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Fanbook 4 – Technical Readout 2800
« on: February 16, 2010, 07:22:48 PM »

Takiro Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « on: October 21, 2008, 08:26:03 AM »

Okay, folks I'll open this thread up for our newest book first. I'll get to the others later. So in your reading if you notice a mistake please quote it as well as giving us the page number, chapter, and paragraph it appears in. The nature of the problem might also help.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #1 on: October 21, 2008, 11:17:17 AM »

Post Production was a little rushed (my fault) so I've already noted a number of mistakes (spelling, punctuation, formatting, etc.)

But I may have missed something (probable) so please mark it here.

Hessian Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #2 on: October 21, 2008, 01:17:30 PM »

Well...
It seems that the stats-block for House Davion's Daring-class corvette is missing.
Pages 144 and 145 contain Overview, Capabilities and Deployment, but the dedicated stats-block isn't there

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #3 on: October 21, 2008, 01:25:31 PM »

Ah yes, the Daring. I do recall Knightmare mentioning its immense entry size was giving him fits.

Page 5 (Eclipse - Intro Story) 4th Paragraph

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It wasn’t until 2587—______fifteen years ago—that Amanda Cameron-Sinclair, now married and Regent of the new Terran Republic, had been able to extend Project Phoenix to this world, helping it to pull itself from the depths of despair.

Should be 2785 and I would add almost in the space I created.

master arminas Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #4 on: October 22, 2008, 11:32:49 AM »

Also on the intro story (don't know the page), you missed replaced on occurance of Genoa with Bex, in the 1st section that details the Capellans waiting to jump into system.  Overall, a truely fantastic work with the TRO.  Nicely done, guys, nicely done.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #5 on: October 22, 2008, 11:48:26 AM »

Sorry bout that Master Arminas, thought I changed all Genoa to Bex. My apologizes. If you could give me the location it would be most helpful. Thanks very much for the kind words.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #6 on: October 23, 2008, 06:07:48 AM »

There is a page number glitch between the FWL Nemesis and the LCN intro.

Last Nemesis page is 201 ( PDF 202 ) and the first LCN page is 200 ( PDF 203 ).

Also the FS Emerald class is called a BC everywhere except the headline on it's fluff and stats pages.

Hessian Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #7 on: October 23, 2008, 11:56:09 AM »

The entry for House Kurita's Hokosaki class Frigate is incomplete.
The stat block misses completely and it seems that the fluff is also incomplete as on page 123 the Hokosaki fluff abruptly ends mid-sentence.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #8 on: October 23, 2008, 12:49:56 PM »

That happened during the construction. One of the files is missing. Ugh..I'll upload the new version 1.01 today. It'll have some of the corrections made...

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #9 on: October 23, 2008, 03:30:24 PM »

Quote from: Hessian on October 23, 2008, 11:56:09 AM
The entry for House Kurita's Hokosaki class Frigate is incomplete.
The stat block misses completely and it seems that the fluff is also incomplete as on page 123 the Hokosaki fluff abruptly ends mid-sentence.
The FS Daring is also missing a stat-page.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #10 on: October 24, 2008, 09:25:53 AM »

Yes, the Daring was a disaster to run stats on, unfortunately the greatest strength and weakness of the TRO is our fluff. Odd fluff sizes have created disjointed page and entry lengths, making two page construction difficult. However, now that all of the entries have been built I can run through the 100+ documents and start combing. 2nd Ed. will have a slightly different ToC, but it'll flow better, sit tighter, and contain far less blank space. (Consequently masking the lack of art, which is essentially page filler.)

Ice Hellion Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #11 on: October 24, 2008, 12:52:26 PM »

Quote from: Knightmare on October 24, 2008, 09:25:53 AM
2nd Ed. will have a slightly different ToC, but it'll flow better, sit tighter, and contain far less blank space. (Consequently masking the lack of art, which is essentially page filler.)

And if we let you go, it will be perfect but will never be released.  Cheesy
And this is not a criticism my good old perfectionist friend  Wink

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #12 on: October 24, 2008, 05:36:10 PM »

In the DCA 2785 navy list the Auxilliaries is numbered to 95, but only the 50 Kujiras are listed.
Also the text isn't bolded.

EDIT:

The first column of the TR Defender cruiser's stats are actually those of the Bainbridge destroyer, including the name!

EDIT 2:

The TR Genesis is described in the TRFM as having both LFB and HPG but no mention of this is in TRO2800. Perhaps a second cheaper Genesis built during the war, although the cargo mass is the same...

btw: the LC only had 4 WS production lines running in 2785 according to the LCN yard list, did they really not have more than that up and running on the eve of war?

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #13 on: October 26, 2008, 12:02:47 AM »

Quote from: CJvR on October 24, 2008, 05:36:10 PM
In the DCA 2785 navy list the Auxilliaries is numbered to 95, but only the 50 Kujiras are listed.

There should be Catalyst Tankers and Vulcan Tenders listed.

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btw: the LC only had 4 WS production lines running in 2785 according to the LCN yard list, did they really not have more than that up and running on the eve of war?

That's covered by the fact that the LC had the oldest warship fleet.  By the time they had converted to more warship production most of the yards were wiped out.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #14 on: October 26, 2008, 12:04:08 AM »

Page 206 the Lyran navy introduction:
the following bit at the end of the page:
The Lyran Commonwealth has always been a major industrial power.
While the Free Worlds League may have been at the forefront of aerospace innovation among the Great Houses, the
Lyran Commonwealth far outstripped them in sheer manufacturing capacity. In fact the Commonwealth’s jumpship
and dropship construction was second only to the Terran Hegemony. With the outbreak of hostilities, the nation’s
shipyards became key targets for the League and the Draconis Combine. Despite the Lyran’s best efforts to defend
the yards, they were relatively easy targets for the raiders and many were destroyed or badly damaged. This has
dramatically reduced the Lyrans’ Jumpship production and brought warship production to a virtual hal

should be on page 207 as the introduction to the Shipbuilding Industry section.
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Re: Fanbook 4 – Technical Readout 2800
« Reply #1 on: February 16, 2010, 07:26:36 PM »

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #15 on: October 26, 2008, 10:11:44 AM »

And just to be complete, the total absence of the Hegemony class Battlecruiser from the book. Contents and the Terran Royal Navy section.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #16 on: October 26, 2008, 10:29:55 AM »

Don't have that one Tak. Honestly, I just ran through all of my Word files! I'm missing it and didn't even notice!

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #17 on: October 26, 2008, 12:44:05 PM »

I sent it to you yesterday via e-mail. The only way you should have had a clue that the Hegemony was supposed to be in the book is its art. Granted it was the old Black Lion but that was it. The layout file I was working from and gave to you didn't have it at all. Only in my research for the next product did I find the error. My fault largely but I placed it in this clearing house thread in order to keep a tab per say on what had to be corrected. Everything should be in your e-mail. Wink

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #18 on: October 26, 2008, 03:05:45 PM »

Helps to check it! Got it! Thanks Tak!

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #19 on: October 31, 2008, 03:39:30 PM »

There is something in the Firebird fluff.
Central column: "...convinced the Rim Navy to under larger projects."
Shouldn't that be "...to undertake larger..."

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #20 on: October 31, 2008, 04:34:20 PM »

Yeah that is a common Takiro writing error, where a thought is not completed on paper and a new one pops in there resulting in old one being unfinished. Roll Eyes Good spot CJvR!

Also noticed the the table of contents has another error, the Princess is listed before the Black Ball under dropships when in fact the opposite is true.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #21 on: November 01, 2008, 02:29:07 PM »

Got another question about the missing Daring information over on CBT this morning and just wanted to post this here as well.

Wanted to apologize again for those oversights and get you some solid information of where you can find those design right away. Luckily the Hokosaki and the Daring were both Design Contest winners so I can simply send you to their respective threads. Links below. Want to also say I'm sorry to the designers for not getting their designs correctly into this TRO. We are working on it and this was not done intentionally. If you are looking for the Hegemony, no worries. It appears at the end of Fanbook 1 – Terran Republic 2785 and was to be included here for the sake of completeness.

11th BTSD Design Contest – Hokosaki class Frigate
http://www.classicbattletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,31654.0.html

15th BTSD Design Contest – Daring class Corvette
http://www.classicbattletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,35012.0.html

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #22 on: November 01, 2008, 07:38:46 PM »

How about the correct info on the Defender? (wtf is "corrst"? Sound like something you might order in a Taurian resturant.)
A bit curious on that one...

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #23 on: November 01, 2008, 07:44:35 PM »

I will look into it. See what I can do.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #24 on: November 01, 2008, 08:04:15 PM »

Also since you have included the Bug-Eye in such a prominent fashion in BTSD will you be using the SC weaponry and KF drive from Tac-Ops? They seem ideal for the kind of war the TR seems to be prepping for - loads of gunboats to take up the mantle of the fallen battlefleets.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #25 on: November 01, 2008, 09:58:57 PM »

Little off topic here, but we are thinking about it. Take a look for the sub capital weapons thread.  Wink

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #26 on: November 02, 2008, 07:24:30 AM »

Quote from: Takiro on November 01, 2008, 09:58:57 PM
Little off topic here...
OK back to nitpicking then.
In the Juggernaut specs the ammo for the AR-10s are listed as (5KW, 5WS, 10B) but since it is a four tube array it should probably be double those amounts.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #27 on: November 02, 2008, 07:40:25 AM »

Hmm, that was a direct copy from HMA. I'll have to check on other ships like the Royal Sovereign which used AR-10s.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #28 on: November 02, 2008, 06:19:40 PM »

Thanks CJvR

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #29 on: November 08, 2008, 12:21:56 PM »

The text for the Ascalon mentions that the class was equipped with LFB but that is not in the specs.

Also in the FWLN intro:
"...sparking another one of the war's largest naval engagements."
another largest sounds a bit wrong IMPO, great or large would flow a bit better.
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Re: Fanbook 4 – Technical Readout 2800
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Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #30 on: November 08, 2008, 01:58:47 PM »

Thank you sir, I'm working on the Leviathan revision now should be complete this afternoon. Wink

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #31 on: November 08, 2008, 02:45:10 PM »

DCA intro mentions Kerensky's Wrath as if it were a ship but that exact phrase have been used elsewhere for the actual general, a bit confounding. Have I missed something?

Also a huge deal is made of the extent of the DCA sneaking ships around to the extent that 1/3 of it's fleet is deployed in fleets not even publicy recognized yet the DCA's OoB is not significantly larger than the rest of the fleets. Also a thought that the DCA with half it's support units slated for conversion in case of war would desperatly need something to pick up the slack of losing half it's logistics train before firing a single shot - especially since it was on the offensive from day one.

The  "Manufacturer:" line for the LC Icarus is oddly streached.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #32 on: November 08, 2008, 03:27:24 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on November 08, 2008, 02:45:10 PM
DCA intro mentions Kerensky's Wrath as if it were a ship but that exact phrase have been used elsewhere for the actual general, a bit confounding. Have I missed something?

There my friend you have stumbled upon a tidbit of things to be detailed. Sorry if it is a little bit in artful but tis a foreshadow. I will give you this since you noticed. FM TR 2785 has two mentions of an Operation Silver Spear. Foreshadowing as well. Other fanbooks might give further hints (HINT, HINT). I will say no more than Silver Spear and Kerensky's Wrath are related. Lips sealed Details to follow. Wink

Quote from: CJvR on November 08, 2008, 02:45:10 PM
Also a huge deal is made of the extent of the DCA sneaking ships around to the extent that 1/3 of it's fleet is deployed in fleets not even publicy recognized yet the DCA's OoB is not significantly larger than the rest of the fleets. Also a thought that the DCA with half it's support units slated for conversion in case of war would desperatly need something to pick up the slack of losing half it's logistics train before firing a single shot - especially since it was on the offensive from day one.

During the Star League era the DCA did alot of sneaking around accounting for missing warships and wild estimates that exaggerated the size of their possible fleet. It cuts both ways you figure if the SLDF or anyone else can't figure out what exactly you have. Do they have more? Less? They more then anyone created a mess for other parties interested in determining their naval strength. Other Houses were able to pass Kurita with superior industry and clever mothballing, ie Davion.

Which support units are you referring? The Kujira? It still carries an impressive cargo hold and engages in support missions but it can do so much more.

However I did notice an error when looking at your post CJvR.

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In 2370 the first true Draconis warship, the Sultan class Heavy Cruiser, was deployed. Other Kurita warships like the Kyoto class Destroyer launched in 2389 began to replace the
primitive armed jumpships that previously made up the Combine fleet.

This was a first version I thought I had corrected. Guess not. The Terrans launched the Dreadnought said to be the first true warship in 2300 and I doubt it would take Kurita 70 years to duplicate the techniques. Master Arminas bought this point home with his Mikasa class Battleship which he has timed more reasonably for commissioning in 2314. Old classes I have to sort through, the Sultan and Kyoto are likely second generation true warships.

Thanks for the spots CJvR!

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #33 on: November 08, 2008, 04:46:36 PM »

Just a note on the Thor class BB. It has a fuel capacity about 10 times it's contemporary ships in the LCN - not that I object but it sticks out a bit in the LCN OoB, although it is a fairly easy refit.

Also unless it has been mentioned before the TRN OoB header for the reserves is a bit mangled.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #34 on: November 08, 2008, 05:10:57 PM »

Quote from: Takiro on November 08, 2008, 01:58:47 PM
Thank you sir, I'm working on the Leviathan revision now should be complete this afternoon.
I hope the Lev is about to shrink a bit, not even the LevII was quite that big... Smiley

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #35 on: November 08, 2008, 05:22:09 PM »

How so on the Leviathan CJvR? Huh

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #36 on: November 08, 2008, 05:26:20 PM »

Quote from: Takiro on November 08, 2008, 05:22:09 PM
How so on the Leviathan CJvR? Huh
Middle column "At over 740 kilometers long and mounting...", that is quite a ship!

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #37 on: November 08, 2008, 06:14:20 PM »

Ah yes, the kilo is now gone just meters now.  Wink Thanks again sir!

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #38 on: November 08, 2008, 06:50:27 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on November 08, 2008, 04:46:36 PM
Just a note on the Thor class BB. It has a fuel capacity about 10 times it's contemporary ships in the LCN - not that I object but it sticks out a bit in the LCN OoB, although it is a fairly easy refit.


Actually that is correct- the Thor serves as a flagship for the LC fleets and also as a tanker for the smaller ships.  I think we detailed that some where - maybe in the description of the Lyran fleet organization.   

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #39 on: November 08, 2008, 08:52:07 PM »

I believe we did Irose. How does this scan for a Leviathan redux?

LEVIATHAN CLASS JUMPSHIP

Tech: InnerSphere
Introduced: 2468
Mass: 400,000 tons
Length: 748 meters
Sail Diameter: 1,276 meters
Fuel: 200 tons (500)
Tons/Burn Day: 39.52
Station-keeping Thrust: 0.1G (0.2 Thrust)
Sail Integrity: 5
KF Drive Integrity: 8
Heat Sinks: 142
Structural Integrity: 1
Battle Value: 2,079

Armor
   Fore: 16
   Fore-Sides: 14
   Aft-Sides: 14
   Aft: 14

Cargo:
Bay 1: Small Craft (4) 2 doors
Bay 2: Cargo (1,690 tons) 2 doors

Dropship Capacity: 8
Grav Decks: 2 (100-meter diameter)
Escape Pods: 6
Lifeboats: 6
Crew: 28 minimum (4 Officer, 24 Enlisted)

Ammunition: 24 rounds of LRM 10 ammunition (2 tons), 30 rounds of SRM 6 ammunition (2 tons)

Notes: Equipped with 214 tons of standard armor.
 
Weapons:          Capital Attack Values (Standard)
Arc (Heat) Type   Short   Medium   Long   Extreme   Class
   Nose (Heat: 24)
2 PPC            2(20)   2(20)   -   -   Laser
1 SRM 6(30 rounds)      1(Cool   -   -   -   SRM
   Fore Left/Fore Right (Heat: 22)
1 Large Laser         1(13)   1(Cool   -   -   Laser
1 Medium Laser
   Aft Left/Aft Right (Heat: 22)
1 Large Laser         1(13)   1(Cool   -   -   Laser
1 Medium Laser
   Aft (Heat: 4)
1 LRM 10(24 rounds)     1(6)   1(6)   1(6)   -   LRM

Overview:
   Prior to the Monolith, the Leviathan Class was the largest Jumpship in existence. First introduced in 2468 by the Free Worlds League, the Leviathan was geared towards transporting the League's large infantry formations.
   A mammoth undertaking by the Free Worlds League, the Leviathan was designed during the Age of War after it become readily apparent that the current Jumpship classes were incapable of moving whole infantry divisions. Prior to the introduction of the Leviathan, the Free Worlds League was forced to transport its military piecemeal to the battlefield, running the risk of losing unit integrity and raising the difficulty of coordinating planetary assaults. By reducing the size and number of transports assigned to a task force, the Jumpship allowed for a reduced cost in military spending by the Free Worlds League.
   Though it was touted as a huge waste of resources by opponents of the Captain General in the Free Worlds League Parliament, the Leviathan proved, in hindsight, to be a good choice. Having the ability to transport large numbers of troops  proved extremely beneficial to the Free Worlds League Military and all subsequent users.

Capabilities:
Weighing in at 400,000 tons, the Leviathan outclassed small warships of the day, eclipsing event a couple Corvette classes. At over 740 meters long and mounting a large number of docking collars, the Leviathan certainly lived up to its name. Clearly a product of the Age of War, there was no mistake in the Leviathan's intended role as an interstellar transport. With 214 tons of armor, the Leviathan was provided with a thick armored shell against aerospace fighter attacks. Because the Leviathan's design was built during the Age of War, the ship was also outfitted with a number of conventional weapons for defense.
The Leviathan's eight docking collars are split evenly above and below its spine, resembling what may look like a giant arachnid in space. The Leviathan was one of the first Jumpships to contain extensive command and control facilities, a feature that would be replicated on the later Monolith class. The Leviathan's control equipment, although primitive by modern standards, allowed the coordination of dozens of Dropships, thereby allowing the Free Worlds League navy to easily coordinate the landing of its troops. The Leviathan also housed a large fuel bunker that allowed it to remain in the field for long periods of time. The vessel also contained a large cargo bay capable of carrying nearly seventeen hundred tons of consumables during transportation.
In addition, the Jumpship contained four small craft bays which housed a variety of shuttles and aerospace fighters to provide the Jumpship and its passengers with additional defense. The Leviathan had a number of features to benefit its numerous passengers, including two 100 meter diameter Grav Decks. It became standard League naval policy to allow Dropships carrying infantry rotational use of the Grav Deck facilities when on extended deployments. This helped to boost morale and relieve some of the tension created by being cooped by in a cramped transport for long periods of time.

Deployment:
The first Leviathan Jumpships were launched in time for the Alula Borealis campaign of 2470 which saw the League's first 'Mech deployment. The success of this massive transport soon attracted the attention of foreign buyers which included the Draconis Combine. While negotiations took many years the near constant lobbying of its manufacturers eventually overcame any reluctance. The Leviathan proved to be as much of a financial success as it was a military one for the Free Worlds League.
During the creation of the Star League Defense Force and the outbreak of the Reunification War, the Leviathan class proved its worth by transporting the bulk of the Free Worlds League forces, the entire Seven Corps, to the Magistracy of Canopus under the command of Captain-General Marion Marik. The Leviathan class Jumpship would prove crucial in allowing the League's forces to amass a vast number of troops over worlds such as Restitution, making it possible for the Star League to achieve local aerospace superiority and to bring vast troop formations to play.
Throughout the course of the Reunification War, numerous Leviathan class Jumpships were loaned to various SLDF combat theaters where they continually proved their worth. Unfortunately, because the Leviathans could carry so many troops, the loss of one was a devastating event: either by losing all its transported troops or by stranding them until a replacement vessel could arrive. This demonstrated a huge flaw in the Star League's deployment of the Leviathan, and a number of these Jumpships were lost in places like Taurian Concordat. Following the end of the Reunification War, reflection on the Jumpship's performance called for the creation of a larger and better protected transport vessel for the SLDF's divisions that resulted in the unique Potemkin class Troop Cruiser.
With the coming of the Golden Years of the Star League, the expense of operating and constructing new Leviathans prohibited the need to construct new vessels and the class suffered a slow withdrawal from active naval service in both the Free Worlds League and Star League navies. By the late 28th century the aging class itself was replaced by the newer and larger Monolith class Jumpship and many of these relics of the Age of War were sold into the hands of private concerns or regulated to a support role. By the early 2800s, less than fifty of this famous Jumpship remained active in the Inner Sphere, with more than half still in the hands of the Free Worlds League navy.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #40 on: November 09, 2008, 05:08:41 AM »

Looks good to me.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #41 on: November 09, 2008, 10:15:41 PM »

Same.

Walegrin Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #42 on: November 10, 2008, 10:21:12 PM »

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By the late 28th century the aging class itself was replaced by the newer and larger Monolith class Jumpship and many of these relics of the Age of War were sold into the hands of private concerns or regulated to a support role.

Should be relegated, right?

Otherwise it looks good to me.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #43 on: November 11, 2008, 03:14:27 PM »

Quote from: Takiro
I will look into it. See what I can do.
Have you found anything on the Defender? Im a bit curious on that one.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #44 on: November 12, 2008, 04:55:48 PM »

Spotted something when I was having a look at ship numbers built during the war to calculate the casualty %.

Seems to be either 2 more or 2 less Deweys than listed.
There were either 28 or 24 in service during the Amaris war. All of those are accounted for.
The TR built 6 more leaving the number in the class at 34 or 30 rather than the 32 listed.

The TR ship construction in the opening of the war is impressive.
4 DN, 6 BC, 25 CG, 6 FF, 6 DD, 10 Crv and that is exclusive of the Canon SL designs still in production...
1 Black Lion, 2 Luxor, 2 Sov Soy and 1 Riga lines. Even if these lines only completed a ship each it would still be almost 40 major warships built.

Compared to the efforts of the SS the TR almost outproduced them all combined!
CC - 2 DN, 18 transp, ? Crv.
DC - 30 Crv.
FS - 3 DN, ? FF, 9 DD, 11 Crv.
FWL - 41 CVL, ? transp.
LC - 5 BC, 20 transp, ? tank.

The DC and FWL were clearly on a warproduction strategy, lots of simple ships fast, while most of the rest were still building a peacetime mix.
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Re: Fanbook 4 – Technical Readout 2800
« Reply #3 on: February 16, 2010, 07:34:14 PM »

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #45 on: November 12, 2008, 07:14:04 PM »

I did the numbers somewhere and yes Terra does have an impressive industry. The Royal Sovereign class alone is impressive. I can't wait to detail the how if I ever get time.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #46 on: November 13, 2008, 02:16:14 AM »

Quote from: Takiro on November 12, 2008, 07:14:04 PM
The Royal Sovereign class alone is impressive.
Indeed they are, pity they were unable to put FCL armor on them, but I suspect many units will soon run around with patchwork and standard armorplating as the war drag on.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #47 on: November 13, 2008, 10:31:31 PM »

Such is life on the frontline... Shocked

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #48 on: November 15, 2008, 05:50:38 PM »

Hey folks I wanted to keep us on topic here, so I split off CJvR excellent suggestion. Please post errors in TRO2800 from now on. Wink

Link below for those interested.

http://www.btshattereddawn.com/forums/index.php?topic=888.0

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #49 on: November 16, 2008, 02:05:26 PM »

The LCN Gauntlet class refit adds 6000 tons of cargo from the HS conversion but that tonnage is missing from the stats.

Also you might consider mentioning 2787 in the LCN intro since that was the year the Lyran yards died on a scale not repeated in any other SS. Yeah the others are catching up it has taken them a decade to catch up to the carnage that hit the Lyrans. It is a quite spectacular event that deserves mentioning IMO.

Also IIRC the only yard building the TR Defender class cruisers, Kresters O'Niel yards, was described as producing them in "the early years of the SW" and that yard was disabled in 2786 (from the Titan text) - probably not enough time for even the Terran shipyards to build 25 more ships. Adding a production line to the Blue Nose's Lowell yards could easy plug that little inconsistency.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #50 on: November 24, 2008, 02:23:56 PM »

The ships with different weapons configurations like the Chesterton or the Audacious should probably have some mark in the stats as to what weaponry belongs on what variant.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #51 on: November 24, 2008, 04:30:31 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on November 16, 2008, 02:05:26 PM
Also IIRC the only yard building the TR Defender class cruisers, Kresters O'Niel yards, was described as producing them in "the early years of the SW" and that yard was disabled in 2786 (from the Titan text) - probably not enough time for even the Terran shipyards to build 25 more ships. Adding a production line to the Blue Nose's Lowell yards could easy plug that little inconsistency.

Funny about that...I wouldn't say it's an error....

Actually we have a precedent from TR2750 that the SLDF built 400 Sovetskii Soyuz in 8 years- which is 25 per year or it could be something else....

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #52 on: November 24, 2008, 04:46:56 PM »

True, but that was with the SL up and running at full speed with everything working at 100%. That the TR would be able to duplicate such a feat is doubtful with it's damaged yards, blasted subcontracters and dried up rawmaterial deliveries.

Indeed we might well ask why have Blue Nose not cranked out the customary 3 BB / year, it wasn't in quite as much crossfire as the Terran yards and should be more intact if we are to go by the pre-war production figures.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #53 on: November 24, 2008, 05:20:03 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on November 24, 2008, 04:46:56 PM
True, but that was with the SL up and running at full speed with everything working at 100%. That the TR would be able to duplicate such a feat is doubtful with it's damaged yards, blasted subcontracters and dried up rawmaterial deliveries.

Indeed we might well ask why have Blue Nose not cranked out the customary 3 BB / year, it wasn't in quite as much crossfire as the Terran yards and should be more intact if we are to go by the pre-war production figures.

You are making an assumption that the Republic built warships at it's maximum capacity.  The Republic may have wanted to build at a slower rate to hide it's true capabilities, making it less of a target.  Also keep in mind the warship program was a secret in 2785- Project Quicksilver- the new dropships, was a smoke screen for the warship program.  The Republic's production rate may have been more limited by their ability to hide the program then the production capabilities of the yards. The Defender in some ways was easier to hide in plain sight as the Republic could always claim they were salvaged SLDF ships and not productions, the same is not true of the Royal Soverign.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #54 on: November 25, 2008, 01:39:49 AM »

Perhaps, but then the Terran yards was the worst choise imaginable for producing allout when the TR had the more remote Titan and Mars facilities available. You could always hide SL designs so why not massproduce them instead if that was the case? Three Big-Macs / year or one R-S every other year...

CJvR Some more nits? « Reply #55 on: November 25, 2008, 01:54:03 AM »

Should the Vulcan and Catalyst be of the same size? The text describes them as having the same identical reactortype. (246)
Also the Cat is 760 meters in length? That is dimensions more fit for a ship twice her mass (249).

The Dewey class Amaris sent to hunt down his renegade October Revolution (253) is named in plural, Sullivans, it is not perhaps wrong but it reads a bit odd in the text.

"Royal Soverigns that the SLDF had order prior to" (267) shouldn't it be "had ordered" or "had on order"?


I will go away now... Smiley

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #56 on: November 25, 2008, 05:33:04 AM »

Quote from: CJvR on November 25, 2008, 01:39:49 AM
Perhaps, but then the Terran yards was the worst choise imaginable for producing allout when the TR had the more remote Titan and Mars facilities available.

Mars and Titan are really not that remote.  More importantly the goal of the Republic was to get as many facilities operational as possible, so that they did not have all of their eggs in one basket.

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You could always hide SL designs so why not massproduce them instead if that was the case? Three Big-Macs / year or one R-S every other year...

Because most of the SLDF designs suck.  Actually most of the designs the Republic put into service were SLDF designs, mainly ones that entered service just before the Coup.  This is more of a quality over quantity thing.

lrose Re: Some more nits? « Reply #57 on: November 25, 2008, 05:39:53 AM »

Quote from: CJvR on November 25, 2008, 01:54:03 AM
The Dewey class Amaris sent to hunt down his renegade October Revolution (253) is named in plural, Sullivans, it is not perhaps wrong but it reads a bit odd in the text.

The actual name of the ship is "The Sullivans".  The ship is named after 2 US Destroyers of the same name.  The ships were named for 5 brothers, the Sullivans, who all died serving on the light cruiser Juneau when it sunk in WW2.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #58 on: November 25, 2008, 05:45:07 AM »

Quote from: lrose
Mars and Titan are really not that remote...
Because most of the SLDF designs suck...
They are not orbiting the capital world of the Republic in full view of diplomatic staff and some 10 billion citizens, anyone with a moderatly strong telescope or perhaps even good eyesight would be able to tell roughly what was going on. In distances Mars and Titan isn't that remote but in terms of actual visibility they are way off from Terra.

Most SL designs do indeed suck, but the Black Lion, Luxor and Big-Mac are acceptable and they were in production.

Sorry but I dont think cranking out 25 CLEs from the Terran yards in roughly two years is a very realistic proposition, works better if either the damage to the yards didn't halt production (of that line at least) or if a second yard also produced the type.
   
CJvR Re: Some more nits? « Reply #59 on: November 25, 2008, 05:48:03 AM »

Quote from: lrose
The actual name of the ship is "The Sullivans".  The ship is named after 2 US Destroyers of the same name.  The ships were named for 5 brothers, the Sullivans, who all died serving on the light cruiser Juneau when it sunk in WW2.
Ouch! All five of them lost on one ship...
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« Reply #4 on: February 16, 2010, 09:45:34 PM »

wolfcannon Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #60 on: December 01, 2008, 11:33:55 AM »

yup it was sunk by a jap sub.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #61 on: December 08, 2008, 12:15:41 PM »

In the Capella - Delhi Warships on page 70 it says that D-W operated a more advanced yard at Carver yet in the TR yard list on page 244 it states that the yards over Carver V are an old Krester operation.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #62 on: December 08, 2008, 06:22:28 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on December 08, 2008, 12:15:41 PM
In the Capella - Delhi Warships on page 70 it says that D-W operated a more advanced yard at Carver yet in the TR yard list on page 244 it states that the yards over Carver V are an old Krester operation.


There were multiple shipyards at Carver V- the Delhi facility did not survive the Coup- the Krester's one became a maintance yard.   TR2800 only represents what survived to 2785, not the shipyards as they were in 2765.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #63 on: February 16, 2009, 02:32:24 PM »

Micro nit...

The "Deller, Bingham & Fouts" company is shortened to DS&F in the Atreus yard section. Later it is DB&F.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #64 on: February 16, 2009, 02:35:49 PM »

Good stuff CJvR, we are still working on the TRO revision. I'll let Knightmare bring you up to date on the progress. Our next release Battlezone Lambrecht is looking good. Hopefully we will be on time but we will be looking for help with scenario mechanics.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #65 on: February 22, 2009, 05:46:54 AM »

Another minor nit.
In the Titan yard, last line, it says "for the Juggernaut assault" should probably be Juggernaut class assaultship?

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #66 on: March 03, 2009, 02:20:54 AM »

Not sure if these nits were noted earlier:

The short range standard damage values for the Dione side and aft laser bays are wrong, should be 60 rather than 42 and 20 rather than 2.

Last two lines in the center column of the Dauntless text "use all its weapons its" - one its to many.

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #67 on: April 03, 2009, 05:49:25 AM »

Oh while reading up a bit for the Okha design I noticed that the Bellerophon is armed with a guass rifle. (Aft bay)

CJvR Where do Summer belong? « Reply #68 on: April 30, 2009, 04:06:31 AM »

This might have been mentioned earlier but I just noticed it.

Where do Summer belong?

The yards at Summer are listed in the Lyran section but the world is on the Terran side of the border on all the maps.
Also the Sudeten yards are listed twice. Once after Skye and once after Tharkad.

Takiro Re: Where do Summer belong? « Reply #69 on: April 30, 2009, 09:01:18 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on April 30, 2009, 04:06:31 AM
Where do Summer belong?

The yards at Summer are listed in the Lyran section but the world is on the Terran side of the border on all the maps.

This is a big mistake here. Could be our first direct contradiction. Embarrassed

So we need a solution as Summer is indeed a Terran planet but if I remember correctly it was added to the Commonwealth's shipyards to give Ioto Galactic Enterprises the proper amount of facilities. Also Project Phoenix has the Summer facility (Terran by the way) building Jumpship parts which contradicts the Lyran entry 2785 that says it (Lyran there) makes Buccaneer Dropship, Monarch Dropship, and Merchant Jumpship.

This solution should be a two part one. Summer is Terran facility and should likely be listed as so in TRO2800. Next, the (Summer) Iota facility should be kept but moved to another location. Thoughts?

Quote from: CJvR on April 30, 2009, 04:06:31 AM
Also the Sudeten yards are listed twice. Once after Skye and once after Tharkad.

Absolutely correct, this is another whoops. A double post. We shall have to take one out.

lrose Re: Where do Summer belong? « Reply #70 on: April 30, 2009, 09:58:15 PM »

Quote from: Takiro on April 30, 2009, 09:01:18 PM
This is a big mistake here. Could be our first direct contradiction. Embarrassed

So we need a solution as Summer is indeed a Terran planet but if I remember correctly it was added to the Commonwealth's shipyards to give Ioto Galactic Enterprises the proper amount of facilities. Also Project Phoenix has the Summer facility (Terran by the way) building Jumpship parts which contradicts the Lyran entry 2785 that says it (Lyran there) makes Buccaneer Dropship, Monarch Dropship, and Merchant Jumpship.

This solution should be a two part one. Summer is Terran facility and should likely be listed as so in TRO2800. Next, the (Summer) Iota facility should be kept but moved to another location. Thoughts?

Part of the problem is that in canon BT they changed the map- the SLSB p. 179 lists the worlds that were part of the TH and taken over by each state- Summer is not on the list- the TH and LC shared ownership of Mizar, Syrma, Galatea and Blue Diamond- which creates a map that leaves Summer in the LC. What it looks like from the map in HB:HS they gave the LC Symra in exchange for Summer- not sure if this was an accident or done on purpose. If we keep Summer as a TR world, then the easiest solution is to move Ioto Galactic to another planet in the Federation of Skye- I would suggest Vega, Zebebelgenubi, Yed Prior, Edaaich or Kimball II.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #71 on: April 30, 2009, 10:12:58 PM »

I still should have caught the error though. Oh well, I'd like to keep Summer as Terran world even though it was a Lyran world before the Coup (see Changing Border write up in Project Phoenix). Like wise Zebebelgenubi was a Terran world which again in the write up got exchanged as part of the Centuran Accords. Therefore I wouldn't have them at Zebebelgenubi. I do like your other suggestions Irose. Vega, Yed Prior, Edaaich or Kimball II. Especially Vega. Gonna do some research though.

CJvR Re: Where do Summer belong? « Reply #72 on: May 01, 2009, 05:01:46 AM »

Quote from: lrose
If we keep Summer as a TR world, then the easiest solution is to move Ioto Galactic to another planet in the Federation of Skye- I would suggest Vega, Zebebelgenubi, Yed Prior, Edaaich or Kimball II.
Quote from: Takiro
Like wise Zebebelgenubi was a Terran world which again in the write up got exchanged as part of the Centuran Accords. Therefore I wouldn't have them at Zebebelgenubi.
I have to disagree with you there Takiro. Zebebelgenubi might be the best choise there is just because it was exchanged. Not only would it be a nice little bone to throw to the LC wolf but with a yard present there suddenly are genuine strategic reasons to do so, which you hinted at in the Centauri Accords IIRC.

A system with a yard facility as well as an uncomfortable location right in the heart of Skye would be of great concern to the Lyrans. Anything within 30 LY is an uncomfortable location regarding a single world really. If the LC was that concerned about Skye, the planet, then they should have demanded Syrma and Galatea as well in the border adjustment to puch the border a jump away from Skye, but they didn't. Which IMPO was a bit of a weak spot in the security concerns mentioned in the border adjustment.

However a yard at Zebebelgenubi to support future fleet operations would be a major asset to an invasion of the entire Skye province not just Skye the planet, and thus a huge potential threat. So the security angle in the Centauri accords would be greatly enhanced by placing a yard in the Zebebelgenubi system and then hand it over to the LC.


PS: The map in Project-Phoenix have Syrma as a Lyran system while the main map and the one at the back of Merc-Guild have it as a Terran world.

Rainbow 6 Re: Where do Summer belong? « Reply #73 on: May 01, 2009, 06:40:45 AM »

Quote from: CJvR on May 01, 2009, 05:01:46 AM
I have to disagree with you there Takiro. Zebebelgenubi might be the best choise there is just because it was exchanged. Not only would it be a nice little bone to throw to the LC wolf but with a yard present there suddenly are genuine strategic reasons to do so, which you hinted at in the Centauri Accords IIRC.

A system with a yard facility as well as an uncomfortable location right in the heart of Skye would be of great concern to the Lyrans. Anything within 30 LY is an uncomfortable location regarding a single world really. If the LC was that concerned about Skye, the planet, then they should have demanded Syrma and Galatea as well in the border adjustment to puch the border a jump away from Skye, but they didn't. Which IMPO was a bit of a weak spot in the security concerns mentioned in the border adjustment.

However a yard at Zebebelgenubi to support future fleet operations would be a major asset to an invasion of the entire Skye province not just Skye the planet, and thus a huge potential threat. So the security angle in the Centauri accords would be greatly enhanced by placing a yard in the Zebebelgenubi system and then hand it over to the LC.


PS: The map in Project-Phoenix have Syrma as a Lyran system while the main map and the one at the back of Merc-Guild have it as a Terran world.

I agree with all of the above giving the Lyran's a system which makes the Isle of Skye strategically more defecible would be a big help in having the Commonwealth sign up to the accords.

CJvR Where does Aldebaran belong? « Reply #74 on: May 10, 2009, 01:16:42 PM »

Found another Summer for you.

The Yards at Aldebaran are listed in the CC secion of TRO2800 but the system is in the TR and listed without mentioning the yards in Proj-Pho p67.
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« Reply #5 on: February 16, 2010, 09:49:46 PM »

lrose Re: Where does Aldebaran belong? « Reply #75 on: May 10, 2009, 05:30:23 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on May 10, 2009, 01:16:42 PM
Found another Summer for you.

The Yards at Aldebaran are listed in the CC secion of TRO2800 but the system is in the TR and listed without mentioning the yards in Proj-Pho p67.

The map in the SLSB looks like Aldebaran may have been in the TH, but the system is not listed on p. 179 as one of the worlds the CC took from the TH.  Also in the 2310s Aldebaran applied to Liao for protection (HLSB p. 17), we know the CC controlled the world in 2785- the marik militia destroyed capellan jumpship yards there as one of the first moves of the SWs. (HMSB p. 90). FM:FWL also refers to this operation as saying the 13th Marik Militia struck the Capellan world of Aldebaran.

It is possible that the CC captured the world after the SLDF left, but since it is not mentioned in the world listing for the TH in the SLSB I would be inclined to think that it was always a Capellan holding.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #76 on: May 10, 2009, 05:45:41 PM »

I will have to do some checking but I'm almost sure that Aldebaran was bartered to exclusive Terran control as a result of the Centuran Accords. Perhaps the yards were moved as part of the agreement to the Liao system say? I will research it though!

LordGrayson Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #77 on: May 10, 2009, 06:13:19 PM »

Aldebaran might have been a joint held world during the SL times and switched to liao when the SL failed didn't have to take a planet over that u already have troops on and a claim to.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #78 on: May 10, 2009, 06:16:17 PM »

Quote from: LordGrayson on May 10, 2009, 06:13:19 PM
Aldebaran might have been a joint held world during the SL times and switched to liao when the SL failed didn't have to take a planet over that u already have troops on and a claim to.

It's not listed as one of the jointly held worlds in the SLSB.

LordGrayson Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #79 on: May 10, 2009, 06:21:48 PM »

Most of the SB's are full of errors so either liao's wrong or SL's is wrong got to pick one.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #80 on: May 10, 2009, 07:38:23 PM »

Actually if you read some planetary descriptions (MWDA in particular) there are many other shared worlds not listed in the SLSB.

Rainbow 6 Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #81 on: May 11, 2009, 05:10:03 PM »

I think we need to have it as a Capellan world as the CCAF desperately needs the military production sites that are there.

CJvR Firebird production? « Reply #82 on: May 17, 2009, 01:15:12 PM »

In the fluff for the Firebird it says it went into production in 2785 at Mars but it is not on the lists for either 2785 or 2800. Error or have production ended?

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #83 on: May 17, 2009, 03:14:24 PM »

Nope its there but we missed it!

To explain the date 2785 should really be cleared up cause it does encompass 12 months, 365 days. It should be prior to the start of hostilities from a Terran point of view. For them the Succession War began when the Draconis Combine launched Operation Katana in September 2785. This was done to provide a pre-war picture for interested players. There is a lot of confusion in on my part some times about this and I wonder how much fact checking it would withstand. Nonetheless that is the intent of 2785. As such the Firebird was not built prior to (2785) the start of hostilities but shortly after.

Now second part of the Firebird production tale has to do with its original name, the Phoenix. As you can clearly see TRO2800 page 245 (of the PDF) under Blue Nose Clippership lists the Phoenix in production 2800. You see I made the last second change to avoid confusion (unsuccessful in this instance) with the Phoenix class Aerospace Fighter appearing in Project Phoenix. Phoenix was appearing everywhere you see and I thought it would be a nice touch to change the name while sticking with the theme. Recently TPTB have done their best to confuse the situation introducing their own Phoenix class Aerospace Fighter for the RWR in TRO3075 so I'm glad there is one less design named the Phoenix.  Wink

So CJvR the solution in this case is to change Phoenix class Assault Ship (2 mentions) on page 245 to the Firebird class Assault Ship.

Next up I'll try to tackle the Aldebaran yards issue.  Wink

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #84 on: May 19, 2009, 11:13:41 AM »

Noted. Keep the Errata coming.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #85 on: May 19, 2009, 11:19:13 AM »

I'm thinking the easiest fix for the Aldeberan issue is to have the shipyard moved to Liao. It is nearby and perhaps we could throw in a nod to this. How about the CCAF securing the yard during the opening phases of the Amaris Coup and deciding to move them to a more secure location, Liao. Thoughts??

BTW Knightmare, I'm thinking of making some additions to the revised copy. Any objections?

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #86 on: May 19, 2009, 11:33:13 AM »

Why bother moving it at all?

Is there any need for the yards ever to have been on Aldebaran rather than Liao?

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #87 on: May 19, 2009, 12:27:51 PM »

Factually that is a good question CJvR. I will have to consult Irose and my assembly notes on why we decided to put the yards over Aldeberan originally. There must have been a reason. I probably should have remembered that Aldeberan was a "Terran" world and avoided the whole issue but hey.

I generally like to acknowledge errors with such tidbits. I usually have fun with such continuity issues presented by canon rather than just sentencing them to oblivion.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #88 on: May 19, 2009, 02:33:16 PM »

Quote from: Takiro on May 19, 2009, 12:27:51 PM
Factually that is a good question CJvR. I will have to consult Irose and my assembly notes on why we decided to put the yards over Aldeberan originally. There must have been a reason. I probably should have remembered that Aldeberan was a "Terran" world and avoided the whole issue but hey.

Because it is from Canon-it is mentioned in HMSB p. 90, FM:FWL p. 61

Also note that Aldebaran may have a mech factory here in 2785 (HLSB p. 107) but this is questionable and can ignored if we want. (the mech factory table in the HLSB has several "problems"- it's missing Styk, Nanking & Capella- I've always changed Sirius to Capella, Betelgeuse to Nanking and Aldebaran to Styk that way every mech producing world is accounted for in 3025- other then this table I have seen no references to a mech factory on Aldebaran)

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #89 on: May 19, 2009, 04:00:55 PM »

Again we could have Liao clear it out prior to the transfer.
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« Reply #6 on: February 16, 2010, 09:53:56 PM »

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #90 on: November 01, 2009, 05:03:24 AM »

This line in the DCA strategy section reads a bit odd IMPO.

Since its inception the Admiralty has focused its energies on developing superior first strike capabilities. Kurita naval doctrine stresses this aggressive philosophy which calls for the swift destruction of any threat vessels before they can respond effectively.

Threatening or hostile would work better?

CJvR Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #91 on: December 09, 2009, 06:15:45 PM »
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In the CCN Andurien class deployment section using "all" in the "Currently all twelve Anduriens remain..." is a bit odd since 7 ships were in fact lost.

lrose Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #92 on: December 09, 2009, 07:36:30 PM »

Quote from: CJvR on December 09, 2009, 06:15:45 PM
In the CCN Andurien class deployment section using "all" in the "Currently all twelve Anduriens remain..." is a bit odd since 7 ships were in fact lost.

It's especially odd since that is not what what I wrote in the final draft of the entry. In that version it said "Currently 12 Anduriens remain in service with the CCN. "  Guess we can just change it back in the next revision.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #93 on: December 09, 2009, 08:30:24 PM »

The revision is on my to do list.  Wink

muttley Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #94 on: December 09, 2009, 11:28:23 PM »

TR2800U?  Wink

Rainbow 6 Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #95 on: December 10, 2009, 04:45:12 AM »

Or TRO:2800Revised  Wink

Hessian Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #96 on: December 10, 2009, 01:00:01 PM »

Or TRO:2800 Revised Update Wink

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #97 on: December 10, 2009, 05:16:10 PM »

Little bit of A, little of B?...

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #98 on: December 10, 2009, 05:50:12 PM »

C - All of the Above!

muttley Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #99 on: December 11, 2009, 12:20:26 PM »

TR2801!

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #100 on: January 02, 2010, 10:13:32 PM »

Is there any way to get all of this thread's errata in a single text or word file. I'm just about finished and want to make sure I've covered everything. Thank you!

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #101 on: January 02, 2010, 11:01:48 PM »

I'll see what I can do real quick.

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #102 on: January 03, 2010, 01:22:54 AM »

Sounds good. I still have two sections to format in the new book, then a final text edit, anything I missed here and then one final run through with some (possible) new art. Then it's done. Also, any new or modified RS I'd like to get my hands on so I can release an updated version of RS2800 should it be warranted. Thanks!

Knightmare Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #103 on: January 03, 2010, 01:23:31 AM »

I might also have the first full chapter of the Review finished by next week and available as a sneak peak download.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #104 on: January 10, 2010, 02:02:23 PM »

Don't know if this has been already but the Black Ball class Dropship is not list it the Table of Contents.
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« Reply #7 on: February 16, 2010, 09:55:22 PM »

CJvR Just a paste, lest it be forgotten... « Reply #105 on: January 28, 2010, 04:14:51 PM »

Quote from: lrose on November 17, 2008, 08:05:20 PM
I would get Takiro to sign off on these but I would make the following updates:
Emerald Battlecruiser- the number in class to 45. (I don't think any changes need to be made to the fluff)

Defender Cruiser - we should either change the fluff (deployment section) to say the CC has deployed a total of 12 Defenders, or change the 2785 deployment table to 8 ships.

Himeko Corvette- we should lower the number on the 2785 deployment table to maybe 35 or so.

The Same does not necessarily need to be re-written- the fluff says construction ended soon after the start of the SW so maybe none were built after 2785.

Kujira- this probably represents their reconstruction from a transport to a warship, rather then new construction.

Igarashii- We can hand wave this one- the 60th ship was launched in 2785, the 61st was due to be launched in 2787 but was destroyed when the shipyards were destroyed in 2787. (production is said to be very slow)

The Vester production is already accounted for- 65 in 2785, a total of 72 ships in class

Aristotale- we can say that the aristotale production was converted to the Themistocles.

Nemesis- not sure how to handle this - it may be best to remove it from the product list at Angell II and Oriente, or say the last ones were launched in 2785 and then production halted.

I think that takes care of all the discrepancies.

CJvR Yard ownership? « Reply #106 on: January 31, 2010, 07:17:18 AM »

Who owns the yards over New Earth?

In FM:TR it is the NETC (p154) but in TRO2800 it is Dassault-Shimmone (p243 & Dewey fluff) as it is in PP.

Takiro Re: Fanbook 5 – Technical Readout 2800 « Reply #107 on: January 31, 2010, 08:19:26 AM »

Both are correct. Read NETC corporate profile they purchased Dassault Shimmon as their shipbuilding subsidary so they are now a division of NETC.
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Perhaps not an error but...
« Reply #8 on: February 23, 2010, 04:41:49 PM »

In the FSNS fluff the FSNS is consistently refered to as the "AFFS navy".

Since the FSNS have been given a name why not use it? It would sound better IMPO.

ps the DCA is also refered to as the "DCMS navy" in that text.
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« Reply #9 on: February 23, 2010, 06:03:58 PM »

That is just the individual writer changing things up. FSNS may sound good but over and over not so much.
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« Reply #10 on: March 13, 2010, 07:30:49 PM »

The FL/FR have 3 LRM20 listed but ammo and firepower indicate that it should be just 2.
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