scourge72 Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #210 on: April 13, 2009, 04:51:55 PM »Like I said over on s7: great stuff! Keep it comin'!
Ice Hellion Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #211 on: April 13, 2009, 04:55:41 PM »from: Takiro on April 13, 2009, 04:49:18 PM
Another appearance by the Makos. Curious, do you see these Rim Special Forces as part of AsRoc (RWR intelligence agency) or the military?
I must have missed something somewhere (or be tired by 6 hours driving): who are they?
master arminas Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #212 on: April 16, 2009, 09:53:12 AM »Chapter Thirty-Nine
February 28, 2768
SLS Richelieu
Zenith Jump Point, Asta
Terran Hegemony
“Maneuvering, on my mark shut down the mains and hold station at the jump point,†Captain Susan Collins, SLDF, spoke into the dim lighting of the main bridge as she watched the distance to the Richelieu’s jump point steadily decreasing. “In three, two, one, MARK.â€
“Mains are disengaged, Ma’am; all RCS thrusters are green; ship is holding station at your coordinates.â€
The steady pressure of 1-g of thrust died away, and the gravity disappeared, leaving her and her crew—and their passengers—weightless in zero-G. She rotated the command chair until she faced her XO, who also served as the ship’s navigator. “Tom, I hope that you have a solution; the First Lord and his family are waiting, you know.â€
The sandy-haired man looked at her in feigned shock. “I am wounded, O Captain, My Captain; cut to the quick, broken and distressed that you would even think such evil . . . “
“The jump solution, Tom?â€
“Ahem. Both solutions have already been tripled check, Captain, and are uploaded to the KF control system.â€
“Now why couldn’t you have just said that to begin with? Never mind,†she said with a laugh, as he began to answer. “I really, really do not want to know.â€
Reaching down, she pressed a stud on the side of her chair, opening a comm-link to engineering. “Harry, we all set to go visit gloomy Northwind?â€
“Captain, we are green across the board—KF core is charged and ready, LF batteries at 100%; Engineering is ready for a double transit—Asta-Saffel-Northwind. The core will require 60 seconds to reset between jumps. We are free and clear to jump on your command, Ma’am.â€
Flicking another switch, she reached up and adjusted the boom mike alongside her cheek. “All hands, all hands, this is the Captain. Stand by for Jump 1 in thirty seconds. Jump 2 will take place one minute following our arrival in Saffel. Mister Grainger, start the clock.â€
“Aye, aye, Captain. Jump clock is running, jump in 28 seconds, MARK.â€
Susie leaned back in the comfortable leather seat the SLDF installed aboard all its ships for those officers granted the honor of commanding one. For the next minute and a half she had but one duty, and unless an emergency suddenly erupted, she would not be aborting the jump. Until it was completed, she was as much a passenger as Stephen Cameron and his family and entourage. She smiled at the thought of them again. It had been good to spend the past five days with Marianne and Cassie; seeing how much the little one had grown had shocked her. And while she had learned of Marianne’s pregnancy, she had not completely realized just how far along her friend had been—or how much her belly and breasts had expanded.
Not that her carrying a child had stopped Marianne from berating her for not coming down planet-side and letting her know that she—Susie—had still been breathing. Friend or no friend, Marianne had a sharp tongue—and knew just what buttons to push. It had nearly come down to shouting, until Stephen interrupted and told Marianne that not just any officer could come and visit whenever he or she wanted to. The guards would have never admitted her, and besides she had duties her aboard her ship. Upon seeing his wife’s darkening face, he had beamed an innocent smile at her, and said, “But I am after all the First Lord of the League. A veritable dictator as my brother-in-law reminded me. Which is why I have instructed Lieutenant Colonel Moreau and Major Tanaka to give Susie 24/7 access to Branson House in the future. And that they are to connect any calls she makes to you immediately and without asking her the nature of the call—I do you know two like to gossip.â€
And he had smiled that crooked smile of his at them both, and then all three had broken down in a fit of laughter. She smiled again as the scene replayed itself in her head. It had been a good five days.
“. . . in five seconds, MARK,†the bridge engineer sang out, bringing her back to the present. “Four, three, two, one, JUMP!â€
The deck vibrated under her as the KF Drive Core engaged and twisted both time and space. To an observer on the picket ships nearby, SLS Richelieu vanished as though it had never been, only to reappear at the Nadir point of the now lifeless Saffel system.
“Jump 1 is complete, Captain,†Tom called from Navigation. “Navi-comp confirms arrival at Saffel-Nadir at programmed coordinates.â€
“STATUS CHANGE!†barked the Tactical officer from her station. “Multiple contacts, all vectors, velocity zero, range 1,000 kilometers. Ma’am, contacts are transmitting friendly IFF, confirmed as the escort ships 7th Fleet left behind.â€
“Thank, Miss Assante. Tom?â€
“Ma’am, engineering reports second coordinates are now uploaded and we may spin up the clock.â€
Lieutenant Commander Julius Grainger, nodded at her from his station, confirming the report.
“Very well, Mister Grainger, at your discretion.â€
“Aye, aye, Ma’am, from my mark, 30 seconds to Jump 2. MARK.â€
She looked across her bridge. It was a good crew; Lord knows they proved that when they managed to fight their way clear of Titan Base during the coup. The 940,000 battle-cruiser Richelieu was one of two such ships designed as a prototype ‘fast wing’ for the SLDF battle-cruiser fleet. More of a balanced design than the Black Lion class with a mixed battery of naval autocannon, PPCs, lasers, and heavy naval gauss cannons, they were capable of greater thrust, and were the first ships specifically designed to carry a HPG for interstellar communications.
While the older ships were fitted with the top-secret ‘hyper-faxes’—and in point of fact so was Richelieu—those systems were inherently limited in the amount of information they could transmit. A HPG wasn’t. In fact, within roughly 45 light-years, people at two separate HPG facilities could have a real-time conversation, though the power consumption insured that happened only rarely. Far more often, the comm section would use the HPG to send a burst message and then receive a reply. But her ship paid for that capability. Not only was the HPG far heavier, it required almost two dozen communications specialists to operate and consumed vast amounts of power when in operation.
After commissioning, Richelieu had passed all of the tests and exercises evaluating her with flying colors. But despite her success, Richelieu—and her sister ship Jean Bart—were not what the Navy had wanted. Construction had been halted after the first two ships, while SLS Alaska and her sisters were laid down. Whereas all of the incomplete Alaskas were in the Rim World hands, both Richelieu and Jean Bart—the latter only 84% complete—had managed to escape. Jean Bart had been hurriedly completed by SLDF mobile shipyards and now served in 2nd Fleet, while Richelieu—her ship—was permanently assigned to the First Lord. She grimaced at the thought. This ship was a WARSHIP, not some VIP transport. Damn Richard for taking such an interest in her. The fact that he had shared the first four letters of his name with the ship had caught his imagination—and she had spent six months in a construction slip prior to the coup having her passenger facilities completely rebuilt.
First Lord Richard had not lived long enough to take even a single trip aboard, but now her battle-cruiser was assigned to Stephen Cameron. She supposed she should be grateful since with the First Lord aboard her ship and crew would unlikely to be involved in assaulting SDS defended worlds. But she did not feel gratitude; she felt guilt.
“. . . in three, two, one, JUMP.â€
Once again the universe twisted and Richelieu arrived at the Northwind Zenith jump point.
“Tactical, confirm escort is in position,†she barked at Lieutenant Assante.
“IFF confirms escort is holding station, Ma’am, in a spherical shell pattern 1,000 kilometers out with a second shell at 2,000 kilometers.â€
Ensign Eylem Zhu—her communications officer—swiveled her chair to face Susie. “Ma’am, Halsey is transmitting; the Admiral wishes to speak directly with you.â€
“Put Admiral Schaeffer on line, Eylem.â€
“Hot mike, Ma’am.â€
“Halsey, this is Richelieu. Go ahead.â€
“Welcome to Northwind, Captain Collins,†Vice Admiral Jake Schaeffer said. “Don’t you worry about a thing; 7th Fleet will let nothing get anywhere near the First Lord. Captain, transmit your course to my Flag and we will match vector and acceleration.â€
“Aye, aye, Admiral,†she replied. “Eylem, Tom, transmit our course to Northwind orbit to the Flag. Maneuvering, bring us about to 033 Mark 171 and prepare to engage mains at 1-g of acceleration for zero-zero orbital insertion.â€
“Coming to 033 Mark 171, Ma’am; mains are ready to light on your command.â€
“Light ‘em up; Quincy, we’ve got a long ways to go and a short time to get there.â€
As the main drives fired, gravity slowly returned until the ship and crew were accelerating at a steady 1-g, a mere 16.6% of the maximum the vessel could maintain. But while the ship could take 6-g’s of thrust, her crew and passengers would be long dead if she held that level of acceleration for more than a brief period of time. All around, according to her sensors, the 120 ships of 7th Fleet began to match her course and speed. She resisted an urge to giggle at the sheer absurdity of it all. General DeChevilier and Admiral Kirkpatrick had insisted upon dispatching the ENTIRE 7th Fleet—all 196 ships of war—to escort her vessel to Northwind. In one hour, the 76 that had been left in Saffel would jump into Northwind, tasked with guarding the Zenith point. The OTHER 120—including six McKenna class Battleships—would guard her perimeter against any possible threat. Frankly, she thought it was a little bit of overkill, but it was the First Lord they were defending.
“All hands, this is the Captain. We have arrived in the Northwind system and are on course for orbital insertion. We will maintain 1-g of thrust until arrival, with turnover for deceleration in 57 hours and 28 minutes. Arrival in orbit will occur in 114 hours and 56 minutes. Stand down to Condition 2. Off-duty watch is dismissed from stations.â€
Switching off the intercom, she took the headset from her head. “Tom, you have the bridge.â€
“Aye, aye, Ma’am.â€
master arminas Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #213 on: April 16, 2009, 10:45:48 AM »Takiro,
I see the Makos as a hybrid between the two, similar to Kurita's DEST and Liao's Death Commandos (even if they do not exist at the time of this story). Kind of like the Gestapo in Nazi germany; they are 'outside' the bounds of the law. I see them as a secret police--but one that does not limit themselves to civilian activities. The Makos deal with ANY violation of the spirit of the orders of House Amaris, and any 'lack of commitment' to the cause.
Mechrat,
Sorry, I have not gotten back to you about Anders. Yes, his posistion as liason would have to be reassigned, even if I do not introduce the officer in the novel. Except to see Anders again before Book II is complete; I have some plans for the Taurian/Davion border coming up soon.
Hessian Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #214 on: April 16, 2009, 01:27:28 PM »Another well written chapter, Master Arminas! Thanks
from: master arminas on April 16, 2009, 09:53:12 AM
“IFF confirms escort is holding station, Ma’am, in a spherical shell pattern 1,000 kilometers out with a second shell at 2,000 meters.â€
One question though: Is the second number in the above excerpt correct? 2,000 meters?
master arminas Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #215 on: April 16, 2009, 01:29:28 PM »It should read 2,000 KILOmeters. Oops.
scourge72 Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #216 on: April 16, 2009, 03:40:57 PM »More afternoon reading. Yay!
Takiro Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #217 on: April 16, 2009, 03:52:14 PM »Another good chapter featuring the Rich this time.
As for the Makos I can see your point. Perhaps House Amaris created them after the Rim Worlds revolted against them during the Reunification War. Ultra loyal watchdogs of the House.
muttley Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #218 on: April 16, 2009, 05:12:08 PM »Nice "yacht"
Ice Hellion Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #219 on: April 20, 2009, 03:09:38 PM » from: muttley on April 16, 2009, 05:12:08 PM
Nice "yacht"
This is not a yacht, this is a Warship.

I am glad the Captain doesn't like the babysitting missions. Cheesy and you wrote a nice piece of fluff on the Richelieu.
I doubt the next one in the class would have been Alaska, the next two in line were the Clemenceau and the Gascogne.
MechRat Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #220 on: April 20, 2009, 10:26:49 PM »from: Ice Hellion on April 20, 2009, 03:09:38 PM
you wrote a nice piece of fluff on the Richelieu.
I doubt the next one in the class would have been Alaska, the next two in line were the Clemenceau and the Gascogne.
I think he was referring to the Alaska class WarShip. I read the passage as construction on the Richelieu class was halted to begin production of the Alaska.
master arminas Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #221 on: April 30, 2009, 09:02:27 AM »Chapter Forty
February 30, 2768
SLS Bunker Hill
En route to Northwind
Terran Hegemony
Lt. Commander Richard James Butler—RJ to his friends—listened as the various stations aboard the destroyer reported in at the mid-point of the third watch. 0200 hours, and all is well aboard the good ship Bunker Hill, he thought. RJ initialed the mid-watch report and filed it electronically into the ship’s log. Third watch seemed to drag on, but the mid-watch meant it was half complete. He would have laughed at the absurdity of it—he was a communications officer, for the love of Pete—but the Skipper had wanted him to get the experience of standing a watch as the officer in charge. In the SLDF, few officers outside of the tactical department were ever given the chance to take command, even temporarily. It just was not done. But the Skipper had a different view. She had taken him aside and explained that on HER ship, all bridge officers were expected to be able to take command—and that meant taking the command chair to discover just how much responsibility the job entailed.
Which was, at the moment, very little. The corner of his mouth twitched at the thought. Maybe the XO and TO—tactical officer—had wanted to get a bit more rack time. But still, he had to admit to himself as he stroked the leather arm of the captain’s chair, being in command—even if just for a short period of time—made him aware of all the little things he had missed in the comm section. RJ shook his head and stood, stretching as he looked over the bridge. Ratings and junior officers were at their post, tending to their control systems, and the holo-tank in the center of the compartment showed the same image it had projected for the past two days; 7th Fleet slowly moving towards Northwind orbit.
Bunker Hill was one of the far outriders of the Fleet, ten thousand klicks out from the second shell of warships covering the Richelieu with the First Lord and his family. The nimble little ship had ‘zigged’ out, away from the Fleet thirty minutes ago; in five more minutes, she would hit the way-point and ‘zag’ back in, her sensor array sweeping the area of space far out on the flanks of the formation.
“Coffee, sir?†a yeoman asked him, holding a sealed box containing bulbs of hot drinks.
“Thank you, Dietrich,†he answered as he took a bulb labeled ‘cream and sugar’. Twisting the dispenser cap, he let the hot steam bleed off as the liquid slowly cooled, and then took a sip. And almost spat it out his nose. On the far edge of the holo-tank, a red blip suddenly appeared—an unknown contact.
“Contact! Bogey bearing 042 Mark 002, range three thousand kilometers, closing at 15 kilometers per second,†his tactical officer sang out from his station.
The forgotten bulb of coffee hit the deck as RJ sat back down in the command chair and thumbed a button.
“CIC, Lieutenant Hampton,†the voice answered on the other end.
“CIC, Bridge. What do you have down there?â€
“Sir, bogey is not, repeat not, radiating, and we are detecting no drive plume.â€
RJ thought for a second, and then two, while the bogey steadily drew closer. No transponder signal could mean a malfunctioning civilian ship, but he had the First Lord behind him. He did not believe in coincidences. “Acknowledged, CIC,†he finally answered. “Get me an ID on them ASAP, Hampton.â€
“Aye, aye, Sir,†the voice replied.
He turned to the Chief of the Watch, a grizzled senior chief petty officer with thirty years experience. “Chief of the Watch, set Condition Two throughout the ship,†he ordered as he throat went dry. Please, he prayed, let me be wrong, he thought. RJ watched the older man’s face for a sign—any sign—that he was doing the right thing. The CPO merely nodded, his face set hard and grim, and he lifted a handset from a rack on the bulkhead.
“All hands, set Condition Two throughout the ship—this is not a drill. All hands, set Condition Two throughout the ship—this is not a drill.†As he finished speaking, the CPO pressed a stud at his station and a klaxon sounded throughout the ship, three deep whoops, echoing through the mostly empty corridors. Across the destroyer, spacers poured from their sleeping berths into the access-ways, pulling uniforms onto their half-naked bodies as they ran to their assigned stations.
Beside RJ, a buzzer sounded on the arm of the captain’s chair. HIS chair, at the moment. Grimacing, he reached down and flicked the switch. “Bridge, Lt. Commander Butler speaking.â€
“What have you got, RJ?†the soft contralto voice of the Skipper came over his headset.
“Ma’am, we have an unidentified bogey with no emissions, no transponder, approaching the Fleet from deep space at 15 kps, range is now down to 2,800 kilometers. I have sounded Condition Two throughout the ship, and,†he paused and looked over the status board to his right. “All stations and compartments are now manned, weapons are being warmed. The Plus Five birds are ready for launch, and the rest of the air group will be ready in ten.â€
“I’m on my way, RJ. If the XO or Commander Phillips arrives first . . .â€
“I will hand over command to them at once, Ma’am.â€
“Good. I’ll be there in a few, in the meantime launch the ready flight and have them do a recon sweep . . . “
“STATUS CHANGE!†the ensign at tactical cried out. “Bogey is launching fighters, HUNDREDS OF FIGHTERS!â€
RJ stood, as he stared at the holo-tank, now showing scores of crimson dots emerging from the unknown vessel. “Action stations! Clear all weapons, point-defense free!†he cried, even as he heard the skipper mutter ‘scheiss’ over his ear-piece, and the transmission cut off.
“Launch ready fighters—maneuvering sound acceleration warning. In thirty seconds begin evasive action. Comm, signal the Flag and append our sensor data to the transmission. Two hundred—possibly more—aerospace fighters approaching; give them our bearing and range, Sarah. Tell them Bunker Hill will engage when they enter our range.â€
“Aye, aye, sir,†she whispered as the blood drained from her face. But she bent down to her console and did her job, transmitting the warning to the rest of the ships of the Fleet.
“Bridge, CIC,†called out Hampton from the intercom. “Identify Bogey One as a Sampson class bulk transport DropShip—70,000 tons displacement. Positive ID on fighter strike: Maket, Mako, Nautilus, and Vulcan—300 plus. At present rate of closure we will enter weapons range in thirty seconds.â€
RJ swallowed hard. Those were Rim World aerospace fighters; and they could only be here for one reason.
“Weapons,†he said softly as he sat and buckled himself into the command chair, “you are free and clear to engage the enemy. Senior Chief,†he said with a chuckle, as the old spacer looked over at him. “I don’t think our ship would mind if we don’t wait for the white of their eyes, do you?â€
“No, Sir, the old girl won’t mind one little bit,†he said as he pulled his own restraining straps tight. The maneuvering klaxon sounded one final time, and the Essex class destroyer accelerated forward at more than 2.5-g’s, randomly altering heading and pitch as she went. The ship bucked as the capital missile launchers began spitting Barracudas at the oncoming wave of fighters, followed moments later by the laser batteries and naval autocannon. “For what we are about to receive,†the Chief of the Watch began.
“May we truly be thankful,†RJ finished.
February 30, 2768
SLS Halsey
En route to Northwind
Terran Hegemony
“Bunker Hill reports Rim fighter strike inbound towards the Fleet, Admiral. There are at least 300 that we have spotted so far.â€
“Fighters are short-ranged platforms, Captain,†Vice Admiral Jake Schaeffer replied. “Where are the carriers?â€
“They also reported a Sampson class bulk transport, sir. The Rimmers must have refitted the cargo bays to carry the fighters. Sir,†his chief of staff paused, “Bunker Hill is too far out for any of us to get there in time. They should already be tangling with the leading edge of the strike.â€
Jake swore under his breath. Bunker Hill had been a crack ship, with an exceptional captain who had a habit of turning average officers into excellent ones; a captain that also happened to be his niece. The pain tore into Jake for a moment before he forced it down. Too many of us are going to die in this war, he thought. Later, I can deal with this later. “That can’t be helped now, Brett. Scramble the CAP to intercept and have the outer screen execute Romeo.†Ops plan Romeo was based on just such a contingency—and would bring the combined fire of forty ships of the screen down on the incoming strike. The CAP would take any leakers.
“Shall we launch the reserve fighters, sir?â€
“No. Hold them back, and look for another shoe to drop. Three hundred is a lot of fighters, but not enough to ensure them of a kill—not against the number of ships they could bet we would use to protect the First Lord. There is something else out there, Commodore, and I want us to be ready when it arrives.â€
MechRat Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #222 on: April 30, 2009, 10:51:25 AM »Oooo! A new chapter! Grin Thanks master arminas!
It looks like things are about to get interesting. Undecided
Takiro Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #223 on: April 30, 2009, 11:10:42 AM »
Nice, can't wait to read.
Hessian Re: Blood and Steel « Reply #224 on: April 30, 2009, 11:50:26 AM »A new chapter! Very nice!
It will be interesting to see what surprises still await the SLDF in Northwind space...