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Shattered dawn storyline?
« on: December 28, 2016, 11:24:58 AM »

Does anyone have any notes as to where the storyline was going to go into the Succession Wars?  I was re-reading the Sourcebooks & BTA's 90th HA Black Tigers stories and wondering.

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Re: Shattered dawn storyline?
« Reply #1 on: December 28, 2016, 12:50:18 PM »

I have a ton Mutt, just ask away!
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Re: Shattered dawn storyline?
« Reply #2 on: December 28, 2016, 12:58:51 PM »

Awesome- thanks!

Who attacked the Republic first?  My money is on The Marik.

How badly were the Talithan Borderers hit in the early stages?

Did Kurita go anti-mercenary early on or just exploit them?

How early did Jennifer take over the LC, was Robert Archon at the start?

Did the Republic survive the 1st Succession War- or make it through to the 3000s?

More later, bite sized chunks to digest
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« Reply #3 on: December 28, 2016, 02:36:46 PM »

House Kurita attacks the Republic first in September 2785 when the Ronin Regiments under the command of General Daisuke Toyotomi strike at the Terran worlds of Lambrecht, Kervil, Telos IV, Lonestar, and Chaville. This is part of Operation Katana which aims to restore Dieron to the Combine as the 5th Military District. It is in direct competition with Operation Khopesh under the command of General Ramses Vron who strikes at the Lyran worlds of Trolloc Prime, Gram, Chimpaw, Kingtribel, and Shimosuwa. Their goal is to setup Vega as the 5th Military District of the Combine. Its a race folks and the first one to conquer their objective wins!

The Talithan Borderers were hit pretty badly by Operation Avalanche under the command of Captain-General Kenyon Marik but I think the Oliver Borderers got hit worse. 3 Talithan Borderers were destroyed by the massive Free Worlds League invasion while 1 withdrew to another world. However, 4 Oliver Borderers were destroyed by Marik and another 1 was forced to retreat.

Kurita needs every able regiment they can get in the war and while they always try to exploit mercs to the fullest did not ban them.

The transfer from Robert to Jennifer was on the canon timeline but his illness may not have been so natural in origin. ;)

Shattered Dawn was an alternate universe where the Terran state did make it all the way up to the Clan invasion but for specifics stay closer to the 1st Succession War.

Chew on that and umm yes you owe someone money cause it was the Dragon and not the Eagle who struck first.
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Re: Shattered dawn storyline?
« Reply #4 on: December 28, 2016, 05:42:43 PM »

Shucks!

Did Barbara Liao launch a full invasion aimed at Chesterton?  It looked like she wanted to annihilate the resident 4th Crucis Lancers as well.

Was the 1st War as brutal in Shattered Sphere?  It looked like the TR kept a higher tech base and was in better shape than (as Herb calls it) the Deadgemony.
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« Reply #5 on: December 29, 2016, 11:43:07 AM »

Lets see, Barbara Liao is the fourth Successor Lord to claim the First Lordship in January 2787. Later that month she orders assaults into Andurien space to begin. This is the start of Operation Anvil which intends to seize the entire Duchy of Andurien for the Capellan Confederation. 13 star systems targeted in 4 waves. Four systems at a time for the first three waves with a final single assault against Kanata. The first wave targets Antipolo, Guangzho, Hudeiba, and Deschenes. It isn't until November 2787 in the aftermath of his defeat on Procyon that Kenyon Marik redeploys his forces from the "battered" Terran front to conduct Operation Pathfinder - the infamous route to Sarna.

It isn't until October 2790 that the Capellans realizing that there is little to fear from the battered House Davion, the Capellan military begins major offensive operations along its shared border. The Capellans main target is the Chesterton Worlds which they have long claimed despite Federated Suns “occupation” for many years.

In some ways the 1st Succession War is more brutal than in canon yes but in others Shattered Dawn keeps a glimmer of light that was all but stamped out. Herb's Deadgemony which I find quite solid in the main setting suffers from a lack of central leadership which doesn't happen here. Aside from the Last Cameron there are several national Terran figures who unite the regions of the New Republic into a single state before the war. Yes they have a slightly higher tech base that lingers on to the 3020s.
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Re: Shattered dawn storyline?
« Reply #6 on: January 26, 2017, 12:22:22 PM »

So what would have been the outcome of SW-I, SW-II & SW-III if SD had continued?
Did it manage to kick the invaders out? Did it even manage to expand, it would almost have had to to survive without the tech advantage once enjoyed by the TH.


I never really liked the plunge into the chaotic abyss following the Clan invasion and the sudden fluidity of nation states which had remained essentially static for centuries suddenly going fully feudal and people no longer caring who ruled them. If they did it never ever had any effect except in the Sarna March where the Davions showed their French origin by surrendering to the first Liaoist to come along. Particularly annoying was the increasingly incoherent C* and FS/LC plots.
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« Reply #7 on: January 26, 2017, 04:57:56 PM »

Hey CJvR! Haven't heard from you in a while. Hope all is good bud.

Well that is a lot of info to disclose specifically so I will be general here. If you have a more specific question please ask. The Terrans did take a pounding from Kurita and Marik during the 1st War and even had to fight Liao and Davion at different points too. Gradually the Republic took back their systems and afterwards remained largely neutral as the Great Houses fought for dominance. Tech did suffer as in the canon timeline but not to the same degree for example Warships survived but the Republic maintained an edge.

As for general critiques I do have to agree that people lost their minds at times in the main line story.
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Re: Shattered dawn storyline?
« Reply #8 on: January 26, 2017, 09:07:24 PM »

2016 sucked but hope remains for a better 2017.
I have been around now and then but the place have been rather desolate since both SD & Kapteyn dried up.

One would think the TR had to expand somewhat to survive the SWs, but perhaps it could expand internally, expensive perhaps but in the end probably cheaper than waging all out war for bombed out worlds.
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« Reply #9 on: January 27, 2017, 06:24:19 AM »

The Republic sort of played a ComStar role after the 1st Succession War which is a return to Terran Hegemony policies prior to the Star League.

Sorry to hear about your 2016, hope your 2017 is much better!
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Re: Shattered dawn storyline?
« Reply #10 on: February 07, 2017, 10:43:40 AM »

When did the TR re-conquista complete?

So how close would the SD-SWs outcome parallel the canon universe?

How far into the tech abyss did the IS fall? WS survived, did your R-class make it (it seems like that was an angle in TRO-2800? SL tech survived, at least in some % in the house armies?

With C* neutered did the TR do the dark deeds of Holy Shroud and fan the flames of war?

And naturally what was the plans for the clan invasion (or the Return of the deserters as I like to call it). I suspect there would be enough bad blood between the HAF and the Clans to fill several ocean worlds.

It would to be hard to maintain the TR without the massive advantages that the earlier Hegemony state had or to get enough calm in SW ground zero to restore the edge the TH once enjoyed.
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« Reply #11 on: February 07, 2017, 12:07:55 PM »

Pretty much by the end of the 1st Succession War. While there were a few border planets here and there which changed hands over time the Republic is pretty much back to its claimed territory by 2820. Then there is a Terran Civil War....

Close but different. One of the things I love about alternates is the more things change the more they stay the same. So while the setting may be dramatically altered in ways certain events or characters are still easily recognizable. It is hard to quantify really.

Pretty far into the tech abyss in much the same way as canon but there again are changes. Like the Dark Ages of Medieval Europe after Rome there were technological advancements but nothing which could match the glory of Caesar. For example a limited number of Warships survive and still function but new Missile Boats (Dropships armed with capital missiles) have replaced them as the kings of naval combat. These smaller craft are much less visually impressive and rely on Jumpships to transport them into battle but in all other ways are more formidable then left over Warships. So you do have progress of sorts which I think the canon timeline misses out on. Other proven technologies also see "improvements" while "overly complex" but remarkable Star League advancements disappear in much the same way.

Your question on ComStar brings me back to the Terran Civil War which does much to change things in the setting. The death of Amanda Cameron and Jerome Blake leaves Ian Sinclair and Arnold Collins former comrades locked in a brutal struggle for control of the Republic which extends into ComStar (Corporate types like Schwepps vs Religious nuts like Toyama). The Houses are unable to intervene overtly due to material exhaustion as both sides vie for supremacy. Sinclair emerges victorious and Collins flees to the Rim Protectorate setting up a new nation of Terran expats bent on revenge. ComStar is sundered with the Houses moving to seize control over their interstellar communications you have a radically different situation. More technology is lost here and in the 2nd Succession War which follows. However Terra and to a lesser extent the Rim maintain some lostech secretly.

Our "Clan Invasion" is something I really still do not want to discuss as it is so radically different and cool I would still love to develop it further. Needless to say that 3050 is a long way off. ;)

I think you'd be pleased to see how it played out CJvR. The Terrans resume their old central arbiter position in the InnerSphere until the 4th Succession War. They are ham strung by material shortages but steadfastly maintain their position as best they can.
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« Reply #12 on: February 07, 2017, 01:35:46 PM »

Interesting developments.

So the nuke taboo never developed, at least not in regards to orbital warfare? Or were you going to introduce new nastier missiles? GBs will never displace WSs without resorting to nukes under the current design & cost regs.

Holding a civil war after SW-I sounds like the most moronic thing imaginable, no doubt a great deal of morons were involved in it. I dare a guess that the Collins faction will be involved in the Clan invasion in some fashion, them being setup in the rim is just very convenient (even if it is in a von Stang manner).

The fracturing of C* could have some seriously nasty consequences, it will allow the successor states to much further apart than they did in the original universe where the C* fracturing didn't occur until the houses had come to grudgingly accept each others existence and the benefits of interstellar communications. If the C* net fractures into national components before SW-II it would probably end most cross border communications as well as making HPGs priority military targets rather than neutral ground, that will furn the SWs even nastier and darker.

Too bad you didn't develop that timeline fully it sounds very interesting.
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« Reply #13 on: February 07, 2017, 04:25:35 PM »

The nuke taboo is a bit overblown in my opinion. Gun/Missile boats armed with capital missiles, which yes would have eventually evolved in a manner similar to subcapital weapons, can over come Warships without nukes. Numbers my friend, as Missile Boats begin to proliferate for a plethora of reasons (dropships can be constructed on planet, they are a cheaper investment, especially when you throw in the nuclear factor) Warships begin their rapid decline (orbital facilities are fragile and hard to defend, massive investment, and one good nuke strike blows it all up). It is a natural development. Greater numbers of Missile Boats versus a few Warships and you can see why those large vessels become important back ups.

Most morons don't realize war is a terrible thing until they are dead and maybe not even then. House Collins becomes the fourth major Periphery power which is a cool thing. Neat to have a Rim nation around as much as it is a Terran one. ;)

The fracturing of ComStar was one of those events in development that we never tackled in detail. There are checks on the complete breakdown of interstellar communications such as Terra's monopoly over certain key HPG components other Houses would have to reverse engineer in order to become truly independent. It is an intriguing thought project to see the consequences of such developments.

You never know CJvR, Shattered Dawn could be resurrected one day but heavy revisions would need to occur and right now I am having fun with my Clarion Call setting.
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Re: Shattered dawn storyline?
« Reply #14 on: February 08, 2017, 04:43:49 AM »

So which side of SW-IV did the TR end up on? A formal LC-FS alliance would be a mortal threat to the TR.

Without C* Explorer Corps how did the Clan war trigger? The Collinites? Did the Wolf Dragoons happen and if so did the TR hire them?

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Were you going with the canon BT sub-caps or were you to invent your own? IIRC there were some hostility towards the sub-caps for some reason.

Without nukes the traditional issue with canon cost modifiers remains, it costs at least 14 times more to mount a weapon on a dropper that on a WS ( I wish they had altered that when they revised the design rules rather than just adding a linear mod for KF drives).

Still the idea of going for a DS fighting fleet is an appealing one, sort of how the Dreadnoughts became obsolete in favor of the light fleet. Though fast DS combatants will cause issues for ASFs as well, perhaps it would cause a drift back to the old divide of dedicated space fighters (SC) and more atmospheric types (ASF)

btw: What SL tech did survive? trace amounts of everything or the most useful stuff like double heatsinks, gauss rifles and XL engines for ASFs?
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