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Master Arminas's Star Trek
« on: February 01, 2012, 11:54:41 PM »

For those that are interested, I just began a Star Trek story today over on spacebattles.com.

Here is the link:  http://forums.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=214889

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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2012, 04:46:54 AM »

Alright its official I'm a sucker for anything you write, right. Liked Chapter One a lot. Deep Space 9 was my favorite and I've been looking for something in that setting. Looking forward to reading chapter 2 and more soon.  ;)
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2012, 03:32:11 PM »

Chapters 2 and 3 are now up.  Along with links to the images of USS Republic AND a schematic of her bridge.   ;)

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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2012, 04:10:27 PM »

Awesome, got a few ideas for you if ya wanna talk trek just let me know.  ;)
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #4 on: February 02, 2012, 07:03:10 PM »

Sure.  What do you think of the Korolev-class and my use of it?

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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #5 on: February 02, 2012, 10:39:14 PM »

It is interesting. I do vaguely remember the class being mentioned in one of Star Trek book I have. There were no canon details I believe but it looks like the Starship Design group has done a nice job. As for the Republic is it the second or third ship of its name in Starfleet. Think I remember a Constitution class ship with its name in the universe prior. Like what your doing with the discipline of the ship. It reminds me of that one Captain from Next Gen who took command of the Enterprise during Jean Luc's special op mission turned ambush.

Wish we got more details on Integrated vs. Non-integrated ships of Starfleet. Would always like to hear more about this as Singular member world ships seem to be the exception and not the rule in the Federation. I do like your setup of the Federation after the Dominion War and I'd like to hear more on other powers. Is the Klingon Empire the weakest of the Big 3 after the conflict with all the carnage they were involved in? Seems like they were the first ones into the war pool after all thanks to Gowron's invasion of Cardassia. Oh and is Cardassia occupied like Germany after WW2 at this time? How about the strength of the Romulan Empire? Seems they would be the strongest. And what is the Dominion up to??

Two Story Ideas

Fate of the Borg. With the destruction of the Central Nexus and the Queen thanks to Admiral Janeway (grumble grumble) I would love to see the appearance of some different Borg factions who are geared towards different pursuits. Are there warrior Borg out there looking to establish their own empire, Borg pirates raiding technologies from other powers, or freed Borg looking to start a Federation of their own. So many ideas here.

Alpha class. The Federation Alliance combines their technologies to create the ultimate starship during the Dominion War. Named for the Alpha Quadrant it combines the best of Federation, Romulan, and Klingon construction techniques. Munchy, yes I know, but I'd love to see this ship, its crew, and its fate after the war.
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #6 on: February 02, 2012, 11:39:21 PM »

Good ideas one and all.  We will see a few Klingons in ST:R, including the newest Klingon Battlecruiser!  Hint:  I named it after a certain weapon Worf used.

When I saw that picture of the Korolev, I knew this was the class I wanted in the novel.  Even if she ain't the youngest or prettiest girl at the ball, she's got class.  Yeah, ASDB did a real good job on her.

Wasn't his name Jellico?  I had him as Matt's first Captain aboard Republic when Dahlgren graduated from the Academy, but then I squashed that idea.  Should I bring it back?

Just some thoughts.

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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #7 on: February 03, 2012, 06:22:56 AM »

Wasn't his name Jellico?  I had him as Matt's first Captain aboard Republic when Dahlgren graduated from the Academy, but then I squashed that idea.  Should I bring it back?

Would be a nice touch I think. According to sources Captain Edward Jellico did command the USS Cairo. Looking forward to more.
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #8 on: February 03, 2012, 12:23:39 PM »

Just read chapter four MA, good stuff! It does remind of Down Periscope with Kelsey Grammer as Captain Thomas Dodge more than a little bit though.  ;)
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #9 on: February 03, 2012, 04:40:46 PM »

har har har!

 ;)

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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #10 on: February 03, 2012, 07:27:46 PM »

Well I hope he doesn't have Welcome Aboard tattooed somewhere on his anatomy. ;D

Just read the next two parts of Chapter 4, love the Senior Chief! Great stuff with the Counselor.

Seriously though great read. Have you thought of posting on this site under Non BattleTech AUs? Think everyone would enjoy it.  ;)
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #11 on: February 03, 2012, 07:53:40 PM »

If you think it fits, sure.

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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #12 on: February 03, 2012, 10:51:42 PM »

I do, glad to see it on the board.  ;)
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #13 on: February 04, 2012, 06:20:09 AM »

Just saw this and now i'm going to have to go and read it  :)
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Re: Master Arminas's Star Trek
« Reply #14 on: February 05, 2012, 08:36:23 AM »

I like it. You are right they got too soft they have become tribbles
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