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Title: A Victorian Age
Post by: drakensis on May 27, 2014, 02:50:11 PM
After a long hiatus, my AU A Victorian Age (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5373688/1/A-Victorian-Age) has been updated (also cleaned up a bit)
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: Blacknova on May 27, 2014, 04:08:14 PM
What has been changed?
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: drakensis on May 27, 2014, 05:01:04 PM
Quote from: Blacknova on May 27, 2014, 04:08:14 PM
What has been changed?

Of what was posted before, some spelling and grammar. However, the update now takes the story past Somerset.
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: Takiro on May 27, 2014, 05:06:14 PM
Did you stick with the complete sibling switch or still just Victor?
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: drakensis on May 27, 2014, 05:19:58 PM
Quote from: Takiro on May 27, 2014, 05:06:14 PM
Did you stick with the complete sibling switch or still just Victor?
Just Victor
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: Takiro on May 27, 2014, 05:21:24 PM
Damn! I really wanted to see all the siblings screwed with  8)
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: Blacknova on May 27, 2014, 06:56:56 PM
Quote from: drakensis on May 27, 2014, 05:01:04 PM
Quote from: Blacknova on May 27, 2014, 04:08:14 PM
What has been changed?

Of what was posted before, some spelling and grammar. However, the update now takes the story past Somerset.

Cool, good to see you got past that block.
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: drakensis on May 30, 2014, 04:19:26 PM
About that... welcome to Outreach (https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5373688/6/A-Victorian-Age).
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: Takiro on May 30, 2014, 05:30:28 PM
Nice drak, I really have to get back into this story. Sadly I probably have to start all the way at the beginning and get through the Clan Warship gets Nuked snag that presumably derailed your story. I'd still love to see an entire new set of Steiner-Davion siblings like we talked about. Really loved that idea. Don't think it would affect your story so far but future hooks would be amazing IMO.  ;)
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: drakensis on May 31, 2014, 03:14:05 AM
Quote from: Takiro on May 30, 2014, 05:30:28 PM
Nice drak, I really have to get back into this story. Sadly I probably have to start all the way at the beginning and get through the Clan Warship gets Nuked snag that presumably derailed your story. I'd still love to see an entire new set of Steiner-Davion siblings like we talked about. Really loved that idea. Don't think it would affect your story so far but future hooks would be amazing IMO.  ;)

There have already been mentions of Peter (and in the current chapter Katherine) so I'm committed. With that said, I've dropped a few hints there are some differences in the relations between the siblings and that will continue.
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: barbarossa rotbart on May 31, 2014, 06:56:38 AM
I really glad that you continue this story. There is one thing I really like to see: the beginning of a friendship between Victoria and Omiko.

One evil idea for a much later chapter: Kathy S-D is captured by the Wolves and taken as a boundswoman by Phelan... ;)
Title: Re: A Victorian Age
Post by: muttley on June 02, 2014, 06:14:13 PM
Kathy goes Private Benjamin!