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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #75 on: February 12, 2011, 03:27:31 PM »

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I like the map. My only critic is, that some of the labels are too small and the map would look better, if you only use one font size. If the nations/regions you want to label are too small to write into them, just use numbers and an index to label them. IMO, it would give the map a more polish look.

That can be done, but the choice was made to have the labels in each state.  The program auto-resizes the labels when the option is taken to keep labels within thier polygons.  I can set all sorts fo label parameters and the label engine then goes and does it thing. Basically, when making these, I go with what the universe creator wants, as the overall aethetic is to fit to thier creative ideas.

Numbering the smaller states is also an option, but not one we went with.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #76 on: February 12, 2011, 03:29:31 PM »

Oh wow, how could I have missed this!

Too much to look at?
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #77 on: February 12, 2011, 03:30:26 PM »

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Ah. I see it now. Thanks for clarification KM! Perhaps it would be wise to better differentiate visually the "Disputed" Territories from the independent,unaligned Territories?

One thing I treid to do was keep the Disputed Teritories from having a major colour and clashing with the various states.  The cross hatching was the cleanest option that could be distinguished at a close up, without effecting the map at lower zooms.  Normally I would go for solid grey, but that was being used for the Terran regions.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #78 on: February 12, 2011, 03:38:42 PM »

One thing I treid to do was keep the Disputed Teritories from having a major colour and clashing with the various states.  The cross hatching was the cleanest option that could be distinguished at a close up, without effecting the map at lower zooms.  Normally I would go for solid grey, but that was being used for the Terran regions.

I had the same question  ;)
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #79 on: February 13, 2011, 08:51:39 PM »

Alight, so I've gotten a little further along than I thought I'd be...

The start up release will include the following material:

1. Basic History Primer (which you guys have been reading here - left intentionally generic)
2. Overview & Detailed Map of the Inner Sphere
3. Regional (Faction) Maps
4. History of ComStar (a generic look at ComStar before the Blackout & During)
5. AU Source Material
   - How Development of the AU Works
   - Faction List
   - Chapter 1 AU Turning Points
      (Faction Specific Chapter 1 AU Turning Points are given to Member Developer directly)

That pretty much sums it up.

I'll try to have a PDF finished sometime this week - I'm in the process of finishing the ComStar section & faction specific Turning Points - and available for download before the weekend. 

This release should form the core of the AU's overall development and can be incorporated into the finished product.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #80 on: February 14, 2011, 07:14:47 AM »

Excellent, i for one look forward to downloading it.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #81 on: February 14, 2011, 12:49:08 PM »

Excellent, i for one look forward to downloading it.

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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #82 on: February 15, 2011, 10:09:33 AM »

Just a teaser. Here's an excerpt from the ComStar/History Section.

When the Lights went out – A critical review of the HPG Black Out – What Really Happened?
By Professor Marie Anwar, Oxford University, Terra 3025


Jerome Blake created ComStar as a neutral organization to protect technology, and therefore humanity. What he neither intended, expected or noticed was that his organization would become a safe haven not just for those individuals who believed in his message and methods, but also for those individuals who would take it to the extreme – those people who were scarred by the wars and who would not look at ComStar as a safe haven, but as not safe enough, and who would take Blake’s mandate to extreme degrees.

These individuals, later known as the Order, created a subculture within the ComStar organization and set plans in motion for the Inner Sphere to burn itself out. Blake’s organization, which espoused neutrality and sought out to protect technology and knowledge, would be used against him, against ComStar, and against the Inner Sphere – for these individuals used ComStar’s cloak of neutrality and its network to manipulate the policy for their gain. They secretly demolished HPGs, making it look like terrorist attacks or deliberate assaults by the House Lords. These actions led Blake to force his hand, interdicting the Inner Sphere to prevent what he perceived as violence against ComStar. And so, to protect the organization’s neutrality, he set out to silence the Inner Sphere. In doing so, Conrad and his disciples used this window of opportunity that they had created to enact their grand plan to destroy the HPG network. And thus, Blake’s policy unlocked Pandora’s Box.

So, who’s to blame? Well, Conrad of course. But on a deeper and less sinister level, Blake himself. For although interdicting the Inner Sphere was a mistake, it was an inadvertent one that could have been avoided had he spent more time scrutinizing the individuals within ComStar, rather than just those outside of it, and instead of simply providing a safe harbor for anyone who asked for it. In the end, Blake’s altruism worked against him.

Sadly, both this mistake and the manipulations behind it have left a lasting legacy for ComStar. For even after spending well over a century rebuilding the network and repairing the mistake they are still haunted by Conrad’s actions and the deeds of his followers. They have to be very careful that their best intentions are not yet again perverted and used against them. A trail of mistrust and secrecy follows ComStar even to this day, and while they are not a religious organization, their actions are reminiscent of the Free Masons of old – minus all of the mystical trappings. ComStar must still directly face their infamous legacy to this day – encountering pockets of people throughout the Inner Sphere, decades later and on isolated worlds, who believe in the ideals that Conrad espoused, and where his cult of personality still persists to this day. People, who are still willing and waiting to try to take down the network yet again.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #83 on: February 15, 2011, 10:20:17 AM »

Very nice teaser. Can't wait to read the rest of it.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #84 on: February 15, 2011, 11:27:50 AM »



Jerome Blake created ComStar as a neutral organization to protect technology, and therefore humanity. What he neither intended, expected or noticed was that his organization would become a safe haven not just for those individuals who believed in his message and methods, but also for those individuals who would take it to the extreme – those people who were scarred by the wars and who would not look at ComStar as a safe haven, but as not safe enough, and who would take Blake’s mandate to extreme degrees.



Nice!
One small question though.
I am no native English speaker, so I could very well be wrong, but the highlighted part of the teasers first paragraph looks and reads funny to me. Is there perhaps a word missing?
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #85 on: February 15, 2011, 12:15:08 PM »

It's right, but could be written a little better. I'll rewrite and tighten. Thanks Hessian.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #86 on: February 15, 2011, 02:02:35 PM »

Looks good to me.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #87 on: February 15, 2011, 04:43:17 PM »

Thanks guys...working on the InDesign Template now.

Realized I'll have to get more of the individual nation "turning points" and suggested "flavors" before this is finished.
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #88 on: March 09, 2011, 08:32:19 AM »

Thanks guys...working on the InDesign Template now.

Realized I'll have to get more of the individual nation "turning points" and suggested "flavors" before this is finished.

Status Update:

Finishing final text revisions for the Introductory Booklet. I've also finished 1/3 of the remaining "Turning" Points & "Flavor" Points for all of the available factions. There are a few additional key areas of extra information I'd like to have available for the Introductory Booklet, but in the interest of time I might provide them as a supplement.

This project turned into something much larger than expected...
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Re: Primer to Age of Chaos
« Reply #89 on: March 09, 2011, 02:42:55 PM »

They always do.
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