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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #240 on: January 31, 2013, 12:45:10 PM »

Post #231, last line, "she just grabbed Commander Lorne’s hand, shock it, and she stepped up and hugged him."   probably meant shook?  Unless Roslin had one of those hand shock buzzers you see in cartoons.....    never figured her for a prankster though....

As an aside, it's a good idea to leave minor nits for nitpickers to nit pick.  They are less likely to pick the major nits that way.....

This is MA's story, the only major knit we have to pick is he's not slaved to his computer and writing faster
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« Reply #241 on: January 31, 2013, 01:12:34 PM »

“And the result of this interrogation?” asked Laura.

Adama shook his head negatively.  “Baltar insists that both the sidearm and the nuclear weapon were in his lab—he claims that he forgot the pistol was in his possession and he put inside a filing compartment and left it after Kobol, Madame President.  Either he has an exceptionally strong will, or he actually believes that someone stole the device from his lab.”

“But the coincidences . . .,” started the President.

“Cannot be proven to be active lies by Baltar,” said the Admiral.  “It strains the imagination that they are coincidences, but even under chemical interrogation he has stuck to his story,” the Admiral shook his head.  “Although, I do believe the good scientist really has need of seeking professional help.  One or two times, it was if he was answering questions someone else was posing—not us.  And the new Court that the Quorum put into place will not allow us to continue to hold him, not on the full array of charges we wanted.” 

He frowned.  Newly installed High Justice Romo Lampkin—one of the few professional attorneys-at-law remaining in the Fleet had, on behalf of the Quorum, issued an order demanding that formal charges be filed or the Vice-President released.

“Without corroborating evidence,” Adama sighed, “there are only two things I can charge him with.  The first is failing to inform me immediately that he lost a nuclear weapon.  And that is only if we consider him part of the Fleet—as far as civilian law goes, technically his only crime in that regards, as the Justice told me earlier today, is improper storage and disposal of hazardous materials.  The second is possession of handgun without a proper permit.”

Laura threw up her hands and cursed.  “We know that he had to play a role in this—and we cannot do a thing to him?”

“His political career is over, Laura,” Adama said and he had a crooked smile on his lips.  “Someone released to the Fleet that a nuclear weapon for which he was given responsibility found its way into the hand of terrorists—he will not be President.”

“And legally he will get a slap on the wrist!”

“And so will the majority of the Pegasus crew,” said Adama.  “Lampkin and I had a little chat about the matter—and he has pledged, publically pledged—that he will investigate the accusations against the Pegasus crew.  Privately, he told me this entire thing is a bloody mess.  Before the attack, if something like this would have happened, every man and woman on that ship would have been cashiered or incarcerated—or shot.  He knows we cannot do that—we cannot afford the luxury of doing that—and while is conducting a judicial review of the situation, most of the crew will receive nothing more a note in their file.  He did tell me that if he feels that the charges of rape can be proven, the individual in question will stand trial.  And Major Shaw will probably be standing trial as well for her role on Scylla; the recordings were rather damning in that regard.”

“I noted that you assigned him a security detail,” Laura said quietly.

“Yes.  The Gemenesse are furious that he invalidated your order over abortion.  He’s already been hung in effigy on several of their ships—and I don’t want them moving from an effigy to the real thing.”

“Your Commander Lorne will be happy,” Laura said bitterly.

Adama said nothing, until Laura got herself back under control.

“At least we are safe from the Cylons at the moment,” she said.

Adama shook his head.  “That is a pipe-dream, Madame President.  Once the Guardians discover the properties of this nebula, they will search meticulously—I know them.  It is only a matter of time before they find us, which means as soon as our repairs are completed, the Fleet needs to move—and move fast.”  He paused.  “We have the coordinates where Caprica suggested for a rendezvous—and they still have our POWs, Laura.”

She glared at Adama, but he sat there unfazed until she looked away.

“We need to get those people back,” the Admiral said softly, “and if they are serious about combining forces against the Guardians, we need to consider their offer.”

“But this ship you found—the one you sent Anubis to investigate,” Laura began.

“Could be anything, Madame President.  We won’t know until Caldwell returns.  And there is another matter we must address—soon.”

Laura frowned and she nodded.  “Joyita.  I’ve heard that certain reporters are asking questions.”

“Right now, Scorpia’s people are keeping their mouths shut, but that won’t last.  We need to get ahead of this, Laura.  And we owe it to Tory and Saul and Galen and Ellen that the news is broken to them gently before they get ambushed with this.”

She fumed, but she nodded.  “And that ass Lampkin has already informed me—Commander Lorne gave him a full briefing, were you aware—that there is no charge which he and the Court will sustain against them,” she said bitterly.

“At the least, he delayed the elections for four weeks—eight weeks from today.  That gives you an opportunity to repair the damage that Baltar dealt you, Laura,” Adama said with a grin.

“But now Zarek has thrown his hat into the ring—and there are rumors that Prince Hamish is considering a run as well,” and she paused, then chuckled.  “Here I am, after we have united with nearly fifty-five hundred new survivors, worried about an election for an office I never dreamed I would hold.”

Adama just waited.

“What if that ship belongs to the Thirteenth Tribe, Bill?” she asked.

“In that case, Madame President, the election will be a foregone conclusion—if you are the President who managed to guide us to Earth.”

“The thing that worries me about that,” Laura said softly, “is what if they are not ready for the Guardians or the Cylons?  What if we lead them there—and see the slaughter repeated?”

The Admiral frowned and he shook his head.  “If—IF—that ship belongs to the Thirteenth Tribe, then at the very least they are a space-faring civilization.  An interstellar civilization—there is no world in the system that Racetrack surveyed that could support a sizeable colony able to build a ship,” he sighed.  “But we will not know until we make contact—we have no way of knowing at this time how long that distress beacon has been activated.”

Laura nodded.  “Send a Raptor to meet with Caprica at the coordinates you gave her, Bill.  And arrange a new rendezvous to continue our discussions,” and she sighed.  “And release Gaius fracking Baltar from the brig.”
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #242 on: January 31, 2013, 01:14:02 PM »

There may not be any more updates today.  An idiot one block over cut a natural gas line.  So far, they aren't evacuating my sub-division, but half the counties fire-trucks are on scene and we are waiting for the gas company to get down here.  And the smell is QUITE strong.

MA
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #243 on: January 31, 2013, 01:20:40 PM »

Don't worry, I haven't completely lost my mind here.

I selected the Aliens setting because of the following:
 
1. Colonial Marines . . . automatic plothook.
 
2. They have synthetics (I prefer artificial person, myself) . . . so the 13th Colony has their own Cylons or do they?
 
3. The technology level is generally the same. Big difference? Sulaco covers 0.74 light-years per day, while the Colonies have their instant-jump fold-space drive. Both have anti-gravity, both rely PRIMARILY on kinetic weapons and missiles and nukes. BUT, the Earth of this setting ALSO has directed energy weapons (but no shields) which should come as a MAJOR SUPRISE to the Cylons.
 
That was the big three reasons. And LV-426 is just 39 light years from EARTH. Now think about this. This is the Earth of 2179, just a few centuries from now. Earth with BILLIONS of people and major colonies. All ripe for attack by the Cylons.
 
Can this be interesting? I hope so. Anyway, it isn't nearly as much of a curb-stomp Cross-over as a lot of people like on this site. I mean mixing Star Trek and BSG, or Star Wars and BSG, or 40K and BSG, the power levels are just so dramatically different.
 
Here, not so much. And that gives me (and you the reader) a chance to focus on the story and not on the huge gaping holes in plot because of the technological disparity.

Now, I am not using the far-left field A vs. P stuff, or integratng the Predators, or having the Aliens change their own DNA with each host (silly idea) and I think you might like where this goes.
 
Anyway, that is my thoughts. I hope that you guys continue to read and offer me your opinions.
 
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #244 on: January 31, 2013, 01:22:56 PM »

There may not be any more updates today.  An idiot one block over cut a natural gas line.  So far, they aren't evacuating my sub-division, but half the counties fire-trucks are on scene and we are waiting for the gas company to get down here.  And the smell is QUITE strong.

MA

Frack!  Considering how often you have updated until now I'm sure a few days of silence won't be too bad... (withdrawal)... (more withdrawal).... then again I hope that the gas line is quickly repaired...
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #245 on: January 31, 2013, 01:41:30 PM »

There may not be any more updates today.  An idiot one block over cut a natural gas line.  So far, they aren't evacuating my sub-division, but half the counties fire-trucks are on scene and we are waiting for the gas company to get down here.  And the smell is QUITE strong.

MA

Frack!  Considering how often you have updated until now I'm sure a few days of silence won't be too bad... (withdrawal)... (more withdrawal).... then again I hope that the gas line is quickly repaired...

Agreed wholeheartedly.  The people close to you are more precious and important than our own addictions to your work.   Hope all turns out for the better.
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #246 on: January 31, 2013, 01:56:50 PM »

There may not be any more updates today.  An idiot one block over cut a natural gas line.  So far, they aren't evacuating my sub-division, but half the counties fire-trucks are on scene and we are waiting for the gas company to get down here.  And the smell is QUITE strong.

MA

Sack up; you'll be good. Now get back to work before the gas company accidentally severs the internet cable.  ;)
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« Reply #247 on: January 31, 2013, 03:55:24 PM »

Well, they shut down the gas and are repairing the break the line.  And the smell additive they put has dissipated.  Gas company workers say no problems, no evacuation.  So it is all good.

Turns out, one of the neighbors a block away had his gas disconnected and the meter removed, and the company left a small feeder pipe sticking out of the ground that connects to the main line below.  Idiot ran over it with his truck and broke the pipe and the cap, so it was spraying natural gas into the air.

:(

Then they noticed that some of the OTHER houses that had the same kind of pipe and cap (most of my neighbors are 100% electric), and now they bringing in a crew to remove those pipes so this doesn't happen again.

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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #248 on: January 31, 2013, 04:32:57 PM »

nBSG and Aliens Cooooooooooool  8)
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #249 on: January 31, 2013, 04:38:55 PM »

The Guardians meeting Ripley.   Hmmm, poor Guardians.    ;D

Figured you were setting up the time frame for Earth with a event everyone would recognize.  Can't wait to see where this goes.
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #250 on: January 31, 2013, 05:08:11 PM »

Anubis emerged from FTL just outside of the moon’s orbit around the gas giant.  Major Sam Caldwell nodded as the DRADIS display came back on-line and stabilized—just that one strange looking ship.  At three hundred and eighty-five meters in length, it was even smaller than Sam’ very ancient Battlestar.  But well armed for its size, she thought as the systems high-lighted two twin KEW turrets on the dorsal and ventral surfaces, eight missile tubes along the flanks of the spiky nose, another eighty tubes on the ventral surface—for orbital bombardment, perhaps?  No point defense that she could see, but the strange ship carried two very large (even larger than the bow-guns of a Mercury-class Battlestar) structures set outside her hull to the port and starboard.   She wasn’t certain of what they were—there were no muzzles, no accelerator coils, no recoil compensators, no magazine feeds—but they just looked like some sort of weapon.

No flight deck, but the images showed five large bay doors on the lower surface—perhaps for their versions of the Raptor.

And she noted why the Raptor had not picked her up earlier.  Just like her own Anubis, this Sulaco was apparently designed deliberately to generate a minimal signature on DRADIS.  It had not responded to her hails, but it was definitely powered up, retaining its heat.  She nodded to her helmsman who held the little Battlestar at a safe distance.

“Ma’am,” said Conner Horn, the Sagittaron who manned her combined tactical/sensor station.  “That same message is repeating from the surface—and I am detecting another transmission directed at the ship in orbit.”

“Hail them, Mister Horn,” she ordered. 

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Bishop ignored the raging winds as the gas giant slowly shrank towards the distant horizon and his fingers flew across the keyboard as the dish adjusted itself to align with Sulaco so that he could remote pilot the remaining Cheyenne in her bay. 

And the remote terminal suddenly crackled with sound.  Words emerged, laden with static from the atmosphere, but words.  And Bishop raised an eyebrow.  They had spoken in a dialect of Greek.

“Battlestar Anubis to Colonial Marines, we have received your transmission, respond please.”

He activated the comm unit and adjusted the microphone pickup and answered in Greek.  “Bishop, responding, Anubis.”

“Bishop, Anubis, do you require assistance?” the voice on the far end of the link asked.

“Eight survivors Sulaco Marine Rifle Detachement require immediate dust-off,” he answered. 

There was a pause.  “Evacuation?” she asked.

“Evacuation.  We need immediate evacuation.”

“I have three Raptors en route to the surface, Bishop.  We are detecting a beacon near your location.”

“That is the landing pad, Anubis—we will meet you there,” he paused.  “Exercise extreme caution—the area is infested with large numbers of a highly dangerous xenomorph species.”

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Sam looked at her crewmen and then she shook her head.  She understood the components of the word—strange shape—but the context? 

“Repeat the last, hostile lifeforms?”

“Animal lifeforms, not terrestrial,” the wireless spoke.

She nodded and Horn began passing instructions to the Marines and crew aboard the three Raptors.

“ETA to Raptor landing is ten minutes,” she broadcast.

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“Understood.  We will meet you at the port,” Bishop said and the transmission ceased.  He put down the terminal and changed frequencies on the comm-unit.

“Bishop to Corporal Hicks, please respond.”

“Go, Bishop,” the voice of the senior surviving Marine said.

“A rescue party is en route to the surface, Corporal Hicks—ETA to landing at the port ten minutes and counting.”

“What the . . .,” Hicks started, and then he stopped.  “We can sort this out later, I need to get everyone moving. Meet us at the port!”  And the transmission ceased.

“I will meet you at the port,” Bishop said to no one in particular.  And then he began to cautiously make his way through the rough terrain down the slope of the hill towards the landing pads.
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Re: The Hunted (nBSG)
« Reply #251 on: January 31, 2013, 05:38:06 PM »

Curiouser and curiouser...  :o




must relax... must be patient for the next installment...
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« Reply #252 on: January 31, 2013, 05:42:35 PM »

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« Reply #253 on: January 31, 2013, 06:02:53 PM »

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« Reply #254 on: January 31, 2013, 06:21:16 PM »

A crossover... wasn't expecting that, staying tuned,
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