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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #60 on: March 10, 2010, 01:14:13 PM »

Thanks for posting the new TO&E. I have a "few" questions. ;)

There are 4 Battalions here, isn't that a Regiment? Why wasn't Bruce promoted to Colonel or Lt. Colonel? Isn't that the typical rank for a Regimental Leader? This leads to the Battalion commanders and so on; shouldn't they also be one rank higher?

What do you envision the cultural makeup of Chesterton to be? I've looked in the sourcebooks and there isn't much beyond a general terrain description.
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #61 on: March 10, 2010, 02:21:28 PM »

Nice TO&E BTA, two small things though:-

The Centurion doesn't enter production on Raman II until 2801 and the Trebuchet-5N is only entering production at this time from factories in the Free Worlds League, the SLDF would have had access too the -5B, not sure if the AFFS would have had any.

If these were supplied by the AFFS i'd recomend replacing them with the Enforcer and Dervish.
Crap, good catch unfortunately no Enforcers either...not invented yet either...will fix later.

Not near my books at the moment but i think the Enforcer entered service with the AFFS in 2777. I'll double check later too be sure though.
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #62 on: March 10, 2010, 02:30:34 PM »

"Since it first walked off of the production line in 2777, the Enforcer has been iconic of the Federated Suns."

There are 4 Battalions here, isn't that a Regiment? Why wasn't Bruce promoted to Colonel or Lt. Colonel? Isn't that the typical rank for a Regimental Leader? This leads to the Battalion commanders and so on; shouldn't they also be one rank higher?

Not necessarily for a training unit.
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"In turn they tested each Clan namesake
in trial against the Ice Hellion's mettle.
Each chased the Ice Hellion, hunting it down.
All failed to match the predator's speed and grace.
Khan Cage smiled and said, "And that is how we shall be."

The Remembrance (Clan Ice Hellion) Passage 5, Verse 3, Lines 1 - 5

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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #63 on: March 10, 2010, 02:44:02 PM »

Thanks Ice  :)
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #64 on: March 11, 2010, 03:36:27 AM »

It is a regiment as Bruce points out to Sam during thier conversation, B's actually freaking out a little.  This is the largest group of people he's ever been responsible for and I think by now we know he's quite a bit out of his league.  He really needs a tour at NAMA or Warrior's Hall's staff college.  However with 'Rat handling supply and logistics, Gracie as his Exec and Erika in the Ops postion he should be okay.

As to Chesterton's make up by now it's about 40% Cappellan regional 30% standard Davy Franco-English and 30% Terran Western Alliance (roughly) one of the reasons I selected the Chesterton worlds was that you have a richly diverse population with little written about it.  Fertile ground indeed!  The original story actually had it was Christina Stiener that Bruce rescued and a lot of action took place in the Isle of Skye (love that name!). But Chesterton gave me more room to play.
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #65 on: March 11, 2010, 03:35:23 PM »

Aw Bruce & Chrissie- so much potential for misunderstandings...
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #66 on: March 11, 2010, 05:11:50 PM »

and a love of large mechs.  ::)
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #67 on: March 14, 2010, 12:07:43 AM »

Lansdowne Barracks, Landing
Chesterton, Federated Suns
11 November, 2784


Alex Winter looked up as Bruce collapsed in the seat next to him.  The pair was among the first of the 90th’s command staff to arrive in the main conference room.  Sipping at their coffee they waited quietly for Alex’s father and the rest of the command staff to arrive.

B looks exhausted, CJ said Sarah’s worried, he’s pushing real hard.

“Heard you handed the Dragoons a rough ride.”  Alex said.

Bruce shrugged and grunted.

“They got arrogant, still think we’re some gang of street toughs,” He laughed, “Of course we are sort of…” the Gunslinger trailed off.  â€œWell not anymore, we’ve rocked the Dragoons two out of five, their troops talk to us now, not so much the staff officers, but the line troops…I think we’re having an effect.”

“Hopefully it will be enough.” said the short dark man in the doorway.  His suit was an Armani retro influenced by the 1940’s currently the height of style in the Hegemony.  He stepped over to the side table and poured a cup of coffee.

“Hmm good stuff, you must be Samuel’s boys; he’s very proud of you.”  His accent was pure New York with a slight Spanish accent.  Dominican maybe Alex thought.

“And you are?”  Bruce asked amused.

“Dr. Alberto Suarez, at your service,” Suarez gave a seated bow, “Planetologist and political scientist, Department of Communications.”

“Hey ‘Berto how goes it?” Sam asked as he entered taking his seat at the head of the table.  Christian, Justine and John Zazula filed in followed by a tall willowy blonde woman with emerald green eyes in the uniform of an AFFS officer.

“Erika?” Bruce looked surprised.

“Major.” The woman nodded cordially.

“Major Gilmour of course you know Leftenant D’anzio or rather Special Agent Erica Tomlinson; CIB.”  Dr. Suarez drawled sharing a grin with Sam.

Bruce’s eyes narrowed.  â€œTerra planted a spook in my unit.”  He stated flatly.  â€œAs the recruit most likely to command my scout ‘Mechs, lovely.”

Every Tiger in the room stiffened at Bruce’s tone, the Gunslinger was most dangerous when he was calm and cool.  Erika obviously knew that because she blanched.

“Easy, Bruce.”  Sam said.  There was no force to his voice, just a quiet tone of command.  Like a switch was thrown the slender Major leaned back and smiled.

“Agent Tomlinson was placed here to monitor our mission,” Dr. Suarez recovered smoothly.  â€œAs you might have guessed she is an exceptional ‘Mech pilot and scout which puts her in a great place to observe and report.”  He fixed Bruce with a hawkish glare.  â€œThings are beginning to get real Major Gilmour and you need to be on the ball.”

Suarez rose and brought up a holo screen.

“In short people we may be looking at the end of civilization.”

« Last Edit: March 14, 2010, 12:09:09 AM by blacktigeractual »
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #68 on: March 14, 2010, 01:00:59 AM »

Luckily for her, Bruce only shoots first in certain situations...
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #69 on: March 14, 2010, 03:09:38 AM »

“In short people we may be looking at the end of civilization.”
Good que for someone to pull out TA2785, Eh?
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #70 on: March 14, 2010, 05:24:41 AM »

Doom Day is upon us :D
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"In turn they tested each Clan namesake
in trial against the Ice Hellion's mettle.
Each chased the Ice Hellion, hunting it down.
All failed to match the predator's speed and grace.
Khan Cage smiled and said, "And that is how we shall be."

The Remembrance (Clan Ice Hellion) Passage 5, Verse 3, Lines 1 - 5

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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #71 on: March 14, 2010, 12:23:25 PM »

Judgment Day... Doomsday... just another Apocalypse...


Its so easy to become blase....
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #72 on: March 14, 2010, 02:24:36 PM »

Judgment Day... Doomsday... just another Apocalypse...


Its so easy to become blase....

Come on.
Cheer a little.  ;D
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"In turn they tested each Clan namesake
in trial against the Ice Hellion's mettle.
Each chased the Ice Hellion, hunting it down.
All failed to match the predator's speed and grace.
Khan Cage smiled and said, "And that is how we shall be."

The Remembrance (Clan Ice Hellion) Passage 5, Verse 3, Lines 1 - 5

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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #73 on: March 15, 2010, 12:48:48 AM »

Chapter 3: The Weight of Reality
Feels like the weight of the world,
Like God in heaven gave me a turn.
Don't cling to me; I swear I can't fix you.
Still in the dark, can you fix me?

Evanescence, Weight of the World

Well the man certainly knows how to get your attention.  I thought.  Sam looked like he expected the statement and oddly neither did Erika.  I looked at the projections hanging in mid air as an uproar broke out.  My own training as both a scout and an interest in history that every one of my mentors has encouraged over the years led me to look for patterns.  Flows of cause and effect if you will that stand out.

And there they were.  In the worst possible places.

“With the dissolution of the Star League, naturally everyone is expecting at least some conflict.”  Dr. Suarez was explaining.  â€œWhat not even the most pessimistic of viewpoints realizes just how bad it is going to get.  Or how soon, General Kerensky’s desertion has acted like an accelerant , CIB’s best estimate is that within three to five years the Inner Sphere will be locked in a war that will make all previous wars look like schoolyard spats.”

“Most likely we will see either the Draconis Combine or the Free Worlds League as the flashpoint as both Kenyon Marik and Minoru Kurita have been increasingly aggressive with their neighbors.  From there it will spread like wildfire.  Both nations seem to be operating under a very dangerous fallacy.”

As he paused, Suarez manipulated the console in front of him.  A map of known human space appeared.

“The false assumption they are working under is that total victory is possible.”  On the screen the red of the Combine flowed out to envelope the whole of Human Space.  â€œThe reasons Total Victory is impossible are many but the most glaring fault is this no one state has the resources to conquer then occupy another while at the same time defending against its neighbors.”  On the screen the Combine attempted the same conquest once again only to have Terra, the Federated Suns and the Lyran Commonwealth hammer them back.  At the same time the Capellans and the Free Worlds League launched their own attacks, preventing any one state from gaining supremacy.

“While some worlds will naturally change hands and be kept imagine the case of an industrial world like Chesterton or Kathil, hundreds of millions if not billions of people to indoctrinate, police, to rule.  The entirety of the AFFS for example would barely be able to take and hold Luthien or Sian for the length of time necessary to turn either world into a nominally loyal possession.”

Sipping at his coffee for a moment the short swarthy man shook his head.

“No my friends, they will tell themselves that fueled by the riches of the newly conquered territories they will be able to sustain their wars.  Again we come to another flaw.  Those conquered territories will take years to become productive again.  Based on both CIB and DMI estimates at the very least initially both Combine and Capellan strategies also include the destruction of enemy war materials factories, ship yards and so forth.”

And of course we will retaliate in kind, and…

“These strategies will rapidly spiral out of control as the wars continue and the definition of War Materials is expanded to include the opposition’s entire infrastructure as has happened time and time again.  Use of weapons of mass destruction will most likely be employed against heavily defended worlds and the destruction unleashed will render most of the important worlds little more than pyrrhic trophies.”

Across the map major industrial worlds died in all six of the major powers.  Just as importantly lines of trade between worlds flickered out.

“As the conflict continues we come to the final death blow.  Trade dies.  Ask yourselves what is the mortar that keeps any civilization together?  Education, close, community not a bad answer, but what make all these things possible?”
We all nodded like school children the amusement at the sight fading quickly.

“As trade dies, so do we.  As losses to naval shipping mount, the merchant fleets will be pressed into service.  This will mean less consumer goods, food, and medicine to get to the civilian populations.  Replacement parts for water purification plants and terraforming plants will be delayed or never arrive.  Famine, disease and social collapse will soon follow.”

“And there you have it.”  Sam said.
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Re: The Black Tigers: A Gathering Storm; Book One: A Distant Thunder
« Reply #74 on: March 15, 2010, 04:29:13 AM »

I don't think the loss of shipping would be quite that obvious just yet.

PS:

The MIIO was created by Paul Davion during his reformation some 15 years into the future from this point in the story.
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