA        -         3         3.00
@Anti-Missile System (24)                    LT        -         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 21

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 17
8          3       3       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, AMS, CASE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA, IF 1


================================================================================
Loadout Name: D                                              Cost: 11,962,863
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,819

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             11(22)                    1.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA+LA+H

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Medium Pulse Laser                           RA        4         1         2.00
Medium Pulse Laser                           LA        4         1         2.00
Medium Pulse Laser                           RT        4         1         2.00
Medium Pulse Laser                           LT        4         1         2.00
Medium Pulse Laser                           HD        4         1         2.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 22

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 18
8          4       4       0       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


================================================================================
Loadout Name: E-1                                            Cost: 12,496,009
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 2,015

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             11(22)                    1.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ER PPC                                       RA        15        2         6.00
ER Medium Laser                              LA        5         1         1.00
Targeting Computer                           RT        -         2         2.00
Active Probe                                 HD        0         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 23

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 20
8          3       3       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, PRB, RCN, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


================================================================================
Loadout Name: E-2                                            Cost: 12,496,009
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 2,084

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             11(22)                    1.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ER PPC                                       RA        15        2         6.00
ER Medium Laser                              LA        5         1         1.00
Targeting Computer                           RT        -         2         2.00
ECM Suite                                    HD        0         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 23

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 21
8          3       3       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, ECM, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


================================================================================
Loadout Name: F                                              Cost: 12,180,363
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,942

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             11(22)                    1.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA+LA+H

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ER Large Laser                               RA        12        1         4.00
ER Large Laser                               LA        12        1         4.00
Targeting Computer                           RT        -         2         2.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 23

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 19
8          3       3       3       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


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Loadout Name: G                                              Cost: 13,423,738
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 2,129

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Jumping MP: 8  (Standard)
    Jump Jet Locations: 4 LT, 4 RT                                         4.00
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             11(22)                    1.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA+LA+H

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
2 ER Medium Lasers                           RA        10        2         2.00
2 ER Medium Lasers                           LA        10        2         2.00
Targeting Computer                           RT        -         1         1.00
Active Probe                                 HD        0         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 13

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 21
8j         3       3       0       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, PRB, RCN, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


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Loadout Name: H                                              Cost: 13,557,863
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,654

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Jumping MP: 8  (Standard)
    Jump Jet Locations: 4 LT, 4 RT                                         4.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA+LA+H

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ER Large Laser                               RA        12        1         4.00
ECM Suite                                    RT        0         1         1.00
Targeting Computer                           RT        -         1         1.00
Active Probe                                 HD        0         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 17

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 17
8j         2       2       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, PRB, RCN, ECM, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


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Loadout Name: H-TAG                                          Cost: 13,285,988
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,568

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
    Jumping MP: 8  (Standard)
    Jump Jet Locations: 4 LT, 4 RT                                         4.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA+LA+H

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ER Large Laser                               RA        12        1         4.00
TAG                                          LA        0         1         1.00
Targeting Computer                           RT        -         1         1.00
Active Probe                                 HD        0         1         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 17

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 16
8j         2       2       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, PRB, RCN, TAG, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA


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Loadout Name: I                                              Cost: 11,951,081
Tech Rating/Era Availability: F/X-X-E                         BV2: 1,796

Equipment           Type                         Rating                   Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Heat Sinks:         Double Heat Sink             12(24)                    2.00
    Actuators:      L: SH+UA+LA+H    R: SH+UA+LA+H

Equipment                                 Location    Heat    Critical    Mass 
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ER Large Laser                               RA        12        1         4.00
2 ER Small Lasers                            LA        4         2         1.00
2 ER Small Lasers                            RT        4         2         1.00
Targeting Computer                           RT        -         2         2.00
2 ER Small Lasers                            LT        4         2         1.00
                                            Free Critical Slots: 16

BattleForce Statistics
MV      S (+0)  M (+2)  L (+4)  E (+6)   Wt.   Ov   Armor:      5    Points: 18
8          5       5       2       0      2     0   Structure:  2
Special Abilities: OMNI, ENE, SRCH, ES, SEAL, SOA
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Re: Updated Hooded Eagle Fluff
« Reply #2 on: March 13, 2018, 04:20:47 PM »

Chicken and egg thing for me bud. You could easily have the Hooded Eagle as the design that kicks off the Hellion Surge and your Great Redesign here. Like your fantastic fluff on the Quicksilver Sand Devil which dealt with the original Wolf Hunter that the Hellions built perhaps this collaboration with the Wolves on the Ice Ferret so angered the Ice Hellions that they began their Surge. This triggers an arms race which sees your design dreams come to fruition. It can still be a Warden versus Crusader thing as fighting intensifies. Could it be that the Hellions felt that the Scorpions were dealing with them at first then they went to the Wolves?

I'd really like to set up an alternate with this that has everything culminate in a revote for the invasion. What if Goliath Scorpion, Coyote, Wolf, Cloud Cobra, and perhaps a few others voted against the measure? Clinging to their Warden cause they face down Leo Showers and his Outbound Light revelations. We could see a redo of the Revival Trials.
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Re: Updated Hooded Eagle Fluff
« Reply #3 on: March 13, 2018, 04:40:35 PM »

Chicken and egg thing for me bud. You could easily have the Hooded Eagle as the design that kicks off the Hellion Surge and your Great Redesign here. Like your fantastic fluff on the Quicksilver Sand Devil which dealt with the original Wolf Hunter that the Hellions built perhaps this collaboration with the Wolves on the Ice Ferret so angered the Ice Hellions that they began their Surge. This triggers an arms race which sees your design dreams come to fruition. It can still be a Warden versus Crusader thing as fighting intensifies. Could it be that the Hellions felt that the Scorpions were dealing with them at first then they went to the Wolves?

I'd really like to set up an alternate with this that has everything culminate in a revote for the invasion. What if Goliath Scorpion, Coyote, Wolf, Cloud Cobra, and perhaps a few others voted against the measure? Clinging to their Warden cause they face down Leo Showers and his Outbound Light revelations. We could see a redo of the Revival Trials.

That is a great idea.

On the whole, "which came first" question; I originally had the Scorpion designs showing up in the early '30s . . . but as I began working on this I thought it would fit better to have this design renaissance kick off as a result of the Dragoon Comprise.  And doing it that way, it made more sense to have a Crusader Clan start the whole thing over being "irked" at not getting to invade right now.

So rather than the Hellion Civil War (when the Khan decides to just go ahead and Invade and the saKhan has to kill her, gutting both Alpha and Beta Galaxies in the process) in canon, instead, they are gearing up for war.  And really expecting that the Invasion will come in the next ten years after reports from the Dragoons start coming back to the Khans.  When it doesn't?  And tensions between the Crusaders and Wardens remain high?  And everyone is building new war material?

Who knows how that might butterfly the events that led up to Revival?

MA
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Re: Updated Hooded Eagle Fluff
« Reply #4 on: March 13, 2018, 05:40:34 PM »

I'd really like to set up an alternate with this that has everything culminate in a revote for the invasion. What if Goliath Scorpion, Coyote, Wolf, Cloud Cobra, and perhaps a few others voted against the measure? Clinging to their Warden cause they face down Leo Showers and his Outbound Light revelations. We could see a redo of the Revival Trials.

That is a great idea.

Thank you but it doesn't only have to be the Revival Trials. We can really detail out a new Clan history starting from 3020 much like the Kapetyn universe is doing with your designs introduced and we can see how they play out in a [COLD WAR] Warden versus Crusader battle royal. There is many possibilities here.
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Re: Updated Hooded Eagle Fluff
« Reply #5 on: March 15, 2018, 11:36:33 AM »

Lovely re-working of the fluff MA :) One minor suggestion though, break up each variant into its own code box, its hard to keep track of and there's a LOT to scroll through with one big box of doom.
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