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Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 12 Pt 1
« on: September 25, 2011, 04:50:21 AM »

Details on the story and why it has been written are as follows.

The why - a number of readers of my SD stories have asked why I don't write in more detail of some of the ordinary soldiers within my broken future. Machines and demons are fine - what about the real people. So, I listened and that is how Eldrid came into being.

The story is set in and around the world of New Sevilla, a part of the Second Church Protectorate. In particular it tells of life within the Church Guard and their struggles against the might of the Tauran Empire.

Let me know what you think as it goes along. I'm enjoying writing about Eldrid and I hope you enjoying reading about him.

Cheers

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard)
« Reply #1 on: September 25, 2011, 04:52:01 AM »

La Maestranza
New Sevilla
Second Church Protectorate


Eldrid spat a piece of broken tooth from his mouth. The b**ch had hit him with a pan! His beautiful wife, replete with dowry was bat-sh*t crazy. Over the last year she had accused him of an affair with an unidentified female, of hiding their life savings and most recently of trying to kill her. The local priest claimed that demonic possession was the only explanation, but having spent time with his wife’s family he was not so sure.

“Grow a pair,” she screamed, waving the grease-streaked implement wildly, “be a man and let me go!”

“The door is that way,” he mumbled, swiping the sleeve of his jacket across his mouth, “feel free.”

“You only want me for my money...”

“It’s your f**king father’s money,” Eldrid snarled, losing his patience, “and he can have it and you back. In fact I told him that last week. His answer was to laugh in my face. “Keep the money,” he said, “but for the Lord’s sake, don’t send her back!”.”

“Liar!”

“Unfortunately not. Listen Castra,” he said more calmly, “keep the money and the house, in fact keep everything. Find someone else to torment. I’m out of here.”

She raised the pan again with murderous intent.

“Don’t,” he said, “you fooled me once. Trust me when I say that you’ll never do it again.”

Her eyes flicked to his right hand which played with the hilt of the knife at his belt. Castra seemed to decide that mental abuse would be a more healthy option, and began to recite her repertoire of his faults. Eldrid merely smiled as he packed a small bag, wondering at how easily a weight could be released from around a person’s neck.

“Bye Dear,” he called as he closed the door behind him, “missing you already.”

His laugh echoed in the corridor as he heard her retort, the words could no longer hurt him.

Spaceport
Chavez City
New Sevilla
Second Church Protectorate


“Do you have the time?”

Eldrid looked up. A man barred his exit from the end of the alley. Behind him, he heard more footfalls. He had been expecting this.

A day spent in a tavern did not necessarily mean that he was drunk, but it was an easy mistake to make. In fact, although alcohol had passed his lips, it was only a means to aid his digestion, and in a small way to celebrate the end of his abusive relationship. For sure, no-one would have understood how a man as large as Eldrid could have suffered beneath Castra’s ministrations. She was petite, pretty and drew admiring gazes wherever she went. He, however, was easily overpowered by the scope of her anger.

His father lived by the tenet that any loss of control was a weakness, and had taught his children the necessity for a positive outlook in the face of adversity. Each new day brought joy and opportunity, although Eldrid’s choice of wife had been a bone of contention between them. They reached an agreed peace before his father’s untimely death, and Eldrid’s last private words, before the flames took his wasted body, had been ones of contrition.

It was therefore with a resigned smile that Eldrid stopped, relaxing his muscles for what he knew was to come.

“Sorry,” he said, “I’ve been a little preoccupied today and left my chrono at home.”

The man smiled back, his open mouth revealing blackened and twisted teeth. A quick glance over Eldrid’s shoulder revealed the presence of others.

“Castra says hello,” said the man, unlimbering what looked like a cosh of some sort.

“She never knows when to let something go,” responded Eldrid, “and now she has your blood on her hands.”

Surprise turned to shock as Eldrid threw his bag straight in the man’s face, following it with a snapped kick into his opponent’s groin. He span, blocking the overhand strike of another attacker. With a twist, he disarmed the man, continuing to exert pressure until he heard a bone snap. Now he used the second attacker’s momentum to spin him into a third, in whose hand he saw the glint of steel. Eldrid stepped forward, grasping hair and smashing his knee into a face. There was the crunch of bone and a satisfying scream of pain. All three men were confused, disoriented. Castra no doubt had told them of how weak and spineless was her husband.

He retrieved the dagger from the floor, deliberate in his movements. The blade was sharp and the skin around the third man’s throat proved of little resistance. Fear and pain greeted him as he turned to the second attacker. It was short-lived, the blade driven deeply into the man’s chest. He left it there.

“Castra always underestimated me,” he said conversationally as he retrieved his bag, in passing noting the small device emblazoned on the men’s tunics, “but in a way she has won. Now I must leave my home, this night’s work is too much even for her father to ignore. I would ask you to take her a message, but this will have to do.”

The cosh smashed into the groaning man’s temple, crushing bone. Eldrid probed with a finger and struck again. Satisfied, he turned away, whistling a tune as he headed for the main Port buildings.

La Maestranza
New Sevilla
Second Church Protectorate


Joshua David winced as the door to his study slammed open. He had no doubt who was making their entrance.

“Castra,” he drawled, “to what do I owe this pleasure?”

His nonchalance stopped her for a moment, but no longer.

“You cannot ignore this. He has besmirched my honour, demeaned me and embarrassed me in front of others. What are you going to do?”

He had in fact been considering his options before she had so rudely interrupted his thoughts. Eldrid’s message was clearly intended for both of them and he could not ignore it. Castra’s anger and precipitation had caused the death of three of his men and a created a slight that he needed to erase from the minds of his followers.

“You must...”

“Shut up!”

His words were clearly enunciated and cold. It was the latter which stopped her in mid tirade. She remembered the last time he had spoken in such a tone. Men died.

“Your whims and anger are no doubt my fault.” He said, “That, however, does not resolve our issue. You married a man beneath your station, tried to turn him into something he was not and forgot who he really was. Three men lie dead because of you.”

He held his hand up in warning as she drew breath.

“Heed my word, girl. One more stupid comment and I’ll have you dragged away and publically flogged. That is an embarrassment I am sure you will long remember.”

Castra bit her lip, eyes flashing, but held her tongue.

“Eldrid Wild is a soldier. He was trained to kill for us, to protect us and sow discord amongst our enemies. You tried to turn him into a noble, then berated and abused him when he did not live up to expectations. You tried to kill him, without my knowledge or permission. Have you forgotten where his family came from?

“Idiot girl. Be thankful he has left our planet. I must respond to his little message though, and so you will get your wish. He is a dead man. The order has been given. Now get out of my sight!”

King Joshua David watched her leave, triumph in her eyes. May the Great One keep me safe, he prayed, for Castra as Queen was a future he wished on no-one.

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 1
« Reply #2 on: October 12, 2011, 12:17:32 PM »

Chapter One

Cadaen City
Caer Seus
Fortress Worlds
Second Church Protectorate


Three days. Eldrid knew mentally how much time had passed, yet each minute felt an eternity. The tramp freighter which dropped him here ensured his anonymity and this seedy tavern merely added to the disguise. Bad food and even worse ale did not make him feel alive, even though he knew he was.

A commotion at the far side of the room drew his attention; an older man tried to reason with a very drunken younger one. Father? Uncle?  Lover? It did not matter, it at least alleviated some of the boredom. There was a scuffle and the young man fell backwards amidst roars of laughter and cheap ale. It was then Eldrid noticed the three rough-dressed, ugly soldiers approach. They were not in uniform, but Eldrid knew their type, and neither of the two other men noticed them. Blood was about to be spilt.

Almost without thought, Eldrid moved. He stood casually and sauntered over, mug of ale clutched in his right hand.

“Excuse me...”

The older man looked up, wariness apparent.

“You seem to be having some trouble, and I thought perhaps I could help?”

As the man began to respond Eldrid slammed his mug into the face of the first of the uglies, the knife in the man’s hand having convinced him that the time for polite conversation was past. A shower of blood, teeth and ale cascaded onto the older man’s head. He reacted by rolling clear and standing, a wicked dagger appearing as if by magic in his hand.

“Nice move,” said Eldrid, carefully watching the remaining attackers.

“I take it you are not with them?” the older man jerked his head towards the men preparing to attack.

“No, I just hate ill-mannered people...”

The older man winked at Eldrid, as his drunken charge began to stir.

“Who do they want?” asked Eldrid moving to give himself some space.

“My nephew,” said the older man, as he gently kicked his groaning charge, “he just loves spending other people’s money.”

“My ex-wife’s got the same problem,” muttered Eldrid, swinging to face a new attack. He parried the cosh aimed at his head, kicking out and connecting with a kneecap. He just meant to stun the man, but his anger at his situation took over and the force of his kick shattered bone. The man screamed, his leg buckling beneath and Eldrid continued his attack, meeting the man’s temple as it fell, the ball of his foot connecting with a meaty thud.

“Oops,” he said, stepping backwards and looking for the last attacker. He need not have worried, the last of their foes lay gurgling, the hilt of the older man’s knife protruding from his neck.

“I think he wants to say something,” said Eldrid.

“Whatever it is, it can’t be important,” said the older man, reaching for his knife. He shrugged as the blade was buried beneath the collapsing body. He turned and offered his hand.

“General Peter Franc,” he said, “pleased to meet you...”

Eldrid took the proffered hand and introduced himself, “Eldrid, Eldrid Wild.”

“Soldier?” asked the General.

“Once upon a time,” admitted Eldrid, “now I’m in between jobs.”

The General laughed, as he dragged his nephew to his feet, “Well I might have some work for you. Care to help me return my nephew to the bosom of his family?”

“Why not?” said Eldrid, “The excitement here seems to have died down.”

Laughing they hauled the drunken man to his feet and staggered in companionable silence into the street.

Caer Seus
Fortress Worlds
Second  Church Protectorate


Space bulged, strained and tore as the two craft re-entered reality. They were old, battered by space debris and scarred by battle. Twin turrets protruded from their rectangular bodies, their stark blackness broken by the evenly spaced and brightly lit windows.

Artur Ap Naub smiled as he once more saw the star-studded universe shimmer into being. Fold space was tiring; colours exploding into endless variation became boring after the first twenty-four hours. They had been travelling for weeks now and he was pleased to at last be here.

“Lord?”

He glanced down at his aide; the hulking man bowed his head in respect. These Tauran Elite were different. They no longer gloried in death for its own sake. They had honour. A puerile and worthless thing, yet they had their uses.

“Prepare the men, Gorkus,” he said, studying the almost clean lines of the Elite. Soldiers who lived in their Battle Armour, hidden from their companions and betters, The twin butterfly blades of the war axe strapped to his back reflected the red light of the control room. It gave him a demonic touch, but was quickly gone as Gorkus stood to carry out his orders.

Artur preferred Gorkus’ men. Hathor, Gorkus’ Unit Commander, was a fine Tauran; ugly, deformed and wantonly evil. His red skin proved his lineage, as did his uncontrollable appetites. Gorkus and his kind had won their right to rule in battle and Hathor’s resentment was obvious.

Tauran society was, according to Artur, screwed up. It had always been chaotic, but recently the impossible occurred. Laws and even ethics had entered societal structure creating a new Tauran Elite. This clan, genetically created and enhanced, fought its way to the top, imposing its will on the cursed majority. Only the Tauran nobility remained untouched. Religion had its advantages.
This campaign would change things. Artur had his plan, and Gorkus and his kin would help him on his way.

*

Gorkus checked on his men. Tauran Elite were proud, haughty even. Their exalted status and prowess in battle did little to promote a humble nature. Rank came through battle, and internal competition. If Gorkus once showed weakness, he would be challenged and perhaps defeated. Their rigidity meant that disputes could be settled cleanly and without rancour. Hathor and his men were another matter.

He looked across the staging area at his ugly Unit Commander. It was clear to all that Hathor was Tauran; skin colour, and horn buds the more obvious signs. Although it was his aggressive nature and vicious cruelty which truly confirmed his genetics. The Elite knew that many questioned his own lineage and wondered what lay beneath the hardened Battle Armour. Gorkus grinned. They would be shocked if they ever found out. He moved t face his men.

“It is time,” he said, watching as they stood and checked their weapons, “form your ranks.”

He turned to Hathor, “Get them into the shuttle, Unit Commander.”

Hathor spat, the mucus-filled ball landing a careful distance from his officer. He smashed his fist against his nearest man’s head and used his feet to hurry the rest of them on their way. It was effective thought Gorkus, but bred no loyalty.

Artur Ap Naub would have sneered at such a thought, yet to Gorkus it felt right. He nodded at his Elite companions and they followed him into the shuttle.

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 2 Pt 1
« Reply #3 on: November 08, 2011, 05:46:47 PM »

Chapter Two


Cadaen City
Caer Seus
Fortress Worlds
Second Church Protectorate


Light streamed in through the open window, waking Eldrid and momentarily disorienting him. The evening’s events blurred together, yet clean sheets spoke loudly of his changed circumstances. Arriving at the General’s villa, he had been shown to his quarters whilst the older man, with the aid of two servants, carried his nephew to bed.

The sound of movement below suggested it was time to get out of bed, and after a quick wash and shave, he made his way downstairs to the kitchen. He found the General there, enjoying a hearty breakfast.

“Sit, Eldrid,” said General Franc, indicating a place across from him at the breakfast table, “my nephew won’t be joining us, I fear, but perhaps that’s for the best.”

Eldrid sat, waited for the servant to lace a full plate before him of steaming bacon and eggs, then spoke.

“My thanks, General, it’s been a while since I’ve slept in clean sheets.”
The General laughed and took a drink of water.

“It is I who should thank you,” he said sitting back, “I think that I had perhaps bitten off more than I could chew.”

Eldrid started to speak, but General Franc waved him to silence.

“You saved me and my nephew from certain injury. Therefore, I would like to do something for you. News has reached me of a dangerous criminal recently escaped from New Sevilla...”

“It’s a lie...” began Eldrid, but stopped as the General continued to smile.

“I know King Joshua, and have heard of his lovely daughter. It strikes me a little unlikely that you are guilty of all the crimes you are accused of.

“It does leave me with a dilemma though, I owe you a huge favour and yet my duty presses hard on me.”

He saw Eldrid’s hand close around the handle of the knife next to his plate and grinned.

“You won’t have need of that,” he said, “I have a way of repaying my debt and ignoring the demands of a spoilt child.”


Eldrid was interested now. He leant forward, ignoring his breakfast.
“I have experience of unruly children. You met my nephew briefly last night. He is a good soldier, but an awful judge of sensible behaviour. He needs someone to teach him what is right and proper, and to keep him out of trouble whilst he does so.”

“I am no nursemaid,” growled Eldrid.

“Of course not, Eldrid, but you are a soldier, and that is what I need. We are at war; the Taurans have opened a new front and Captain Franc joins his new command tomorrow. What he needs is a good sergeant at his side.”

Eldrid stared for a moment, “You want me to in the Church Guard?”

“We aren’t that bad,” laughed the General, “and n-one is looking for Sargeant Eldrid Wild, Even if they find you, it’s a different proposition killing one of the Church Guard.”

“But I’m no Sargeant...” said Eldrid, picking at his food.

“You are if I say so and you wear the right uniform.”

It took Eldrid little time to make up his mind, “What do you want me to do, Sir?”

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 2 Pt 2
« Reply #4 on: November 28, 2011, 03:21:10 PM »

The familiar bustle of the staging post calmed Eldrid as he approached the Command tent. This was the culmination of a strange morning; spirited away from the General’s villa, his rapid departure explained away by the need to avoid the stirring nephew. A quick ride to the barracks saw him outfitted with a pristine uniform, sargeant’s stripes covering a multitude of sins. He dropped his duffel bag by the entrance and presented his papers to the alert pair of guards stationed there, Whatever else the nephew may be, the response of the guard detail spoke volumes.

“Sargeant Eldrid Wild, reporting for duty,” he said, watching carefully as the taller of the two perused his papers.

“Wait here please, Sargeant,” said the man with grudging respect, “the Captain has but recently returned from the city.”

His companion grinned at the comment, but snapped to rigid attention as Eldrid raised an eyebrow.
A short while later, the tent flap opened and Captain Franc stepped forth, a steaming mug of liquid held in his hands.

“Name,” he snapped.

“Wild, Sargeant Eldrid Wild, Sir,” said Eldrid, coming to attention. Both the verbal and physical response was ingrained in him. Years of training overcame any trepidation he might feel.
“Impressive,” commented the Captain, slowly reading the paper in front of him, “the General seems to think highly of you.”

Eldrid kept quiet. He had long ago learned to deal with officers and remained still, his gaze fixed on a point just past the Captain’s left shoulder.

“Your experience will come in handy. You’re fortunate, our Sargeant Frome was recently reassigned and so we have a ready vacancy.”

He stared at Eldrid, waiting for him to speak, but his new Sargeant knew better.

“They are a good crew,” he continued, “Frome’s men, and so you should have no trouble. Come see me after you’ve settled in. I’ll have some orders for you by then.”

“Sir,” said Eldrid, snapping off a crisp salute.

Franc looked surprised and glanced down at the paper again.

“Ah,” he said, “Colonial Protection Duty...” It seemed to explain much to him, and after a moment he grinned, the action changing him and making him just a little more human.

“We’re not great on rigid formality,” he explained, “at least not when in the comfort of our own barracks. That salute went out of fashion some time ago.”

It seemed at odds with the disciplined guards at his side, almost as though it was some kind of test.

“Yes Sir!” barked Eldrid, turning sharply and picking up his bag. There would be time to learn to learn exactly what had happened here, for now he needed to see to his men.

Captain Franc watched him go, “Well, my dear Uncle,” he muttered to himself, “what exactly are you up to now?”

A discrete cough reminded him of the presence of his guard, and he ignored the subtle signal, staring after the retreating figure. Frome’s reassignment  was just too convenient.

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 2 Pt 3
« Reply #5 on: February 04, 2012, 04:36:15 AM »

Automatic Early Warning Systems detected the presence of the Tauran ships soon after their entry into local space. The AEWS’ urgently beamed signals were treated with initial disbelief which rapidly turned into frantic action. Before the Attack Shuttles from the Tauran ships were fully deployed, weapons platforms stirred into malignant life.

A worry-free Artur Ap Naib stared at his screen, waiting for the expected response. He smiled slyly as his captured signal was sent to the waiting machinery and the systems powered down. Artur just loved traitors. They were such a useful commodity.
For now relaxing local troops, the first real signs of trouble came as the Attack Shuttles strafed the dormant platforms. By then it was much too late to react, but Church Guard fighters scrambled anyway.  Many of them were destroyed in initial launch, as the Tauran Attack Cruiser eagerly joined in. For himself, Artur Ap Naib knew that this was only the beginning, yet it was a good one.

In his shuttle, Gorkus ignore the shouts and chattering of communications traffic. The job was yet to start; ground batteries were human-controlled and would not be fooled by simple command codes. He checked Hathor’s orders and nodded coldly. It was time to begin.

*

On the ground, Eldrid had but recently formed up his men when the first information on the attack reached him. There was no time to remember names nor to assign new duties. Klaxons screamed, calling his Church Guard to their posts and he raced along with his men to their assigned stations. Out of the frying pan…he thought to himself as he checked his auto-rifle. Frome’s men knew what to do and Eldrid was thankful to the General as his men grimly awaited the Tauran offensive.

His communicator buzzed.

“Wild,” he responded.

“Yes, it is, Sargeant,” said a calm voice, “this is Captain Franc. I just hope you’re as good as your file says you are. It seems as if our visitors have targeted your location as the ideal spot in which to begin a new and beautiful friendship. I will be joining you shortly. Try not to be too welcoming, and you don’t have to wait for me whilst you explain to our new friends’  their lack of manners and the expected social niceties in polite society.”

“Yes Sir,” replied Eldrid seeing the tell-tale breaking jets of an Attack Shuttle, “it appears as though they are eager to meet us.”

Franc’s voice changed, “hold them there,” he said clearly, “we will be with you shortly.”

The snap of the broken communication was drowned out by the roar of the approaching craft.

“okay, boys,” Eldrid said calmly, “time to show these Taurans a good old Church welcome. Singing is not forbidden, yet I would rather hear the sweet music of their agony and deaths. There will be no prisoners.”

Unknown faces peered up at him, yet they did not show fear. Frome had definitely done a good job with them.

“Fire at will!” shouted Eldrid, following his own advice as the first Taurans spilled from the Shuttle. He heard the comforting sound of his men’s weapons and laughed at the absurdity of his situation. Maybe New Sevilla had not been that bad after all.

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 3 Pt 1
« Reply #6 on: February 04, 2012, 05:29:47 AM »

Chapter Three

Cadaen City
Caer Seus
Fortress Worlds
Second Church Protectorate


A screaming horde burst from the Attack Shuttle, forming into tight knots of well-trained soldiers. Each group had at its head two armoured figures, their appearance giving rise to the first touch of fear in Eldrid’s belly.

“What the…” said one man, lowering the point of his auto-rifle as he indicated the new and unknown force facing them.

“They all die…” growled Eldrid, firing off a quick burst, the rounds pinging harmlessly off the toughened carapaces in front of him.

“S**t!” mouthed the man.

“Shut up and fire,” growled Eldrid, turning to his signals man.

“Pass this intel on to the Captain…and where´s the gunner?”

A scrabbling beside him signaled the arrival of his special weapons team. He grinned back at the wild-looking soldier and his mate as they set up their equipment.

“Medina and…?”

“Walsh, Sargeant.”

“Yes, Walsh. Are you ready to open up our account properly?” asked Eldrid, indicating the two figures striding unharmed towards their position.

“Yeah,” drawled Medina, “I’ll put a hole right through that shuttle. No worries there…”

Eldrid slapped on the side of the head, drawing a venomous look.

“No you won´t, soldier,” he said, “you are going to win me a little bet.”

“Sir…?” Medina was clearly perplexed.

“I think that these ugly b*****ds never learnt to fly without mechanical help, a problem of evolution I think. Prove me right. I want him...” he pointed at the lead figure who moved steadily on, ignoring the hail of fire directed at him.

"My pleasure…Sh*t!”

This time Eldrid’s fist clanged hard against the man’s helmet.

“The correct address is Sargeant…My pleasure, Sargeant. We can´t afford to forget our manners now, can we Medina?”

Medina watched him for a moment before he laughed.

“No, Sargeant,” grinned Medina, “it will be my pleasure, Sargeant. Now, what do I get if I prove you wrong?”

“To kill more of them,” said Eldrid, “and the beer’s on me when this is over.”

“And if he fails…Sargeant?” asked Walsh.

“He buys the beer,” replied Eldrid, “now stop prattling and nail the ugly s.o.b!”

“Target acquired,” murmured Medina, just before he winked insolently at his new Sargeant.

Any thought of reply was drowned out by the boom of the crew-served autocannon. It rocked back on its tripod as the heavy calibre armour piercing round spat towards the Tauran Elite. With an audible thud of impact, it threw the armoured figure backwards, arms flailing. Medina was still cheering, claiming that the Tauran had “flown at least a couple of feet” when Eldrid cut him short.

“Reload,” he said calmly, as the Tauran got back to his feet, a visible dent in the front of his armour.

“What the f**k!” breathed Walsh, but Eldrid did not want further discussion.

With a short “hit him again”, he raced away.

“B******d!” cursed Medina,” he’s nothing like Frome…”

“Meds?” interrupted Walsh.

“Yeah.What?”

“You’re right,” agreed Walsh, awe in his voice, “he’s as crazy as you are!”

They watched Eldrid stoop to pick up a satchel charge, then surge towards the Taurans. His cry of, “I said hit him again!” caused Medina to laugh.

“Yes…Sargeant,” whispered Medina, impressed in spite of himself. His brief “Target acquired” went unnoticed as his auto-cannon barked once more.

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 3 Pt 2
« Reply #7 on: February 22, 2012, 01:27:06 PM »

“This is completely screwed,” said Eldrid to himself as he saw the Tauran hit the ground again. With a final burst of speed he reached the armoured figure, just as it began to struggle to its feet.

Eldrid planted a heavy boot on the Tauran’s chest as he twisted the timing mechanism on his explosive charge. A large hand grasped his foot, lifting the offending boot effortlessly.

“Cr*p!” gasped Eldrid, swinging the satchel around, its magnets clamping hard to the Tauran’s armour. Disdainfully it tossed him aside, hands moving to tear the device away.

As he hit the hard-packed earth, Eldrid kept rolling, hands covering his ears.

“Suicide bombers, my arse”, he muttered as the following explosion at least made him fly.

His impact drove the air from his lungs and he struggled to draw breath. The loud bark of the auto-cannon was the first real sound to break through the ringing in his ears. Shaking his head, Eldrid looked around for the Tauran. He saw an arm and then part of a torso. The auto-cannon continued to fire.

“Not doing that again,” he groaned, crawling back towards his men, his only thought of how he just had to lead by example. Something grabbed at the back of his tunic and he tried weakly to fend it off.

“Sh*t, Sargeant,” complained Walsh, “I’m only trying to help.”

Eldrid let him, leaving on the small man as he stumbled back to his position behind the barricades.

“You lose, Sarge,” quipped Medina as Eldrid half-fell next to him, “you never said it had to fly all in one piece.”

Eldrid laughed wryly, admitting defeat as Medina fired once more.

*

Gorkus saw his companion fall, then come apart as the reckless Church Guardsman exploded his satchel charge. Now there was a warrior, he thought, as he watched the rest of the Guard positions over-run. Hathor had returned to type, roaring and swinging his rusty battle-axe in wide swathes of destruction. It would soon be over.

He was still thinking that way when the bombs began to drop indiscriminately amongst the battling troops.

“Cowards!” he screamed, until realizing that the protagonist was none other than Artur-Ap-Naib. His leader had brought his Attack Shuttles in low, looking for a quick end to the battle.

A curse formed on Gorkus’ lips, but got no further as an auto-cannon round punched him from his feet. The remaining Church Guards under command of the reckless warrior were attacking again. He rose looking for his men and heard the recall signal. The falling ordnance got thicker. Something clanged against the back of his helmet, and he slapped the offending attacker aside. It was Hathor.

“I always knew that I would have my moment,” sneered the red-skinned Tauran, raising his axe on high, “I just had to be patient.”

Gorkus stared coldly at the frothing Hathor, giving himself up to this fast approaching death.

“No you don’t,” said a quiet voice as the butt of an auto-rifle blocked Hathor’s downward blow, “this one’s mine.”

“No!” snarled Hathor, freeing his weapon and preparing to strike. Eldrid emptied the full auto-rifle clip into the Tauran, just as the welcome sound of his men joining him came to ears.

“You sit there,” said Eldrid, slumping next to Gorkus, “I’m sure that my Captain will want to talk with you.”

Gorkus watched him keel over, just as Medina and Walsh appeared, grinning savagely. He looked down at Eldrid. There was no doubt in his mind that he could defeat these human soldiers and kill this warrior. Yet, honour forbade him. His own side had resorted to treachery and cowardice when the battle was already their’s. This one had at least fought as a warrior should, and now there was a debt to be paid.

It was with this decision that Gorkus’ life changed. He had been beaten for the first time in his life, and by a human soldier. No longer did he lead. Both honour and duty must be satisfied and that meant a change of allegiance. This did not worry him as much as it should, rather he saw himself bound to a new Lord, stronger than himself. Life now had a purpose and Gorkus was satisfied.


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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 3 Pt 2
« Reply #8 on: March 08, 2012, 09:00:44 AM »

It's always good to read your stories, Rayo. This is another fine example of your work. Thanks for posting.
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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 3 Pt 2
« Reply #9 on: March 13, 2012, 03:44:16 AM »

It's always good to read your stories, Rayo. This is another fine example of your work. Thanks for posting.

Thanks Rat. Good to see you around.

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 3 Pt 2
« Reply #10 on: March 13, 2012, 12:40:08 PM »

Thanks Rayo,

I'm trying to work my way back online. The universe has been taking a collective dump on my head for the past 6 months...  >:( Almost everything that could go wrong, has. I'm ready to kill that Murphy chap! ;)
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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 3 Pt 2
« Reply #11 on: March 13, 2012, 01:47:57 PM »

Thanks Rayo,

I'm trying to work my way back online. The universe has been taking a collective dump on my head for the past 6 months...  >:( Almost everything that could go wrong, has. I'm ready to kill that Murphy chap! ;)

Just remember Sod's Law : "MURPHY WAS AN OPTIMIST"  :o and of course, drink more beer  ;)

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 4 Pt 1
« Reply #12 on: March 13, 2012, 02:33:19 PM »

Chapter Four

Cadaen City
Caer Seus
Fortress Worlds
Second Church Protectorate


“Fire at will!”

Artur-Ap-Naib watched as his men obeyed; the destruction exquisite. Bombs fell slowly and indiscriminately onto the defenceless city below. Any anti-aircraft positions had been targeted early, leaving a clear field of fire for his men. Ap-Naib had never meant to take the city by the strength of his troops alone. It had been a feint, one which he had kept to himself.

It was glorious; orange petals of flame blossoming on the darkened buildings. Dust, rock and human flesh erupted skywards and the Tauran breathed them in. This was life.

He felt no pity for those he had thrown away. Rather he saw them as sacrifices to the true cause. A signal beeped on his personal console and he smiled. The promised reinforcements were here and now the real killing would begin.

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“There are too many of them,” said captain Franc as more Tauran Shuttles disgorged their troops.

No-one answered him, his men concentrating on killing the now overwhelming force before them. Slowly they had been forced back, deeper into the city until they reached the central plaza. Rough barricades of overturned hover cars, doors, broken furniture and whatever else they could find served as their only protection. Here they would have to make their last stand.

Suddenly, the assault stopped and a lone Attack Shuttle dropped to the open cover in front of Franc and his men, its point defenses swiveling to face the remaining Church Guard.

“Hold your fire,” shouted Franc, as the craft’s main door slid open. A man clad in red armour strode forth, a black cloak billowing out behind him. Almost contemptuously he turned his back on the Church Guard and raised his hands to his troops who roared their support.

“Cheeky ba****d, isn’t he? Muttered Franc as the man turned to face him.

“I am Artur-Ap-Naib and I give you a choice,” he waited as if for comment, but then continued,” and it is this. Surrender your arms and live, or fight and I will destroy you.”

Franc stood up on one of the more sturdy parts of the barricade and replied.

“The Church Guard is not in the habit of surrendering to terrorists, invaders or petty tyrants. So, we thank you most heartily for your kind offer, but must decline.”

Artur-Ap-Naib smiled, “Do you speak for all of them? I will then change my offer.”

He moved so that all within the flimsy barricade could see and hear him before snarling, “Give me your Officer and the rest of you can live.”

Franc laughed; the arrogance of the man. It was his last thought as pain exploded in the back of his head.

“Kill them,” growled Ap-Naib to the Elite by his side, “all except ten of them. You may choose nine. The tenth should be that Officer. I want him to live with the knowledge of this betrayal. It will be a fitting payment for his defiance.”

Silence greeted his words and Ap-Naib glanced at the tall, armoured figure by his side.

“You have something to say?” he asked, but the Tauran Elite shook its head and moved away.

Ap-Naib watched as his men began the slaughter, but his mind was elsewhere. He would have to speak with his Master again, it was time something was done about these arrogant Elite.

The screams of the dying brought him back to the present. This would suffice for now and the rest could wait.

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 4 Pt 2
« Reply #13 on: April 23, 2012, 09:50:02 AM »

Gorkus grunted with the effort and shifted Eldrid’s dead weight. The strange rat-like Medina was ahead, scouting the area before signaling them forward. His mate, Walsh, was by his side, five others strung out behind them. They had picked them up in their travels, saving their lives in a number of small skirmishes. Medina’s skilled had surprised Gorkus, almost as much as his own caused grudging respect from the Church Guard. Neither had been willing to leave Eldrid behind and their only argument occurred over what to actually do with him. Gorkus solved the problem simply by picking up the unconscious Sargeant and following Walsh. This decision was now beginning to weigh heavily, more physically than metaphorically, and Gorkus was wondering whether to ask for a small respite. Any decision was taken away by a grunted “put…me…down…” and Gorkus willingly obeyed.

“Sargeant,” said Medina happily as he trotted back to the now seated Eldrid, “have you enjoyed your rest?”

“Cheeky sod,” muttered Eldrid, rubbing his arms and legs in an attempt to encourage his circulation.

“What happened?” he asked, looking at Gorkus.

“The Taurans took the city, or rather should I say they destroyed it.” Interrupted Medina, “We fought our way out, finding some of our boys and girls on the way. Now we are trying to get out of the city in one piece.”

He nodded towards Gorkus.

“That thing refused to leave you. Quite touching really.”

Eldrid laughed and struggled to his feet, refusing Medina’s proferred hand. He shuffled over to Gorkuas and crouched down.

“What do you want?” he asked without preamble.

“I do not understand,” replied Gorkus, truly sounding puzzled.

“Why are you here?” Eldrid tried a different tack.

“You are here,” replied Gorkus simply, “where else would I be?”

Now Eldrid was confused.

“What has this got to do with me?” he asked.

“You beat me, then you saved my life. I ask you again, where else would a follower be, but by his leader’s side?”

“But I’m only a Sargeant,” said Eldrid lamely.

Gorkus shrugged, the movement causing the moonlight to reflect of his strange armour.

“Where you go, I follow. Tell me what you want me to do.”

“Later,” said Eldrid, getting back to his feet, “for now I need to find out exactly where we are.”

The Tauran Elite said nothing, merely rising and following closely behind.

Prison Compound
Cadaen City
Caer Seus
Fortress Worlds
Second Church Protectorate


Captain Franc awoke disoriented. He remembered his act of defiance and the pain in his head. Bastards! Someone had slugged him from behind. Looking around he saw he lay propped against a wall. Somewhat apart from him were other members of the Church Guard. A ragged bunch of soldiers huddled together in the center of an open area of hard-packed earth. Raising himself on one elbow he studied his surroundings. They were held within a fenced area, Tauran soldiers patrolling the exterior, weapons at the ready.

Slowly he stood, ignoring the pain thumping in his head, and moved towards the group of his fellow prisoners.

“Where are we?” he asked, and was greeted with a sullen silence. Recognising some of his men, he tried again, yet none would meet his eye.

“I asked you a question,” he said, refusing to back down.

“Who do you think you are?” the question came from a new source, a large man who pushed his way through the crowd, clenching his fists in anger.

“An Officer, soldier, and don’t you forget it!” replied Franc, rage overpowering him.

“Yeah,” spat the soldier, “one of those who got my mates killed. Right now, you’re nothing, just another prisoner waiting to die.”
Franc usually avoided conflict, but instinctively knew he could not back down.

“Sir!” he snapped, “you will call me Sir!”

“Not fu…” the man’s defiance was abruptly cut short as Franc slammed his fist into the open mouth before him. He followed it with a brutal kick to the knee, before smashing his elbow into the protesting man’s temple.

“What do you call me?” he growled.

“Sir,” said one man, quickly followed by the others.

“Now,” Franc said calmly, “you were about to tell me where we were.”

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Re: Eldrid (Officer Of The Guard) Chapter 4 Pt 3
« Reply #14 on: May 07, 2012, 09:44:05 AM »

Eldrid watched the Taurans march by, keeping himself to the shadows. He frowned as he saw the group of prisoners amongst them. This was the second such patrol that they had encountered as they attempted to leave the city. It was obvious that the Taurans were intent on rounding up any Church Guard stragglers left behind by their retreat. It was proving almost impossible to escape detection. They needed another plan.

The Sargeant rejoined the rest of his men in the abandoned shop where they had found refuge. Gorkus brooded silently to one
side, watching Eldrid’s every move.

“So now what, Sarge?” asked Medina, chewing on an energy stick.

“A change of focus,” replied Eldrid, looking at his remaining troops.

“If we intend to get out of here, we need more men and weapons.”

“And how do you suggest we achieve this objective,” continued Medina, raising one eyebrow.

“We take them from the Taurans,” growled Gorkus.

“You’re a sodding Tauran,” snarled Medina, “and don’t think we’ve forgotten that.”

Gorkus shrugged, “I was, but not anymore. Now I am one of you.”

Medina laughed and raised his rifle, “I can soon take care of that.”

“Put down your weapon soldier,” said Eldrid, his calm tone surprising Medina, “we don’t have time to fight amongst ourselves.”

“But…”

“I won’t ask you again…” said Eldrid, as he withdrew a combat knife from his belt. He turned to face Gorkus, reversing the blade and holding the grip towards the Tauran Elite.

“Take it,” he said, “and don’t make me regret it.”

Gorkus knelt and bowed over the blade, causing Eldrid no end of embarrassment.

“Well,” he huffed, turning back to face Medina, “our companion…what is your name?”

“Gorkus,” replied the Elite, purpose filling his voice.

“…Gorkus, was suggesting a possible plan. Thoughts?”


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