Haha I never noticed the second version of the map it is so busy.
The only real issue I have with it is the Clan Worlds and Minnesota Tribe being so close to the Inner Sphere 20 factions (assuming they all exist) that close to the Inner Sphere if they had the same tech they had in canon then they'd steamroll nearby factions very very quickly.
But I do love the effort that was put into it its a real great piece of work